Jacqueline_B... Photographer to the Stars

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Published: 11-Apr-2011

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"Mom can I have my portrait done please?" asked eleven-year-old Penny.

"Eh?" Holly, her mother replies distractedly, her face in the breakfast paper.

"Can I have my photograph taken please?" she repeated, trying to attract her mother's attention.

Holly placed the newspaper flat on the table and turned her attention to her eldest daughter, "Sorry honey, what was that?"

Penny started to get exasperated, she gritted her teeth, "Can I have my portrait taken please?" she repeated for a third time.

"What on Earth for?" Holly said, "You had it taken last year at school."

"Yeah I know," Penny had the feeling the request was going to be refused. "But all my friends at school have them taken every year. Emma next door had hers done last week and it looks so cool." She added hopefully.

Holly crossed her arms stared at her daughter and asked, "And just how much is this portrait supposed to cost me.?"

Penny shrugged her shoulders, she knew her mother when she was in this mood, "Dunno."

Her mother thought back on the school portrait her daughter had taken last year, she didn't really like it, it looked too formal, she relented slightly, "OK turn the computer on and I'll have a look and see what photographic studios there are in this are."

"Yayyy!" Penny laughed as she skipped out of the room.

"I haven't said yes yet," Holly called after her.

Five minutes later Holly went out into the den to see her daughter trawling through photographic sites, "Come on shift over, you don't search like that let me show you."

She brought up the Google search page and typing in "photographic studios in New York" After scanning hundreds or result and looking at a few sites, one in particular caught her attention. It read, "Jacqueline B... photographer to the stars". Holly clicked on the link and the website came up. She scrolled through the examples posted and she was impressed with them. They were mostly adult portraits but with a fair sprinkling of children's portraits as well.

Then something caught her attention at the bottom of the page, it read, "Special offer on children's portraits this week only... two portraits for the price of one.... And why not have something different done... details on request." That sounded too good an offer to miss.

Still looking through the site she said to Penny, "Go and get your sister please."

Penny ran off as fast as her legs could carry her grinning from ear-to-ear. She returned three minutes later with her younger sister in tow. Holly turned to them and smiled, "How would you both like your portraits taken?"

"Yeah cool!" they almost shouted as one. Holly telephoned the studio straight away and an appointment was made for the following morning. "Right you two, into the bath with you, I want you both squeaky clean in the morning."

She watched Penny run from the room, brunette pony-tail swinging from side-to-side and smiled worriedly, Penny's long colt-like legs carrying her along under her tight denim cut-offs, she had recently started sprouting outwards and sometimes the tops she wore were a little TOO tight she could be a bit stroppy at times but she had a drop-dead gorgeous face when she smiled, which was often and her hazel eyes lit up any room she was in. She knew that once her eldest daughter started to take an interest in boys there was going to be trouble.

Holly's eyes switched to her youngest daughter Carol as she ran gleefully after her older sister, her yellow summer dress sashaying and flaring out, Only a year younger than Penny, Carol was so cute that anyone who met her fell in love with her straight away. Her slightly lighter brown hair was cut shorter than Penny's, almost in a bob-cut but she had the same gorgeous hazel eyes that seemed to reach into her very soul and read her deepest darkest desires, Holly shuddered, stop thinking like that she chided herself.

Bright and early the next morning the girl's were ready, lined up in the hallway for inspection like they were on parade, so clean and pink looking they looked as if they had been scrubbed from head-to-toe, and dressed in their finest clothes.. Penny wanted to wear her boob-tube but Holly put her foot down, that was WAY too revealing, instead she was wearing a white denim skirt that was maybe a little bit too short but Holly relented when her eldest daughter threatened to throw a tantrum. She also had on a pale blue cheesecloth shirt that she had never worn before, along with white ankle socks and the ubiquitous sneakers that she absolutely refused to take off.

Carol had dressed more sensibly. She'd chosen a fawn coloured dress that buttoned up the front and brought out the hazel of her eyes, at least the hem only came to a couple of inches above her knees.

Beneath the hem were white knee length socks turned down at the top and black patent leather shoes., In her hair she had a slide in the shape of a golden flower.

Inspection over, Holly smiled at her daughters, "Come on you two let's get moving or we'll be late."

