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Published: 15-Oct-2011
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"AMANDA!!! Hurry up or we are going to miss our appointment!", Marie yelled at her nine year old daughter. Marie was a 39 year old former high school cheerleader and a single mom. While still pretty, she had gained a little weight as she got older. She still dressed as sexy as she could; always in skirts, pantyhose and heels. Her legs were fabulous, and she still managed to turn lots of heads when she went out. In fact, despite being about 20 pounds overweight, she still garnered plenty of attention from men..except when Amanda was around. You see, when Amanda was around, the nine year old got all of the attention.
It bothered Marie at first. In fact, she used to actually get jealous. Like the time they were at her work's office party. The men that usually all flirted with Marie, paid attention to Amanda all night long. Of course, she should have expected that, the way she lets Amanda dress. Amanda sees her Mom as her role model. Single mom, yet a successful business woman. Amanda noticed how much attention men paid to her mommy. Mommy had lots of male friends. She never met her dad, so Marie was all Amanda had. Amanda likes to dress like her mommy. At first it was just to emulate her, but as she got older, she started to enjoy the extra attention her outfits earned her, especially from men. The night of the office party, Marie had let Amanda wear a tight beige suede miniskirt, nude shade pantyhose, and sexy 4inch heels. Amanda has been wearing pantyhose since she was 7. She likes dressing up, just like Mommy does.
The night of the party, Marie noticed how much attention Amanda got, and how much time she spent on the laps of many men. She saw how many times a hand gently caressed her daughter's hose covered knees and thighs. She wondered to herself, how many hard-ons Amanda was responsible for that night, and it aroused her. She realized that if men think Amanda is sexy, and the beautiful little girl certainly was, maybe she might have a career in acting. Maybe she could turn her little vixen of a daughter into a cash machine. Amanda was 4 ft 6, 90 lbs, blue eyes, blonde hair, and a tan so deep you would think she lived in Hawaii, courtesy of the tanning membership her mom bought her.
So the big day was finally here. Marie had been checking out ads and online listings for acting auditions. She knew her daughter was beautiful, outgoing, and charismatic. She didn't know anything about the world of modeling or acting. Marie didn't have a clue about agents, head shots, or anything she should know about if she were serious about getting Amanda into show biz. Her persistence and enthusiasm had earned her little Amanda an appointment with a casting agent. The address in the ad, confirmed by the man on the phone was downtown, about a 30 minute drive. Marie knew if they didn't get on the road, they would never make it on time. "AMANDA!!! LET'S GO!!" she hollered up the stairs. Marie was prepared to ensure Amanda interviewed well. She had coached her thru practice interview sessions, told her to smile, and act flirty. She had picked out a sexy outfit for Amanda to wear to the interview. She thought Amanda would "interview well" dressed as a sexy little business woman: white tight blouse, black skirt with a hem just above the knee, nude shade pantyhose, and black dress pumps. Heavier than usual makeup, and red nail polish. She didn't think Amanda looked like a hooker, she just wanted to make sure the male casting agent would have a hard time taking his eyes off of her. Then, just to be safe, Marie made sure she dressed sexy as well: black miniskirt, black pantyhose and black patent leather heels. Neither of the ladies wore panties underneath their hose. Marie had taught Amanda about a year ago how good it feels to go without panties when they wear pantyhose.
Marie quizzed Amanda all the way there, reminding her about the little things...posture, speaking clearly, and don't forget to act sexy and flirt. As they entered the office, the lady behind the front desk looked at Marie, then Amanda. She smiled and asked their name, Marie introduced herself, and was asked to have a seat. She glanced at her watch, relieved that they were actually five minutes early. The receptionist then buzzed into the large office behind her, and 5 minutes later, a distinguished looking man, probably in his early fifties opened the door to the office and entered the lobby. He smiled and introduced himself as Bob, the casting agent. "Hello Marie" as he shook her hand " glad you could make it". Then her turned to the mini business woman, and said "You must be Amanda, so nice to meet you". Amanda stood and shook his hand, smiling politely. "Nice to meet you too". Please follow me, Bob said, as he walked back into the large office, closing the door behind them.
Bob sat in the big leather chair behind his desk, while Marie and Amanda sat in the little chairs facing him. Both ladies crossed their legs, and Bob's eyes wasted no time checking out the sexy legs...first Marie's, then Amanda's as well. He asked Marie for Amanda's portfolio. Marie said " her what?" You know, her pictures, a head shot, something? "I'm sorry, we don't have any. I didn't know she needed them." Bob appeared a little agitated at her inexperience, but settled down. "Lady, how do you expect to get her into modeling or acting without the basic knowledge of what you are getting into?" Marie, a bit embarassed, raised her skirt a little higher..and replied "Mister..I will do anything to help Amanda get started in acting". She had hoped that Amanda's looks would win her a gig, but she was also prepared to resort to this if she had to. She liked sex, so who cares if she did a favor or two to get her baby girl on the road to fame.
