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Published: 1-Mar-2013
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The Children:
- Julie (10): Fully nude except for wearing black choker necklace.
- Jennifer (9): Fully nude except for wearing crimson red/gold necktie around her neck.
- Tiffany (10): Fully nude except for vampire teeth.
- Tori (9): Fully nude except for purple wig and black kato mask.
- Melissa (11): Fully nude except for keeping roller skates on her feet.
- Karla (9): Fully nude except for a toy sword sticking out of her butt.
- Trisha (8): Fully nude except for keeping white stockings on with her shoes.
- Betty (6): Fully nude except for wearing her sash and tiara.
The Adults:
- Jim Phillips
- John Tanner, Julie and Jennifer's father.
- Dave, Trisha's uncle.
- Tom, Jim's friend and expert in computers and videos.
- Howard, Jim's fat friend from high school.
- Chris, Jim's employee and east coast talent scout.
- Carlos, Jim's employee and west coast talent scout.
- Bruno Bianchi, Karla's father
- Alex Rhodes, Melissa's father and videographer for the night. He will not be having any sex.
- Evelyn Tanner, Julie and Jennifer's mother
- Cathy, Betty's mother
- Ana Bianchi, Karla's mother
- Tammy Rhodes, Melissa's mother
- Justina, a college-aged female pedophile of around age 22 who often does make-up for the children on sets.
- Helen, another of Jim's female makeup artists. Specializes in styling little girls' hair. Around age 35.
A Game of Memory: Thinking and Fucking
"So what's next Jimster?" asked Howard as the gang all shuffled back into the family room of pornographer Jim Phillips' massive 5000 square foot mega home. His years of illicit enterprising had earned him quite the luxurious lifestyle. While the entire group was downstairs his gigantic 70 inch LED TV hanging from the wall had been silently continuing to play loops of random child pornography onscreen. When the adults and children reclaimed the room it just so happened to be of a scene featuring 8 year old Kelly McClarry getting mounted by an English bull terrier.
"Hey, that's my friend Kelly!" piped Trisha, recognizing her co-star from 'Adventures in the Grand Canyon.' "She's doing bestiality now?"
"She sure is Trish. She's come a long way, just like you. In fact, this is her second scene. Her first was with a golden retriever." informed Jim.
"She's such a little hottie. Invite her to our next party, would ya Jim?" asked his friend Tom.
"Well, that won't be easy since she lives out in California, but next time I fly out there for some talent scouting I'll be sure to bring you along and we'll make a stop in her area."
"You're the best old buddy."
"Hey Jim! You ignoring me? We're all wondering what other goodies you got in your bag for us tonight. What's our next game?" Howard asked for a second time.
"Relax, be patient. We'll get to it in a minute. First off though, Cathy? Why don't you take Betty to the guest bedroom on the far side of the hallway. There's a shower in there. Go ahead and rinse the piss out of her hair. Towels are already on the racks. We'll wait for you."
As the group waited for Betty and her mother to return from her washing (after getting soaked by the collective urine shower from all 21 of them down in the basement), Jim gathered his guests on the sofas and proceeded to explain the rules for their next sex game. The men's erections have all returned in full after they rested while watching Betty's S&M session. The women were excited to be involved in their first organized game with the children. As the night was wearing on and it was currently past the children's normal bedtimes, each was given some soda and Halloween candy for the sugar rush necessary to remain awake.
"Alright, let me explain our next game. About half of you who were here for Jennifer's birthday will recall that we played a game where we blindfolded the kids and the grown ups took turns fucking them from behind."
"I remember that. We couldn't see any of you but we had to guess who was fucking us. We gonna play that again?" asked Jennifer.
"Not exactly Jen. But this game, just like that one, will test the players' memory skills. But I'm gonna turn the tables around this time and it's the grown ups who have to think and fuck at the same time."
"Thinking and fucking? Where's the fun in that?" asked Carlos.
"The fun is in fucking these girls in the ass and then shoving that same cock straight down another girl's throat. Lemme finish Carlos, goddamn."
"Sorry boss."