Holly drove to the photographic studio and ushered the girls inside. They were greeted by a smiling woman, she held out her hand to be shaken, "Hi, you must be Mrs. Anderson and her daughters. My name's Jackie."

"It's Miss actually," Holly smiled back as she shook hands, "And please call me Holly."

Jackie looked at the two girls standing shyly in front of the door, "And you two must be Penny and Carol," She looked again at Holly, "I can see where they get their good looks from."

"You mentioned in your advertisement 'why not try something different'...exactly what does that mean?" Holly asked.

"Ah you saw that bit?" Jackie grinned, "Some parents want something more that the usual formal portrait photographs which can look a bit stilted, they want some a little more.... ummmm... provocative." She read the look on Holly's face and laughed, "Please don't get me wrong, I don't mean the sort of pictures that dirty old men in filthy raincoats look at, they are the sort that you can see in any fashion magazine or children's clothing catalogue."

"Oh!" answered Holly, "Do they come into the two-for-one offer as well?"

"They certainly do," smiled Jackie. "And if I may be quite frank, I think your daughters would look just gorgeous in them and they only cost a little extra."

Holly turned to her daughters, "What do you think girls?"

They looked at each other like conspirators then grinned at their mother and said as one, "Different." It was scary the way they always thought alike, it was as if they were twins even though they were a year apart.

"I suppose that settles it then," smiled Holly, "Something different it is."

"Excellent," grinned Jackie, "Come this way and I'll take you into the studio."

The three of them followed Jackie into the studio. The girls looked round in awe at all the equipment scattered about, stills cameras, video cameras, lights of varying size and designs, tripods as well as props like chairs, beach balls and a space-hopper and stuffed animals. There was even a small four-poster bed with a frilly white throw covering the mattress and netting all round it tucked away in the corner of the studio.

"Right!" grinned Jackie, Who want to go first?"

Both girl's hands' immediately shot in the air, their initial shyness had been replaced with excitement at having their photograph taken by a REAL professional photographer who had photographed REAL stars no less. Holly laughed, "Penny, you're the oldest, you go first."

Penny stuck her tongue out at her sister and grinned hugely. Carol pouted and joined her mother on the couch to one side.

"OK Penny can you sit on the chair please, these will to totally informal photograph, you can pose any which way you want, you can even pull faces at the camera if you want," Jackie picked up her camera and started clicking away as Penny twisted and turned on the seat, turning her back on the camera and looking over her shoulder and trying, and succeeding, to look sexy. She sat in the chair back to front and leaned right back so she was hung upside down and stuck her tongue out at the camera, all accompanied by a rapid clicking.

"Yes that's just great Penny, keep doing that," Jackie kept up a constant chatter, even telling childish jokes to make Penny laugh. "Turn the chair round Penny, lean against the back and look over your shoulder at me..." Penny did as she was directed... click... "bring your feet a little further away from the chair and a little further apart... click... "Now stick your bum out a little bit and pout over your shoulder at the camera... click... "Oh yes Penny, very sexy," laughed Jackie... "Now sit on the chair backwards and rest your arms and chin on the back.." click... click... The position she was in meant that her thighs were parted and the "V" of her white cotton panties were in full view. She didn't care, she was having too much fun as she struck different posed.

On the couch, Holly realised she could see right up her daughters skirt, she started to feel uncomfortable but she couldn't look away. She glanced down at Carol, but they younger girl was watching the woman work, a look of fascination on her cute face.

"Penny, go over to the beach ball and sit on it and bounce round the studio," grinned Jacky.

The eleven-year-old girl did as she was told a huge grin on her face; she wished that all photographers were like this nice lady, she was having sooo much fun. She straddled the big brightly coloured rubber ball with a stupid grin painted on the front, gripped the handles and started to hop maniacally round the studio. Her denim skirt kept on bouncing up and down, giving fleeting glimpses of her panties. All this was accompanied by multiple clicks from Jackie's camera as she followed the young girl around, both of them laughing.

As Penny bounced a strange look came onto her face, the grin was replaced by a far-away look in her eyes. The bouncing ball kept on hitting the crotch of her panties as she bounced and was sending tingles shooting through her young body.

