Loliwood Studios: Child Erotica at its Best

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Kimmy Jo is my little Ebony Queen. That has the most beautiful eyes,
I have ever seen.

With her rich, dark, velvety skin,
that with one touch, it will turn your heart to sin.

I want to kiss her from head to toe,
even if she is only twelve years old!

And when she sits on my lap
maybe it's my thoughts that need a slap!

But if innocents is Gold,
she will be poor at thirteen years old!

This is the poem of my Little Ebony Queen,
The most beautiful Angel I have ever seen!!

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A Very Bad Poem

For the life of me I can't figure out why some of the worst writers think they are good poets. Your first line, where you should be setting the theme of your poem, you refer to your Ebony Queen as THAT, not She. You've reduced your Queen to an object, a thing, something not even worth thinking of as human. Small words can make a BIG impact on your writing. For someone you're pretending to worship in your poem, you quickly told us what you really think of Kimmy Jo with a simple word misused.

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Ebony Queen

by Wolfdog