"Girls, you're gonna each get on your knees in doggiestyle side by side from one another. Youngest on the far left (Trish), oldest on the far right (Melissa); same order as before girls. Then, we're gonna take turns fucking each of you girls in exactly one hole - pussy, ass, or mouth. For instance, if I went first I might go fuck Julie in her ass, then shove my dick in Jennifer's mouth before pussyfucking Karla, pussyfucking Tori, assfucking Tiffany, getting Karla to clean Tiffany's shit off my dick with her mouth, before fucking Melissa in her pussy and ending by buttfucking Trisha. Now, what did I just say Carlos?"
"Huh?" Carlos was caught off guard. "Um .. you were assfucking Julie, then assfucking Tiffany .."
"No! I buttfucked Julie, THEN stuck it in JENNIFER'S mouth. You gotta pay attention to the correct order - this is a memory game. Not only do you need to keep track of what order the girls got fucked, but also the correct hole that got fucked in each girl. 10 strokes per hole before moving on to the next girl, okay? And when you're done you call up the next adult of your choice. That adult has to correctly guess the sequence and holes of the previous man. If he guesses right, he wins a point and the first person gets nothing. If he guesses wrong, the first person wins the point. Then the second person goes back and re-fucks the girls in his or her unique sequence and calls up the third adult to try and repeat it, and so forth. After everyone gets a turn, we'll keep playing until the first adult who can reach 5 points. Sound fun?"
"OH YEAH!" yelled all the men.
"And ladies, you'll be playing too. Each of you just go grab and put on a strap-on dildo from out of that box over there. There should be plenty for everyone."
Just then Cathy returned with Betty holding her hand and looking fresh and clean after her shower. Her golden hair was damp and her nude skin showed tiny beads of sweat and water. The red marks that once littered her skin after the numerous alligator clips were removed from her body had begun to disappear and be replaced by her usual milky smooth complexion.
"Ah Betty princess. Feel all better now darling?" asked Jim.
"Uh huh. My skin doesn't hurt anymore after you took all those sharp things off me and mommy said I'm gonna keep growing up to look pretty because pee is good for my skin. Oh, and mommy said you all have to call me PRINCESS BETTY from now on since I did all that grown up tying up and pinching game!"
"Of course your majesty! All hail piss princess Betty!" Jim commanded.
"LONG LIVE PISS PRINCESS BETTY!" shouted all the adults, with the 7 children following along with the chant a split second behind.
"Now Betty, since you worked so hard in your last game you get to just watch us play this time sweetheart. But don't worry, uncle Jim has a special surprise just for you once this game ends."
"I DON'T WANNA GET PINCHED AGAIN!" begged the little 6 year old, who was beginning to understand that what was perverted fun for the adults didn't always translate to fun for the children.
"Oh no no. We're not gonna do that again tonight, darling. What I meant was .. oh I'll spoil the surprise but just tell you anyways. Remember how all your girlfriends got to lick off all that yummy sperm off your body when we were downstairs?"
"Yeah, and none of them saved any for me."
"That's right, so to make up for that we're gonna save up ALL our cum this time just for you! Right guys?!"
"Oh yeah!" said Bruno.
"You better be hungry kid!" added John.
"I can't give you any cum but promise to save some squirt for you tonight, piss princess!" said Evelyn.
"Thank you! And NO the PRINCESS will NOT share her sperm with the other girls!" replied the sudden diva, with her hands on her hips and her head raised in the air like a spoiled child tyrant. Passing her sex initiation was clearly getting to this 6 year old's head.
* * *
With Betty watching comfortably from the sofa (and sucking on a cherry lolipop), the other 7 female children got on their hands and knees on the rug, waiting to be penetrated multiple times by 14 organic flesh cocks or synthetic strap-ons. A fresh application of KY jelly was applied to pussies and asshole before the game proper was underway.
Carlos was the first to fuck his sequence and he did so in the following order:
- Melissa - asshole
- Tiffany - asshole
- Trisha - asshole
- Jennifer - mouth
- Karla - asshole
- Tori - asshole
- Julie - asshole
"Whew! Alright, try and guess that - Tammy!" dared Carlos.
"What the fuck Carlos, are you serious? That was so fucking easy. Melissa-ass, Tiffany-ass, Trisha-ass, Jen-mouth, Karla-ass, Tori-ass, Julie-ass. Are you on a quest to be the biggest loser?" teased Tammy Rhodes, Melissa's mother.
"One point for Tammy! Jack shit for Carlos!" announced Jim.