Jackie noticed the far-away look and smiled to herself as she zoomed in on the crotch of Penny's panties. Yes, there was a definite damp patch down there she thought to herself as she took a dozen or so close up shots for her private collection. These will sell well she grinned inwardly. She also took a few shots of Penny's budding breasts as they bounced up and down inside her cheesecloth shirt. Hmmmm.... no bra as well was another thought that went through her head. Then she noticed something else, Penny was actually rubbing herself against surface of the rubber ball as she bounced and a slight flush was spreading over the girl's cheeks and neck.

Holly squirmed in her seat, she had also noticed the flush and her own pussy twitched in sympathy, and she caught her bottom lip between her teeth. She glanced down at her youngest daughter again; Carol was leaning forward in the seat with her small hands clasped in her lap, her hazel eyes bright as she watched her elder sister bounce around the studio.

Jackie decided to call a halt before Penny actually had an orgasm in front of her mother, she grinned to herself, she would save that little tid-bit for later, "OK honey I think we've got enough picture now," She turned and smiled at Carol, "Ready sweetheart?"

A disappointed Penny got off the space-hopper on shaky legs and sat down beside her mother, her eyes still had that far-away look and she had a half-smile on her face. She was breathing heavily, and not from exertion either. "Wow that was fun," she half-said to herself.

Her mother looked at her as she spoke in a quiet voice; she recognised the symptoms and felt her own vagina moisten.

Carol grinned at looked longingly at the space-hopper, that DID look fun. Jackie laughed; she knew exactly what was going through the young girls mind. "Not yet honey, let me take some shots of you on the chair first."

The ten-year-old girl sat on the chair and started striking some poses, attempting to copy her sister. "Mmmmm," thought Jackie, "This girl isn't just cute, she's fucking gorgeous," She gave Penny a quick glance, the flush was still there, "Hmmmm I wonder....???" She had also noticed the way Holly kept on squirming on the couch and wondered how far the girl's mother would let her go.

Then she went back to taking pictures of Carol, "OK baby, let's make this a good one," She grinned. Jackie started firing off rapid-fire directions at the young girl, the shutter of her camera clicking away like a machine gun.

"That's it baby give me a sexy smile"... click... "Stand sideways to the chair and put one foot up on the chair, keep looking at the camera... click... She knelt down and took a couple of shots up Carols skirt. "Mmmmm delicious," she though, pale yellow panties with a brightly coloured print of a kitten on the front. Jackie had to surpass a giggle, a pussy for a pussy... click... click... click... "Oh yeah that's. it, come on, lean on the seat and look back over your shoulder honey... click... "Sexy smile now"... click... "lean a bit more"... click... "Feet apart, no a bit more, come on you can go further than that."

Carol leaned right forward, her small feet as far apart as she could get then. She was now leaning at an angle of about thirty degrees and was grinning back over her shoulder. Jackie knelt down and fired off several more shots as the young girl grinned down at her. Most of the shots "accidentally" went up her dress. The back of her panties were stretched tight over her buttocks as she leaned forward and Jackie could make out the shape of her mound with the little slit bisecting it... click... click... click... click....

Jackie saw Carol glanced over at the space-hopper again and laughed, "OK honey, jump on and see how you can bounce."

Grinning from ear-to-ear, Carol immediately jumped on the space-hopper and started bouncing with Jackie laughing an following her round the studio and clicking away with the camera. The higher Carol bounced, the higher her skirt flared up, and the more shots Jackie managed to take of her cute panties. Carol giggled like mad as she bounced higher and higher. She was also starting to get a little flushed around the cheeks.

Suddenly she stopped bouncing and fell off the space-hopper and landed on the floor on her back. "Oh!" she whispered in a small voice. The hem of her dress had bunched up around her waist, her pale yellow panties were in plain view, and they had turned almost transparent with her excitement. Jackie managed to grab a couple of quick surreptitious shots.

Holly jumped up off the couch and knelt beside her daughter, her eyes immediately drawn to her panties, she could make out the outline of Carols pussy lips through the thin material and she groaned inwardly before pulling the hem down to cover her modesty. "Are you OK honey?" Carol just stared up at her mother, her face flushed, "Dunno," she whispered, "That felt sorta ....weird."

"What do you mean weird?" Jackie asked as she knelt on the other side of the sprawled girl, although she knew the answer already. She gave Penny a quick glance, she was still sitting on the couch, a secret little smile on her face. She knows what's happened Jackie grinned inwardly.

