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Listed below are the titles of the stories I have written with a brief outline of each story. (The sort of thing one finds on the inside jacket of books) Also, I have added background information that led to the writing of the story. All the artwork contained on this page was created by me. The stories are listed in a chronological order according to when they were written. The earliest ones are at the top. The very bottom of this page also lists several stories that are in the HOPPER as it were. Story length is given in actual page length and in the size of the file as saved in Word 2000. This is done to help readers find the length of story they prefer. The Coding system 'loosely' follows the one used by ASSM (alt.sex.stories.moderated). Codes in CAPS & RED LETTERS are meant as a warning to the potential reader. NO SEX : This code refers to the physical, bump and grind, lick and squirt graphic description type. There may still be sex or 'adult activity' in the story, but it is not the major focus, and is usually dealt with in quick passing. ASSD Satire : This code refers to a story which pokes fun at the people and/or issues we discuss in the newsgroup alt.sex.stories.d
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Moonlight In The
Barn
Teenage Bernadette sneaks out of the plantation manse one night to admire the black, nude body of a slave named Ja'Har, who has been manacled in the barn for punishment. Her combined lust and skittishness, and Ja'Har's arousal, makes for arousing reading in itself:
The rest of the encounter shows the same mixture of delicacy and animal heat. Afterwards, in teenage hopefulness Bernadette frees the slave from his chains so he can deflower her. But Ja'Har has other plans. He tricks her and strings her up instead, taking her virginity, and afterwards notes grimly:
But the author plays yet another trick on us, as Ja'Har frees his victim to act as his guide to the plantation house, which he intends to raid for clothing and supplies for his escape. But both are betrayed and kidnapped by a third party, who I'll keep a surprise. It's only in this last section that I discovered the story was an SF one set on a colony planet, as prior to this it read like the pre-Civil War south. Aside from that nit (if Ja'Har is an alien, he should be delineated as such much earlier in the story) I enjoyed the chapter a lot. A female-centered coming-of-age story, but a deeply sexual one.
Background to Story: Being the avid reader that I am, I went down to my local library to find something interesting to read during the long hot nights. I found two books. One was a James Bond type thriller titled 'Hopscotch' - a very good book that was later turned into a funny movie of the same name. The second, was a romance novel written by Kathleen E. Woodiwiss titled 'Ashes in the Wind'. While checking out the books, the librarian, an older lady, who's main goal in life was to include everyone into her own personal midlife crisis, questioned me in a nasal squawk, "You're taking out THIS book?" This was my first post to ASS*. After lurking for over a year, I felt I was ready to hit the big time and post something to the newsgroup. The story, originally entitled 'Moonlight in the Barn', was my attempt to write a very graphic and erotic love scene between a slave and a young female. The original ending for the short story left the two main characters, Bernadette and Ja'Har, in limbo as it were, because it ended when they were walking out of the barn. I felt there was nothing wrong with the ending because I had only intended it to be a one shot love scene. Several readers requested a more conclusive ending to the story. So, I returned to the story, several months later and 'tacked' on an ending that would close up the story in one simple chapter. The readers were, to say the least, not very receptive to the surprise ending of having the younger sister invalved in arranging for Bernadette and Ja'Har to be kidnapped by 'SPACE PIRATES'. The twist of the younger sister was the readers felt they could live with, if it was explained in more detail, but the sudden appearance of space pirates, carrying laser guns and communicators, felt like a betrayal to the early development of the story which made the readers believe they were reading a historical romance set in the 1600's. For over a year I tried to reconstruct the story into a sci-fi romance so that it would if in with the 'tacked' on ending to the story. Every attempt was worse than the predecessor. Finally, in 2001, I abandoned the story in frustration. Over the past year I have received emails from readers asking if I was ever going to finish the story. Reluctantly, I decided to reread the story once more to see if there was a chance of fixing the ungodly mess. The biggest flaw in the story, now titled 'Bernadette Unchained' and several chapters long, was that I had tried a quick fix to the original ending, heard from the readers that it was at best disconjoining with the opening of the story, and had as a result, stubbornly tried to bash the story into some form that would fit the 'tacked' on ending to what had become the first chapter. All this because I hadn't the stomach to cut away what the readers and my own inner self was trying to tell me about the story. Well, I've done it. Everything that was 'tacked' on and added afterwards has been stripped from the story. The story, as it is posted now, is the simple love scene between two people, which ends with them walking out of the barn. I have removed any hints or slights of reference that might be of a futuristic nature, and returned the story to the time period it should have remained in all along - the 1600's. Is the story going to continue? I don't know for certain. But if it does, it will stay within the realm of the 1600's of the West Indies. (with maybe a side-excursion to the middle east) Right now I am in the process of writing up a computer game for a friend based on the heyday of the Caribbean pirates. Hopefully, this will help fuel the creative juices to perhaps continue the story, a little further.