In truth, Carlos was simply aware of the odds that with 14 adults in the game he was likely not going to win. Therefore, each time his turn came up he was simply gonna take the opportunity to buttfuck the underaged beauties (his favorite type of pedophilic sex) as many times as possible! Screw the winner! When was he ever gonna get to fuck this many child assholes in one night, he figured.
But Tammy, who treated the game with more seriousness, decided to make it more challenging for the adult she planned on calling up next. So she went forward and fucked the children with her large strap-on dildo in the sequence:
- Tori - pussy
- Karla - asshole
- Jennifer - asshole
- Melissa - mouth (it was a wicked turn on for her to stick the dildo covered in a 9 year old's anal juices * straight into the mouth of her own daughter)
- Tiffany - asshole
- Trisha - mouth
- Julie - pussy
With her dildo slick from the various juices of 7 children, Tammy called on Howard to repeat the sequence.
"Oh fuck. Uhh .. Tori-pussy, Karla-asshole, Jennifer-asshole, Melissa-pussy (incorrect), Trisha-asshole (incorrect), Tiffany-asshole (correct hole, incorrect sequence), Julie-pussy."
"WRONG!!! It was Melissa-mouth and Trisha-mouth. You also flipped Trisha and Tiffany!" corrected Tammy. Already this mother to the 11 year old child porn starlet was up 2-0 over everybody else in the room.
"Alright you win, now let me get to fucking, would ya?" announced Howard. He proceeded to fuck his complicated order, but a dead giveaway was that he preferred to fuck the skinniest children in their assholes (Karla and Jennifer) and liked ramming his fat cock down the throats of the blonde girls (Trisha, Kessler sisters). While he was busy grunting and fucking, the other adults privately worried to themselves whether this hairy, obese blob of a man would accidentally slip and topple over the tiny girl children and thereby bring a quick end to this game. Whatever shall they say to doctors when the girls are brought in to the hospital with broken bones and freshly stretched out pussies and asses?
"Okay ... (panting heavily and out of breath) ... I call ... on Justina next!" announced the fat, out-of-shape pedophile, before stumbling over to the couch to collapse over Betty's nude body.
Meanwhile, the children whose holes were being used as props weren't quite sure whether they liked this game or not. On one hand it did feel good when the various phalluses penetrated them, particularly if the grown ups had chosen their pussies to enjoy. Throatfucking was all work and buttfucking was entirely dependent on the adult doing the thrusting. Some, like Howard's, was thick and painful. They wouldn't even characterize Howard's attempts as even fucking motions but rather an attempt to jam as much of his prick as deep into their asses as quickly as he can.
On the other hand, it was the adult women who actually were far better at delivering them deep anal pleasures. Perhaps it's because women knew what stroke rhythms they preferred when getting fucked themselves that they should repeat this onto the children whom they were penetrating. Justina and Evelyn, in particular, would've driven the girls to anal orgasms if their penetrations had gone on long enough. Pity that the adults were only allowed 10 strokes per hole before they had to move on.
"Hey uncle Jim? Are you sure you guys wanna fuck us just 10 strokes in each hole? I bet it'll feel way better for you if you did it longer, like for a minute, maybe?" asked Julie, hoping that her reverse psychology might work.
"Haha, I know what you're trying to do, clever girl!" he answered. "Sorry Jules, but that might make the game take forever, and we have lots of other partying to do tonight and you kids need to save up the strength in your holes to last until 2 or 3 in the morning!"
On and on the game went, and soon enough each of the 7 girls had all their 3 holes penetrated both by a flesh cock or a fake one. Tammy Rhodes' early lead evaporated after John Tanner took a furious come from behind lead to become the first in the pedo pack to score his 4th point. Knowing that John's next point will win the game, Jim paused the action to announce how the game would end.
"Looks like John's getting close to taking the gold medal, but Tammy and Ana are still within reach! Okay guys, so here's our climax to this game. From here on Melissa's asshole is off limits. You can only fuck one of the other 20 holes available to you."
"Huh, why uncle Jim? It's okay, I can handle it in my butt!" assured the confused 11 year old Melissa. What did her prepubescent asshole do wrong to be taken out of the game, she wondered.