"Dunno really, like it sorts... tickled...." she blushed, "You know... down there."

Jackie looked up at the girl's mother, Holly's face was flushed as well and she saw her breasts were rising and falling rapidly under her blouse. Now was the time. "I'll tell you what, if you want me to I'll take a few photographs of both your daughter's together, free of charge. That'll make it something special for the family album."

Her mind was far away as Holly looked at both her daughters, "OK?" They both grinned back at her, they were having so much fun they wanted loads of photographs to show off to their friends. "Great," Jackie smiled, "I think we've had enough exercise for one day, how about a few photographs on the four-poster?"

Holly just nodded vaguely then sat down on the couch as if in a daze. The girls giggled and jumped up on the four-poster having no idea of the feelings running through their mother's body..

"Right girls," Jackie called picking up her camera again and looked through the viewfinder, "Can you sit half-turned towards each other with your legs folded beneath you and smile sweetly at the camera please....no not quite like that Carol, turn towards Penny a little more, now both of you put your hands on your knees.... perfect," ...click... "Lean towards each other slightly, yes that's it,"... click... "Up on your knees and face each other, great," ...click... "Move just a little closer, closer still... click... Both girls broke into giggles, their faces were so close they were almost touching, "That's enough giggles young ladies," Jackie laughed as she squeezed off another couple of shots. "Move closer still and put your cheeks together and your arms around each other's waists," ...click... "Oh yeah that's perfect, now hug each other tight... click... Carol had a hard time keeping a straight face.

Watching from the couch, Holly felt her insides turn to liquid as she saw her two little darlings so close together. Her deepest darkest fantasies were starting to come to the fore. She felt her nipples harden inside her blouse and she tried to make her body behave but it wouldn't.

"Come on girl's," grinned Jackie, "Let's see how sisterly you are, give each other a kiss," They gave each other a quick peck on the cheek. "No not like that, on the mouth," Penny leaned in and gave Carol a quick kiss on the lips then broke away giggling... click... "Come on you can do better than that, I missed that one, hold the kiss for a couple of seconds so I can get a picture. Again Penny leaned in and pursed her lips, Carol closed her eyes and did the same and their lips met.... click.. click.... The girls broke apart giggling again, Carol furiously wiping her mouth with the back of her hand.

Again Jackie glanced at Holly and smiled to herself, she's getting really turned on. She could plainly see the mother's nipples making little bumps on the front of her blouse. I wonder what she will do when she sees what I've got in mind.

"OK girls, I want you both to face me and sit on your haunches, yes that's it, now lean backwards slightly and put your hands behind you on the bed," ...click... "That's not quite right, your knees look all squashed, both of you open your knees slightly... click... click... "Nice sexy smile for the camera," ...click... "Open your knees just a bit more Penny," ...click... "Oh yeah that's great."

Penny's short white denim skirt rode up her thighs as she leaned back and she unconsciously ran her tongue sensuously over her lips. Jackie was just about to glance at Holly to gauge her reaction when she heard the woman give a strangled gasp. She changed the angle of the shots and looked at the girl's mother out of the corner of her eye. Holly's hand was in her lap and she was cupping her crotch through her jeans, totally oblivious to anything except her daughters in the middle of the bed.

Smiling inwardly, Jackie said, "Penny, kneel behind your sister and look at the camera over her shoulder and put your hands around her waist". Penny did as she was told... click... Suddenly Carol burst into giggles and rolled over on the bed clutching her ribs.

"Stop ticking me," she almost screamed.

Penny just grinned and attempted to look innocent at the same time. "Yes that's it Penny, tickle her," Jackie said, raising the camera to her eye with one hand and reaching into her pockets with the other to operate a remote control to activate the video camera This video will make a fortune Jackie thought to herself as Penny jumped on top of Carol and start tickling her. Carol's legs scissored and flew all over the place, trying to kick her elder sister off her, her dress rode up and showed off her cute panties as she gasped for breath, tears of laughter streaming down her face. "Yeahhh that's it Penny, tickle her until she can't stand it anymore." grinned Jackie as she moved round the bed gathering shots, the camera sounding like a machine gun... click.. click.. click.. click.. click..