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TABLE FOR ONE
Background to story:
The inspiration for this short story came from the continued posting at that time by members of ASSD of who they thought should be added or removed from the list A&E made of the supposedly 100 most influential people of the millenium. Although the party was meant to be a continuing flow of interactions between authors, this story, which added some of the antics that were happening in other posts for the party, was meant to be read as a single post while I figured out a way to introduce my alter ego, Aquillae, who was going to show up at the end of the party. Unfortunately, I got the flu, and spent the last two weeks of 1999 in bed. So much for that wild celebration to ring in the new millenium. No, wait, doesn't the new millenium start January 1, 2001? (So I left the intro of Aquillae until the Summer Solstice. There was going to be one, right guys?) |
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SUMMER SOLSTICE 2000
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RACHEL'S DAY
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Testamalogical, Antidisestablishmentarianism & Other Silly Words:
CODES: Testamalogical, Antidisestablishmentarianism & Other Silly Words As filming is slatted to restart on the big budget production of 'Bernadette Unchained', the director, Aquillae, is busy flipping through an old dictionary from 1957 looking for obscure, pointless words to unleash on an unsuspecting future opponent in the write club duel's of ASSD. Little does Aquillae realize that his giggles of vocabulary glee are overheard by the two young starlets of the production - Bernadette and Raquel.
Background to Story:
The idea for this story came about during the fall of 2000, when everyone was still interested in competing in Write Club Duels. Taking the WC format of having each writer submit three words that had to be used in the story, I took the idea to the next step by having my inept counterpart, Aquillae, plotting and scheming to use obscure and difficult words in his next challenge. The words used in the title are, believe it or not, actual English words. The use of the words in the title was inspired by the British TV Series, 'Yes, Prime Minister'. The TV series excelled in the use of the English language as the driving force behind most of its comedy. My apologies to any Peter Noon fans before they start reading this story. |
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Fundraiser Drive
Background to Story:
The Challenge was issued by Hecate as a way of celebrating the arrival of the second server for ASSTR. As I recall, there were no real set guidelines to what must be included or may not be included in the story. The idea was to get as may authors involved as possible. This story, which of course was late, deals with a sort of telethon type fundraiser for ASSTR. The idea was to show a behind the scenes look at the filming of a promotional segment for ASSTR. At the time this story was written, the group was in an Australian frame of mind. (If there is such a thing) talking about Australian Football, not to be confused with Rugby, and Foster's Beer, the official brew of Aussie land. |
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Karen's Diary
Background to Story: Not only was I facing the challenge of going up against Katie, but this would be the first time I would write a story dealing with blackmail and a lesbian character. Although I consider this one of my weaker works, (I don't think I managed to explain the situations between the characters convincingly to the reader), it was the straw that convinced me to focus some of my writing efforts into the genre of the high school days. |
Pages - 11. Length - 40Kb.
A DAY @ ASSD
Background of Story: The story itself was initially inspired by the song, 'Garden Party'. (I hope that's the title. I think it was sung by R. Nelson) Although there is no sex in the story, Hecate does appear in a very sexy leather outfit. And, if you look really close, you can perhaps see just a hint of skin among those strategically placed bubbles on Aquillae. (If that is the sort of thing you're interested in seeing) My main goal was to try and add as many ASSD personalities and as many subjects the group was currently discussing as possible into a coherent story, while still following the Easter theme. Did I succeed? I'll let you be the judge. But of all the things I've written over the past ten years, both for the net and print, this one story was the most enjoyable one of all. PS. The little cartoon was drawn back in the early eighties during my high school years. The question - "So when's Easter?" comes form the fact that Easter, unlike Christmas, is never a set date of the calendar year. |
The Other Side of the Bathroom Mirror:
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The Other Side of the Bathroom Mirror
Background to Story: As my friend once explained to a college professor who asked where I was after missing several weeks of class. Quote: "He fell through his bathroom mirror while shaving." Needless to say the professor, who had no sense of humor, was not amused. |
B-MOVIE BABY 2.0: CODES:
Pages - 96. Length - 235Kb. FM, MF(Black Male/White Female), FMMMM, FFM, FM(Black Male/White Female), fm, MMMFF (Oral, Anal, Inter-racial, group orgy, first time, uniforms, light restraint, oversized body parts, Sci-FI) ( GRAPHIC SEX , Satire of Adult Films) B-MOVIE BABY In the not to distant future, all parts performed in films are acted by robots, who are created to resemble past great performers. At a small, no budget production company that specializes in using these technological wonders to make steamy, graphic adult films, the director and his assistant are preparing to preview the opening scene of their latest effort to a potential investor in the hopes of securing the funds they need to complete the project. Unfortunately for Paul McGowen, the director, one of his leading men suffers some internal pump problems during the height of his sex scene and the scene has to be cut short before the investor can view the final 'money shot'. Given only one day to rework and restage the opening scene, the pressure is now on for Marcy, the young assistant, who also has the daunting task of finding a replacement for the defective male robot. Unfortunately for Paul and Marcy, their production studio is hit by a very powerful bolt of lightning during the night. The burst of energy that surges through the building activates all of the robots stored in the building's lab, and scrambles their programming. After self-rebooting, the robots default to their original programming of search and fuck. What follows during that long, wet night in the city, is an orgy of sexual gratification that would make even the Emperor Caligula blush. Finding her robots gone when she returns to work the next morning, Marcy is desperate to find someone, anyone to replace the needed robots for the opening scene that needs to be filmed that morning. Reluctantly, she is forced to rely on the human staff at the production company to complete the scene.