"No Melissa, you're doing fine. It's just that with somebody close to winning, it's time for the guys to get to dump their loads again, and in this game we selected your asshole Melissa, for all the men to cum into when it's time. All eight of us are going to give you an anal creampie by cumming inside. Your shithole's gonna be pretty squishy after we're done with you!"
Melissa didn't know quite whether to be flattered or embarrassed at this "honor."
"Okay, but why my ass though?" she asked.
"Well, no specific reason. We just figured that with you being the oldest girl and all that maybe your ass stands the best chance of holding all 8 loads of semen in without spilling any."
"Oh, okay .." The emphasis on her "old age" suddenly made Melissa feel like a granny amongst the children; this despite the fact that the child has not even experienced her first menstrual period!
"So after whoever wins, every guy gets to give Melissa her butt creampie, but that's not all. We're gonna try a new spin on the old cum swap."
Anal Snowballing
"Hey kids, which one of you can tell me what a cumswap is?" asked Jim.
Julie was the first to raise her hand.
"Yes Jules?"
"A cumswap is when a person spits out the cum in her mouth into the mouth of another person. That person can then give it back or swallow it."
"Absolutely correct. And what do we call snowballing?" he asked.
Karla was the next to answer.
"Snowballing is when the cumswapping goes on repeatedly and the cum goes back and forth between the mouths of the first and second person, or keeps getting spit into the mouth of a new person, who then passes it to another. It gets its name because just like a snowball rolling down a mountain and getting bigger and bigger, a sex snowball gets bigger and bigger because each time a person passes it off, the sperm gets mixed with the saliva in their mouth and the whole thing gets bigger and bigger."
"Correct darling! Wow, no wonder you're a straight-A student baby!" said Jim. If there ever was a real human girl that was the personification of the animated character, Lisa Simpson, it would be precocious, wise-beyond-her-years Karla Bianchi (except Lisa Simpson does not engage in the most disturbing of sexual fetishes when she gets out of school).
"We're gonna cumswap uncle Jim?" asked Tori Kessler.
"Yes darling, but not in the been-there, done-that, oral way. Tonight you girls get to try something called 'anal snowballing'. You see, after all the men cum inside Melissa's ass, two of us are gonna pick her up and point her ass straight down at one of your upturned assholes so they line up perfectly. Then Melissa's gonna cumfart all her anal creampie into the ass of one of you girls. We'll stick a funnel on the ass of the bottom girl so that none of the cumfart spills. Then the second girl will cumfart her cocktail into the third girl's asshole, and so forth, until we've gone down the row with everyone except piss princess Betty."
"Yo Alex (Rhodes)! You better have that camera rolling cus this sounds so fucking hot I wanna watch it again on my computer tomorrow!" demanded Chris. So the cuckold Alex Rhodes approached the crowd to position himself near his daughter Melissa's butthole in order to properly film this massive anal cumswap scene.
"Man, when the cum cocktail flows from one ass to another, hopefully it'll pick up some anal juices along the way too, so just like an oral snowball it'll grow in size from ass to ass until it gets to the last girl." hoped Dave.
"I'm hoping that's what'll happen, Dave." said Jim. "But that's only in theory. I've never tried an anal cumswap with 7 girls before so it's the first time I'm finding out what exactly will happen."
"BUT WHEN DOES THE PRINCESS GET TO EAT HER SPERM?" demanded Betty.
"Well piss princess, when the cocktail gets inside the ass of the last girl, which will be Trisha, she'll cumfart it into Jennifer's mouth, who will then taste the cocktail briefly before spitting it into Tori's mouth. So basically we're going in the opposite direction now orally. Eventually the oral snowball will get to Melissa's mouth, and she'll dump it into Trisha's mouth which hasn't tasted it yet. Finally, Trisha will spit it back into Melissa's ass from which it all originally came, and Melissa will be held up in the air by two men as she cumfarts it into the piss princess's mouth, who will be the ONLY one that gets to swallow and enjoy it."
"SHE BETTER BE!" said Betty.
To review, the flow of travel for this 8 man anal creampie will be:
Melissa's ass --> Julie's ass --> Tiffany's ass --> Karla's ass --> Tori's ass --> Jennifer's ass --> Trisha's ass --> Jennifer's mouth --> Tori's mouth --> Karla's mouth --> Tiffany's mouth --> Julie's mouth --> Melissa's mouth --> Trisha's mouth --> Melissa's ass --> Betty's mouth (swallow)
"This is so fucking perverted! Okay hurry up and let John win you motherfuckers, I can't wait to cream inside Melissa!" ordered Howard.