Holly shifted sideways as Jackie moved in front of her, she couldn't take her eyes off her two little girls rolling around on the bed giggling. Her hand went to the front of her slacks and undid the button and pull the zipped down then slipped inside. Her fingers found her clitoris and started rubbing. Never in her wildest dreams had she thought that her daughters would turn her on like they were doing now.

In the struggle on the bed, the buttons on Carol's dress started to pop off until only the bottom button was left done up.

Jackie still moved around the bed, her camera clicking away at the writhing girls and zooming in on the expanse of bare flesh that was slowly being revealed. Neither girl's noticed.

Penny's tickling fingers moved lower, one of her hands holding Carols wrists over her head, Carol gasped as they started to move in on her waist, her most ticklish spot. "No please!" she gasped and laughed at the same time, "I surrender."

Suddenly Penny noticed her younger sister's near nakedness and stopped and let her eyes wander down Carol's body.

Everything seemed to freeze for Holly, she craned her neck to get a better view of her youngest daughter's body. She began a slow unconscious litany, "Tie her up, tie her up, tie her up" repeating it over and over again, almost whispering it.

Jackie heard the repeated words and grinned, she quickly reached under the bed and pulled out some silken ropes and threw them onto the bed, the camera never leaving her eye., "Do it!" she ordered Penny.

Penny looked down at her sister, the younger girl's eyes were bright and sparkling, her chest heaving wildly with exertion and tears of laughter still streaming down her face.. Jackie started directing again, "Tie Carol's wrists to the bedposts," ...click... "Now her ankles to the bottom of the bed," ...click.... click... Carol was spread-eagled the dress open right down the front, her tiny nipples were showing as well as her panties. Penny rocked back on her heels as Jackie took a load more photographs. She had only seen her sister completely naked a couple of times before and she didn't know what to do now that Carol was spread-eagled on the bed, she looked over at her mother for guidance.

Holly stood up to get a better view, her heart thumping in her chest and her mouth suddenly dry. As if in a trance she moved forward, Jackie handed her another couple of silken ropes. A small smile crossed Holly's face, her youngest daughter looked up at her, "Yes mummy!" the little girl's voice was husky.

Still moving around the bed and clicking away with the camera, Jackie started giving directions again, "Tie Carol's knee wide apart Holly," ...click... Holly looped the ties around Carol's knee then to the side of the bad, the young girl was now totally exposed to everyone's avaricious gaze.... click... click... "Pull her dress right apart," ...click... click...

"Oh my GOD!" whispered Holly under her breath as she let her eyes wander up and down her ten-year-old daughter's semi-naked body, clad only in the cute panties.

Penny just looked on in amazement as her mother tied her sister up, her hand went between her thighs and she started to rub herself over her white cotton panties.

Jackie put her camera down, Sit on the bed Holly," she ordered, Holly sat beside Carol on the bed, her hand idly stroking up and down her youngest daughter's thigh as she watched Jackie kneel behind Penny. It was as if the girl's mother didn't really know what she was doing.

Keeping her eyes on Holly, Jackie reached down to the waist of Penny's t-shirt and quickly pulled it over her head, then she undid the clasp on the girl's denim skirt and let it fall open. Then she took her by the hand and made her stand up on the bed and move forward so she was directly above her sister's face.

Carol looked up, she could see the damp patch ion Penny's knickers and she could feel her own pussy moistening at the sight.

Jackie pushed downwards on Penny's shoulders until she ended up squatting over her sisters head then she pushed forwards. Both girls' faces were now inches away from each other's pussies. Jackie got some more ties and looked them round the two girl's waists, binding them together and tied Penny's ankles to Carol's wrists and her wrists to the younger girl's ankles. They were now trussed up securely.

Picking up the camera again, Jackie said to Holly, "Rub both them both over their panties to make them nice and wet."

As Jackie started taking more photographs, Holly's hand seemed to have a life of its own as she run her fingers up and down the thin material covered slits of both daughters. Both girls gave little moans and Jackie zoomed in on the rapidly spreading damp patches. "Pull Carol's panties down as far as you can." Holly did, the material being pulled taught by the young girl's spread thighs... click... click.... click.. "Now the other pair." Holly moved and pulled Penny's down so they ended up round her knees... click.... click... click.... click... Jackie grinned, the shutter giving off an almost continuous sound now. "Make them lick each other." Without thought, Holly placed one hand on the back of Penny's head and the other on her buttocks and pushed downwards...click...click...click.