Bob noticed Marie's skirt going higher, exposing more and more of her thigh. "Did you say you would do anything, to help Amanda get started?".
"Yes sir...anything...you want it, you got it...I do mean anything"
Bob thought for a moment..looked at Marie, then at Amanda, then back to Marie. "Well, why don't we start with a blowjob, we'll see what that leads to." Marie looked over at her little darling and said "Amanda, please go wait in the lobby, while Mommy and Bob discuss some things." As Amanda stood and began to walk towards the door, Bob said " How is she going to give me a blowjob if she is in the lobby?". It took a couple of moments for his words to sink in. Marie looked at Bob with a puzzled look. Bob grinned, and reminded her that she did say "anything". "You said you would do anything to help her get started, So I want you to let her suck my cock." "Trust me,if Amanda gets into acting, I won't be the only man that sticks his cock in her pretty face."
Marie thought about what he said for a moment, then turned to Amanda and said "Amanda honey, please go over to Bob. Walk behind his desk, and do whatever he says." "Ok Mommy". Amanda walked over to where Bob was sititng. By the time she was behind his desk, his slacks were already dropped to his ankles and he was stroking his erect cock. He grabbed Amanda, groping her tiny body. He rubbed his hands all over her tight little blouse..feeling her flat chest. He rubbed her firm little ass thru her miniskirt. Grabbing her ass tightly, he pulled Amanda to him and kissed her on the mouth. He forced his tongue past her lipstick covered lips, and touched her tongue with his. He made her french kiss him for 30 seconds, while he lifted her skirt up over her ass, and rubbed his hands all over her pantyhosed covered ass. He could feel that she wasn't wearing any panties, and it aroused him even more. He ripped her top open, the tiny buttons popping off and hitting the floor. Her flat chest looked so sexy. Pink nipples on that beautifully tanned body. Bob licked a nipple, then took it into his mouth and sucked. He nursed on Amanda's nipple as if he were a newborn baby. His cock began to ache, it needed attention. "Kneel" Bob said, as he gently pushed Amanda's shoulders down. Amanda kneeled as Bob spread his legs a bit wider. He grabbed his cock with his left hand, and looked over at Marie. "Has she ever sucked cock before?" Marie had been mesmerized by the scene that had just unfolded. Seeing Bob rip open Amanda's top, and raise her skirt..seeing him kissing her and sucking her tit had made Marie's pussy wet. "No sir, she has never done this." "Haha, well welcome to showbiz kid" and with that Bob grabbed the back of Amanda's head and guided her face onto the tip of his cock.
His body shook, when her red lips made contact with his cock. He gently pushed a bit firmer on the back of her head, and looked down, watching as her lips slowly slid further down his shaft. He thought she looked like a hooker with the heavy makeup and red nail polish. He grabbed her left hand and put it on his cock. He wanted to see her hand and those red finger nails holding his cock. "That's it you little whore, suck that cock, you know you like it.." Bob always liked talking nasty to the little girls that ended up in his casting office. He pulled it out of her mouth for a moment, so he could tell her "say I LOVE your cock Bob.Say it!..Little Amanda said it.."I LOVE your cock Bob". He laughed and shoved it back in her mouth, again with his hand on the back of her head, "helping her". He put her hand on his shaft again. He liked how her soft palm felt on his hard cock. He moved her head back and forth faster now. The wet warm little mouth felt so good to Bob. Her lips sliding back and forth. The loud slurping sounds were driving him over the edge. Bob loved how wonderful a little girls mouth felt on his cock.
He didn't want to cum though. Not yet. He pulled out of Amanda's mouth again, and told her to stand. He reached down to her pantyhosed covered crotch, and rubbed her virgin pussy thru her nude shade pantyhose. He pulled her skirt to the floor, and had her step out of it. Bob liked how Amanda's pussy looked, no panties under her hose. Bob fondled Amanda's preteen pussy until her pantyhose were wet. Then her ripped a hole in the crotch. "Marie, do I have your permission to fuck your daughter?" "I have a couple of movies in mind that I think she would be perfect for." Marie answered, 'yes sir, please do".
Bob lifted little Amanda onto his lap, he sat her facing him, her legs straddling his. He guided the tip of his cock to the hole in the nylon pantyhose. He liked how sexy it felt, her pantyhosed legs on his bare skin. But the tip of his cock touching her virgin hairless pussy felt even better. He lifted her up and onto the tip. It helped that she was petite, because she was tight. He wiggled his hips, and tried thrusting upwards, and finally felt the swollen head slip past her pussy lips. Owwwww, she moaned..that hurts..'Just for a little while" Bob assured her. Bob gripped Amanda tightly by her waist, inching her down his penis slowly, then back up again. He was enoying this tight fuck. Pulling her down, a little further each time, then she slid back up easier. Her tiny pussy was getting wetter, which made fucking her a little easier.