But as much as the twisted adults were looking forward to viewing this erotic (or stomach turning) scene, several of the man had not yet gotten their fill of child sex hole and so were intending to extend the game for a little while longer, if not attempting to win it for themselves.
* * *
"Uuuuggggghhhhh! Oh my god my entire bottom feels so full!" groaned Melissa as her 7th man dumped his semen load deep into her rectum.
"Fuuuuuuuuuuuck!" yelled Karla's father Bruno, as he left the head of his prick just inside the 11 year old's pink ass and used his thumb and index finger to choke his shaft and squeeze out the last drops of cum from his urethra and into her rear tunnel.
As his cockhead exited her anal o-ring it did so with a wet 'plop' sound and left behind a small bubble of jizz at its entrance.
Looking down at the small puddle of spooge at the entrance to Melissa's ass, Carlos complained out loud, "Shit. Look who gets to be Mr. Sloppy seconds. Or sloppy #8 in his case."
"Haha, shut up Carlos. Your damn fault you ended up in dead last place!" teased Tammy.
With Carlos mostly fucking the children's anuses during each time he went up, he not surprisingly finished in 14th place, behind all of the women as well as the men. John Tanner, who was in the lead late in the game, ended up winning with Tammy Rhodes taking second place.
Not wanting to penetrate too deeply into Melissa's asshole and cause her anal creampie to spill out, Carlos placed only half of his cockhead inside her and began to stroke furiously to coax his semen out of his balls. He had to close his eyes to get his mind off the fact that there was another grown man's semen touching his penis, which disgusted the homophobic Carlos. Even as Carlos has fucked young boys before (all under age 10), the thought of gay sex with adult men repulsed him, so at present the only thing that was making this worthwhile was getting to be touching the exposed butthole of an 11 year old girl.
"Mmmmmm .... hmmmmmm ...... ghmmmmm .... ehmmmmmm .... HRRRRMMMM" he groaned and stroked with eyes closed and concentrating, until at last his hot seed shot up his vas deferens, merged into his urethra and expelled with the powerful force from his penile contractions.
"Aaaaaaaaaaaaaarrrrrrrrrrrrrrgggggggghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!" he screamed as he belched the last of the orgy group's obscene deposit into the completely filled rectal lake of the 6th grader.
"YAAAAAAY!" the group cheered Carlos's effort.
"Alright gang, let's do an anal snowball for the ages!" directed Jim Phillips.
Two of the strongest male pedophiles, John Tanner and Bruno Bianchi, then went over to the still crouching in doggiestyle Melissa (she had her head down on the floor and her rump raised in the air to prevent spillage) and each man grabbed each of Melissa's thighs. They held on to her legs to raise her upright in the air so that her legs were doing the splits while being held up by the men's powerful arms.
"Squeeze Melissa. We can't have any of the creampie spill out!" ordered Jim.
Melissa squeezed her anus shut as tightly as her child muscles would allow her. It wasn't the easiest thing to do since her ass had been thoroughly stretched during the game's anal poundings. She felt like a girl who had an onset of diarrhea and had to clamp her ass shut for dear life until it was hovering over the safety of a public toilet seat.
That toilet seat in her case was her girlfriend Julie Tanner's open asshole. While Melissa was being held up in the air, two of the women, Julie's mother Evelyn and Melissa's mother Tammy, had Julie lie on her back and lifted each of the 10 year old's legs up and over until both of Julie's feet was next to her own two ears. From that position she was on the ground only by her upper back and shoulders, and her rear end was raised in the air pointing straight at her girlfriend''s anus which was looking straight down at her's.
After some adjusting on the part of the adults to make sure that the children's anuses were in perfect alignment, a kitchen funnel was placed on Julie's ass to catch any side drippings from Melissa's impending cumfart.
"Alright Melissa, you can let it rip, darling!" said Jim.
The 11 year old was finally allowed to release the clench on her anal o-ring, and immediately her slippery rectal contents followed the flow of gravity and erupted out of her ass like volcanic lava. It shot straight down to splash onto Julie's funnel, and after pooling near its surface, began to slowly descend into the 10 year old's ass through the narrow central hole on the funnel.