Oh my god oh my godohmygod," muttered Holly under her breath as she watched both her tightly trussed up daughters start to lick each other's pussy's.

Jackie put the camera down again, the video camera was catching all the action, now it was her turn to have some fun. She pulled Holly to her feet and started to undress her. The girl's mother just let her, her eyes never leaving her two daughters. Before she realised it she was naked with Jackie stood behind her, one hand on her breasts and the other between her thighs. Her knees went weak when she felt first one, then two, fingers slip inside her pussy and still she kept her eyes on Carol and Penny licking each other out. "D'you like watched them?" Jackie whispered in her ear.

All Holly could do was nod mutely, she was totally entranced by the sight. "I'll bet you want to taste as well."

Holly nodded again and gasped when Jackie tweaked her nipples. "Go on then, lick both your daughter's cunts, make them cum." And Jackie pushed her towards the two young figures on the bed.

Jackie stood back and started to masturbate as Holly knelt between Carol's spread thighs and began to lick her smooth pussy, her tongue dancing with Penny's over Carol's mound. "Mmmmm ohhh oooo ohhhhh uhmmmm ahhhhhh," moaned the young girl as her mother gently slipped a finger inside her anus. She started tom move it in and out slowly, her tongue licking all along Carol's slit while Penny flicked her tongue over her sister's clitoris.

"Ooooohhh mummyyyyy," groaned Carol, her tongue darting in and out of her older sister's pussy. The young girl's thigh muscles rippled and her toes curled up, "Oooohhh ohhhhhh, pleeeeease!"

Carol's outer lips parted against her mother's tongue. She gave another low groan as she had her very first orgasm, her entire body started shaking and the juices flowed from her pussy into Carol's mouth.

Quickly, Holly moved to the other end, she looked down at Carol's flushed face then leant down and started to run the flat of her tongue from Penny's puckered hole to her pussy. She felt a hand insinuate its way between her thighs, then two fingers insert themselves deep in her pussy. Jackie was kneeling behind her and finger-fucking her as she licked all around Penny's pussy and arse.. The room filled with the sound and aroma of sex, Jolly thrust her tongue deep inside Penny's pussy and the girl pushed back against her as far as the bonds would allow. The combination of the taste of her daughter's pusses and the stimulation coming from Jackie's fingers was almost taking her over the edge. Holly groaned, her entire being felt as though it was on fire. She thrust her tongue in and out of Penny's soaking wet hole as Carol flicked her tongue over the clitoris from below.

Suddenly Penny shuddered, an almost squeaky moan escaped her throat as her orgasm spread throughout her body and her sweet nectar literally flooded out from her pussy, straight into her mother's mouth and dripping down onto her sister's upturned face, That was enough for Holly, she pushed backwards against the intruding fingers, she started panting and she cum...and cum....and cum, her juices mingling with Penny's and coating Carol's face with them.

This story was written at the request of a mother who for the last few years has had fantasies about her two pre-teen daughters, although I stress most strongly that that's all they are....just fantasies. All they names and ages are true. Holly has asked me to write this short ending saying that she would like to hear from other mothers who are in the same position. Can you please send emails direct to my email address because the mother in question is just coming to terms with her fixations (fantasies?) and I will forward them on to Holly. Thank you

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Larry

Not being a mother I can't help her. But this is one lovely fantasy she has. You Jacqueline put it to words extremely well. Thank You Larry

Polarisgirl

fabulous story. had to stop reading a few times just to catch my breath! and, to take care of 'business' Thank you

Donnie

Yet another great story from you. Tales of pre-teen sex are usually exciting enough in themselves, but mother-daughter incest supercharges them with a unique eroticism. You have a real talent for erotic fiction.

drtongue

Incredible story. I can't wait for the sequel.

Lilly

I myself had to take care of business during your story. I want to hear a real sequel.

mary_100

ooooooooooo so hot hot hot

Robyn

Sexy story....I am a photographer and that has never happened to me....mmmmmmmmm

kennyRhodeIsland

Very hot story

sue

I never expected to find a site where my deepest fantasies are expressed by others. Thank you so much for showing that there are other moms that have such fantasies and that it's not just the domain of males!

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