Bathtime Buddies, Part 2

[ g, 1st, pedo, oral, pett ]

by Speedy

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Published: 31-May-2013

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I soon learned that Katie's older brother/pimp was named Jason. Their father had left years ago and their mother had taken a job out of town as soon as Jason had finished High School. There were no jobs in the area so she had little choice. Jason was left to run the store during the week. He had actually made some improvements and had the store making a better profit. He had a head for business as i was learning.

Katie had grabbed a robe and made a dash for her room.

You need to take it easy on her, up till now about all she has done is let guy guys give her a bath. She tried to suck some cock but she didn't like it much. "This idiot wanted her to swallow the whole thing, she's to small for that. You can try to penetrate her but if it looks like you are hurting her please stop."

I had my marching orders and Jason had my $200, he gestured towards the door, "have fun"

i knocked on the door. From inside a soft voice invited me to enter. She was wearing pajamas the kind with feet, she sat on the edge of a rather tall bed. Like everything else here the bed was old, it sat next to a window and light streamed in from the west diffused a bit in spots by a by a large tree outside. we were on the second floor so there seemed like little chance of being noticed.

"Katie you are a sweet girl, I don't want you to anything your not sure about." I wanted her as badly as i had wanted anything but i didn't want to hurt her.

"I think i know what to do, Bubby showed me a couple movies." She was still calling her brother Bubby, my heart raced, i wasn't sure i was going to make it. "Do you want me to lick your thing first?" she seemed apprehensive.

"Jason said you didn't like that very much so why not skip to the part where I lick you?" she scrunched up her face and looked at me like i was crazy. "Why do you want to do that, I thought you just stuck your thing in there."

"I think you will enjoy it if you let me try, and it will help relax you for when i stick my thing in." I decide to use her words, it sounded less threatening than saying fuck all the time. "OK what ever you think, do you want me to take off my clothes now?"

She stood up on the bed and dropped her pants. watching her pull her little feet out of the pajama feet was a bigger turn on than i expected. Her feet could not have been more than a size 2 or 3, with the tiniest little toes.

I grabbed a stool and sat down next to the bed. I asked her to slide over to me. I placed her on her back with her butt right at the edge of the mattress. I simply folded her legs back and her pussy opened right up. it was pure and pink like nothing else I had ever seen her pale skin had just a hint of freckles even down here.

With the natural light from the windows to light my way i started to lick around her opening. With my index fingers i folded back the soft flesh even more, she was trembling a little bit so i stopped. "You are so beautiful, Katie, are you ok?"

"Yes, just a little embarrassed" she giggled sounding a bit nervous. "nobody ever saw my little place like that before. After she calmed down i continued. As i probed with my tongue she started to respond. My fingers of my left hand continued to hold back the soft skin of her pussy. With my right hand i elevated her a bit more and started to explore her butt with my fingers.

She tensed up a bit when my middle finger slid between the cheeks of her little ass. She yelped a little when the tip of my middle finger slid into her tiny butt hole. I continued to probe her pussy with my tongue as i worked her butt with my finger.

"Ahh, ahhhh...... what is happening to me.....Ahhhh...ohhh dont stop" she started to thrash around. I looked up in time to see her working her tiny breasts with her fingers. "Whats making that happen?" she demanded. Her pussy was really wet now. She arched her back and I probed as deep as i could with my tongue. "My place never did this before.......ugghhh ughhh, what is it? Why is it doing that?

Then she tensed up for a moment before collapsing on her back. She continued to play with her little tits for a bit longer. her lips were just barely parted and she purred like a kitten. " That was nice, I didn't know that could happen" but you didn't get to make your stuff come out"

It was then i realized we were being watched. As Jason stepped away from the cracked open door, Katie looked up at me " Do you still want to fuck me?"

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Nick Nayme

This has the makings of a fine story, many aspects of this one are especially good to me. You're a good writer. The only problem is, you need to care about the differences between to and too, your and you're, and other similar usage things. You need to use punctuation properly too. These things are important. As we read, these errors are jarring, distracting, taking a lot away from the simple enjoyment of it. I recommend that you have someone proofread and edit things before you post them. There's a fair number listed here on this site, myself included, that offer to do this, free. You have a good story here, one that will be great once it's been polished a little. Please understand that I offer no insult or offense. Many of the best writers depend on a good editor/proofreader to make them look as good as they do. Keep up the good work, mate, and let someone help to make your work look even better. ;)

Pedo Bear

plz write longer stories :P

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