There was so much anal creampie from the 8 men that Melissa was able to completely relax her ass muscles and her creampie still flowed out effortlessly into Julie's ass. Only when about 10% of the original creampie remained clinging to the walls of her rectum did Melissa have to push with the same force as if taking a shit to allow as much of the anal spunk to leak out.
"Mmmmph!" She grunted, causing the last of her cumfart to escape her anus accompanied by a tiny adorable squeak of a girl fart.
John Tanner, with Bruno's help again, then picked up his older daughter Julie in the same manner as they just held Melissa, and it was the 10 year old's turn now to expel her anal creampie inside the ass of the next girl, 10 year old blonde Tiffany Kessler.
Again and again the pool of cum was transferred from out one ass and into another, and when it couldn't travel anymore after reaching Trisha's rectum, the direction of transfer reversed with Trisha farting it into Jennifer's mouth, which then started the oral chain of snowballing.
When the snowball reached Karla's mouth, it was her turn to spit it into her enemy Tiffany Kessler's mouth. What was most admirable about Jim Phillips' kiddie porn stars was that no matter what their personal grudges against any of their underaged co-stars, when it came time to perform the girls became 100% professionals and time after time delivered the highest quality erotic scenes. Therefore, if the casual observer were to witness Karla and Tiffany in the middle of their cumswap, they would swear that the two rivals looked just as in love as real-life girlfriends Julie and Melissa.
Finally, the cocktail which originated from Melissa's ass ended up back inside the same hole which triggered the marathon snowball sequence.
"Okay piss princess, it's time for your dessert!" said Betty's mother Cathy.
But the piss princess, who earlier was greedily demanding her share of semen for the night, all of a sudden appeared tentative as for the past few minutes she witnessed from her couch seat just how many different anuses her beverage traveled. Even at 6 she knew enough of human anatomy to understand what the primary function of an anus was, and worried if there might be too much child fecal matter dissolved into the cocktail during its lengthy travels.
Realizing Betty's hesitation, Julie was the one to save the day.
"You know what princess? If you don't gobble this up soon I'm gonna have it ALL TO MYSELF!" she threatened, before she stuck her lips onto Melissa's closed asshole and made a sucking sound.
"Hey, that's MINE!" Betty corrected. It was a strange phenomenon when it came to children's minds and possession. A child for instance could neglect one of their toys for months, but as soon as her parents threaten to donate the toy away to charity she's all of a sudden playing with it again as if it was Christmas morning. The prospect of some other kid taking something, ANYTHING (even a pool of semen resting inside the asshole of another child), made little girls extremely territorial about what was designated "theirs" and therefore off-limits to others.
"Well, you better have it then before Julie steals all of it!" suggested Jim.
"Yeah, I'm totally gonna drink this all by myself. Yum yum yum yum yum!" Julie teased, making mock eating noises. Julie and Jim Phillips were working together as a psychological tandem in trying to coax the 6 year old into swallowing the anal creampie.
"NOOOOO!!!" The piss princess assertively objected. She stood up to push the older child away and assumed her position standing just underneath Melissa, still being carried by the two adults. Betty was still so short that she didn't even need to crouch or squat. She instead stood with her head tilted up so that her mouth was about 4 inches underneath Melissa's ass. Betty still had on a somewhat skeptical face.
It was Karla's turn next to try to convince the 1st grader that there was no harm in getting sick from drinking the concoction. The latin 9 year old walked next to where Betty was standing and extended her palm just under Melissa's ass.
"Hey Melissa, can you squeeze out just a little for me?" asked Karla.
Melissa complied by releasing a tiny trickle of cum out of her ass, a quantity similar to a dollop of shampoo.
"See Betty? I mean princess. Look at this cum. It's all white just like normal cum, isn't it?"
"Uh huh. But I'm scared there might be poo inside."
"What poo? Can you see any? Cus I can't."
"Look, I'm gonna smell it. It smells like cum and nothing else." Karla takes a strong whiff of the white pool in her palm. "There. Now you give it a smell."
Betty next smells the semen resting on Karla's hand.
"What does it smell like?"
"Like that swimming pool water when the swimming pool is inside of a building. Like normal sperm." Betty's description was referring to the musky, chlorinated odor that permeated around indoor swimming pools at public health clubs and such. It was a fairly accurate approximation.