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CODES: (The following review of the story was written by Crimson Dragon.)
Crimson Reviews - #2 - 23-Jul-2002 http://members.tripod.com/files/Authors/Dr/wwwagon_Of_Crimson
The Longest Shot (gooey satire)
{Aquillae}
The future of humanity lies,
literally, in Freddy's hands.
Folks, this story is seriously
funny. Aquillae has a real
Technically, the story stands
nicely. There are a few errors...(By the way, nice imagery, anyway, Aquillae)
Overall, though, don't take the
technical critique too seriously
Go read it.
Technical : 8
Background to Story: Figuring that everyone would be focusing on writing a typical mushy, soppy, Romance style story, I chose, as seems to be my pattern, a silly satire of both the challenge guidelines and the new code that was introduced especially for the challenge. The new code, which caused a little friction in the writing group, was labeled wl. This was to stand for wedded lust. A few people took exception to the new code. I, myself, saw the inclusion of the code as a unfortunate narrowing of the potential stories. The code, wl, all but segregated the stories to the realm of the heterosexual world, leaving out what would have been, in my opinion, some interesting stories dealing with either a gay or lesbian couple seeking to conceive a child of their own.
The opening paragraph, describing myself standing out in the mists of the
world and pondering the great questions of life, was my way of thumbing my nose at the new
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CODES: Background to Story: The following story, along with the story, 'The Writing Assignment', are variations on a single theme. The theme - an erotic writer dealing with a reader. This story, is told from the reader's perspective. 'The Writing Assignment', is told from the erotic writer's view point.
Story Outline:
Jimmy and his friends chose to search out the writer. A brief excerpt from the story: So, where the hell is this bitch? Its just a little past five, Jimmy Bradshaw called back over his shoulder as he patiently watched the chat window that was open on his computer screen. Give her a few minutes. It was actually now eighteen minutes past five on a Thursday afternoon. The gang, friends of Jimmys from before grade school, were hanging out in his bedroom playing video games and waiting for Miss. Kimberly KupKakes, the author of Library Lesbians, to enter the private chat room. Miss. KupKakes had suggested the chat room, the day, and the time in her reply to Jimmys email requesting an interview for a school project.
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CODES: Background to Story: The following story, along with the story, 'An Interview with an Erotic Writer', are variations on a single theme. The theme - an erotic writer dealing with a reader. This story, is told from the writer's perspective. 'An Interview with an Erotic Writer', is told from the reader's view point.
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A brief excerpt from the story: Miss Sarah Robinson glanced up from her paper work and observed the fidgeting youth. Inwardly she smiled to herself. Never before had she seen Mr. Cool rattled and jumping like a smalltime crook caught with his hands in the cookie jar. Although she would have loved to prolong the torture, enabling her to exact some small revenge for Mr. Marcellos disruptive behavior during her class, Sarahs good nature stopped her. Besides, she had other means to punish the young teen besides silence. A shiver of excitement rushed through her young body. Her nipples tightened and brushed against the lace fabric of her bra as she quickly went through the steps of her plan in her mind. It was wicked. Perhaps even grounds for dismissal should her student tell anyone about her little joke. But she was certain, Mr. Cool, would appreciate the joke. She glanced over at her prey, and when his dark eyes darted over to the clock, she quickly unbuttoned the top three buttons on her silk white blouse.
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