Bob's back tighened, his body stiffened, he slid her down one last time, and exploded. He leaned back in his chair, the exhausted Amanda still impaled on his cock. Bob kissed her on the lips and thanked her. "Marie, I think our little Amanda has alot of potential. I want to see her again next week, same time. Except, next week, have her in thigh highs and a garter belt."
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(On the suggestion of Principal Peter, I am giving a review. This is my first one in the Studio site. In a way, I'm losing my virginity with you, as it were. I might tangent just a bit. I tend to do that. So bear with me please.)
Casting Couch Cunny! Ooooooo, tasty!
Over all, I like most of your writing...up to a point. It's fairly hot and sexy. However, some nuances don't do it for me, like say the panty hose. I never got what the attraction was for them. Stocking and garters are way my sexy to me, but whatever. I know there are those of you out there in the pervosphere that go all gaga for them, but they leave me flat and flaccid. And what with the multiple mention of word 'nude?' Is that supposed to be more sexy than actual flesh if the hose are skin colored? I personally would like another color to give contrast to the skin; such as white, black, red, pink, yellow, etc. For me a fishnet, mesh, or lacy designed body stocking would have been much more sexy, but that's just me. Where someone would get such a thing for a child is beyond me, but there you have it.
Maybe if he had left her miniskirt on, and hadn't just torn a hole in the hose, but ripped them to shreds and tied her up with the remnants, that would have been much hotter to me. Anyway, It's so fuckin' sexy to when a girl is fucked in just a short lil' skirt. Especially a pleated schoolgirl miniskirt. That covering the top of a female's ass is way sexier than any tramp stamp could ever be, no?
Myself, I'm down with a tiny micro g-sting bikini with a microskirt so short it doesn't cover the crotch or ass, paired with a very cropped top... Then throw some sexy silky of stocking on her of any type, color, design, or pattern, with a pair of pumps, then toss her into into a forest of throbbing cockwood, and let her fuck her way out to the far side. This could be done to any bitch of any age as long as they were sexy, and it would do it dandy for me.
On an aside...
Wouldn't it be glorious if all females of all nubile and preteen ages dressed similarly all the time everywhere you went? On the street. In the park. At the mall. In the supermarket. At school and college. At church. And everywhere you went bitches were getting fucked by whoever wanted to fuck them, however they wanted to fuck them, with a culture and social mores that were wide open and free as all the legs and fuckholes of the society's sluts! No condemnation or compunction, just copulation! It makes my mind soar, my heart warm, and my cock swell and throb just contemplating such a wonderful world!
Sigh...
Ah -hem...
But I digress...
Generally, this story hits most the right triggers for the denizens of this site.
I would have had him film the whole encounter remotely, or something. Maybe had a few lackeys help him, possible a few other little girls, then I always say, the more the merrier.
It would have been nice if while having her suck him, he laid her out on his desk, and sat on her lil' face a bit, rubbing his cock, balls and anus on her lil' faces, and had her lick and suck his cock and balls, and tongue his ass, while he had her mother lick her her cunt to lube her up for the fuck.
As has been stated by another, the fuck would have been better if it were longer and with more detail. What it looked like. How it felt to her and to him. And a bit of anal, and spanking, maybe double penetration with a vibrator and his cock, (or mom could put on a strap-on) and you could put the lil' slut through most of her paces, letting her know what was to be expected of her in the future.
Oh, and mom should be told to lose the 20 extra fucking pounds as she will be in the films too. Get that shit in shape, you lazy fuckin' whore! She should also be told to lick and eat his ass while he fucks her lil' girl much harder, and to stuff large phallic objects in her own cunt and ass for good measure. The momma needs to be used and degraded as much as her baby bitch. That fat ass, pendulous tits, and aging cunt and asshole of hers needs a good sound whipping. She's been such a bad bitch after all, by letting her little slut of a daughter be molested. Definitely, nipple, clit, and sphincter torture for her crimes. Then maybe her daughter needs some of the same...All on camera of course.
Please excuse my temerity. I think I'm get overindulgent in my flights of fantasy, not to mention over excited.
Over all, not bad. Could be hotter. Nastier.
Oh, and where the cum? Gotta have cum. You got the hot beef injection, now you need lots of the special sauce.
But this is all just my pervy opinion. Do as you will. I'm just armchair quarterbacking here in hindsight through my rather ruddy Sn'M colored specs.
Just a note on general grammar and layout. There are a few typos and grammar errors here and there, but my one piece on the site has a few too. My biggest complaint on this front is that the dialogue is not separated from the body of your paragraphs. It very bad grammar, and often makes it much harder to tell who is saying what and why. A lot of people do it in their stories who post here, but that is no excuse. If you want to be clearly understood, and I think you do, try to break it up a little more.
Of course, I've been know to have run-on sentence a time or two, and to generate a massive block of text in one paragraph, so you're not the Lone Ranger, my titillating trick. However, breaking up the text is always nice, and adds to readability.
At least in web format we don't have to indent, and shit like that, huh?
So, that's it. Now tell me to go fuck myself.
Keep Being A Naughty Twist, Babe,
Rock
HoserLuvr
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