"Now smell Melissa's butt. Can you smell any poo on her?" suggested Karla.
Betty takes another strong whiff, this time with her nose an inch away from Melissa's anal opening. Meanwhile Melissa is straining because she's been upright clamping her ass shut with her creampie inside for so long, giving her the worst phantom sensations of having diarrhea.
"She just smells like that lotion grown ups put on girls before fucking them in the pussy or butt (referring to the KY jelly)."
"That's right. So do you think what's inside her butt is safe to eat? Should we give it all to Julie ... or maybe, ALL TO ME?!" and suddenly Karla eats up the cum on her hand with one swift slurp.
"No, it's all mine! You get yours next time! Julie too!" shouted Betty. And Karla too gets pushed out of the way so Betty can assume her original standing position under Melissa.
"Atta girl piss princess. Okay Melissa, give the princess her creme brulee!" ordered Jim.
Melissa opened her ass for a second time and farted its contents into the demanding 6 year old's small mouth. Her creampie flowed out like frothy microbrewed beer dripping out the tap at the local pub.
Because Betty's mouth was that small, Melissa had to stop her flow several times by clenching her ass again, in order to give the smaller child a chance to properly swallow her offering, before opening her tap again. This continued about 9 or 10 times until no more liquid flowed out and only the air that's been trapped in her rectum escaped, causing her anal flap to open and close.
"THE PISS PRINCESS HAS ACCEPTED HER ROYAL MEAL!" shouted Cathy.
"Tell me PLEASE that you got all that Alex, or else your ass is fired." Jim Phillips asked, turning to Alex Rhodes, the night's photographer and videographer.
"Oh yes sir, every last bit. From different angles too." assured Alex, Melissa's father. As unfair as he thought it was not getting to fuck any of the children himself this night, Alex the pedophile was still sporting a rock hard cock under his jeans from recording his beautiful daughter expel 8 loads of semen into the mouth of a once completely innocent (and now somewhat less innocent) little blonde child.
"Okay, good man." said Jim. "Now we can move on to the next part of the night."
Suddenly, there was a shrieking from one of the women, Helen, from across the room. When the revelers turned to see what had suddenly so frightened her, their eyes came across two silhouetted figures from just beyond the doorway leading into the family room.
FUCK! Every adult internally swore to themselves. They weren't expecting any other guests this night and the Kessler sisters' parents weren't due to pick up their daughters until 2 or 3 in the morning.
Every adult guest was momentarily paralyzed by a combination of fear and confusion. Has a neighbor seen something? But all the blinds and curtains in the house were closed. Could it be the POLICE?! But the front door was locked. Was this the end??? Is this how the neighborhood pedophile ring will meet its demise, and the Jim Phillips child porn empire along with it???
Although trying to maintain the most composure out of anyone else in the room, Jim Phillips' heart was still racing like a cheetah and his mind spinning.
If those are two members of local law enforcement, or the FBI, standing just beyond his doorway, what exactly can any man say when caught filming a nude 11 year old girl as she shits semen into the mouth of a nude 6 year old girl?
To be Continued
Jack HOff
5,000 square foot is a massive mega home? Hmm, well I suppose that perception of size works in tandem with writing about 8,9,10 and 11-year old girls taking a 10' cock both anally and vaginally and hungrily bouncing on it; and a 6-year-old girl sucking 16 cocks (8 cocks twice each). These efforts might be flirting just a bit with the fringes of exaggeration, hmm? The reader's disbelief sort of undermines the plotline actually working.
But, .... I am enjoying the series. Maybe try to slow it down a bit, and add much more detail. The whole thing is sort of reading like the 1-minute leap-fuck party game. Not enough detail, too rapid a pace.
Go back and read the original 'Tina: ...' stories from which you are deriving this series, and see how the author developed the descriptive elements of the stories, and let us become immersed in the action, and 'feel' what Tina was feeling. The reader at once wants to rescue her, and fuck her. It's a dichotomy which raises the emotions and holds the attention.
Thanks for your monumental effort, here. These stories could become classics (just like the original 'Tina: Younger/older' are classics. ) With some editing, rewriting and really 'fleshing out' the characters (pun intended). Cheers!
mike
Samuel
Hymen Roth
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