Victoria's (Not So) Secret, Part 3

[ M/g, g10, g5, paedo, schoolgirl, fondle, mast, seduc, oral, ws ]

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Published: 16-Apr-2012

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Author's Note: All of my stories are FICTION, borne out of an over active imagination and a fondness for children... these events did not happen and therefore should not to be viewed by minors, miners or mynahs. If you fall into one of these categories, then I suggest that you march yourself immediately to your local police station and throw yourself on their mercy. Failing that you could just stop reading!!

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NOTE: This is an UPDATED version of the previously posted Part Three which contained some errors. This was due to changing the characters names halfway through the story and unfortunately, some got missed. Just in case I have missed any more (hopefully I haven't!) LISA is Vicky's Mum, HELEN is the babysitter!"

Sorry for any confusion!

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The door opened and 10 year old Victoria froze in horror. She was sat on the toilet, one hand down her little girl Barbie knickers diddling her little clit, the other holding the child porn magazine she'd spotted hidden behind the cupboard. George stood there open mouthed, momentarily lost for words as he took in the sight. Vicky stared back, not knowing what to say either. Strangely enough, she never removed her hand from her knickers. George's cock hardened in an instant, but was hidden from view by the dust coat he wore.

"Feeling better are we?" George finally spoke.

"I... er..." Vicky spluttered.

Suddenly realising, she pulled her hand from her knickers like she'd suddenly been stung, and smoothed her skirt down.

"I think you better come and sit down here," he said, patting the sofa as he sat down. "I think we need to talk!"

Victoria hobbled over and sat down, her skirt riding up as she did. George looked down at her smooth silky legs, something which didn't go unnoticed by 10 year old Vicky and she stored the information away.

"So..." George said, "what are we going to do about this then?"

Vicky innocently shrugged her shoulders.

"Do you think I should report this to your parents? The head teacher? Or what?"

She may have been only 10 years old, but Victoria certainly wasn't naive... nor stupid, especially when it came to sexual matters. She just laughed.

"I don't think they would laugh Vicky," George said.

"I know they won't... because I KNOW you're not going to tell them!"

"What makes you so sure?" he asked.

She laughed harder.

"You are going to go and report me? Okay. For a start, you shouldn't have bought me in her in the first place... and then you're going to tell them you caught me looking at a child porn magazine... one that belongs to YOU?"

Now it was George's turn to splutter.

"I... er... I..." he was lost for words.

"Look," Vicky began, "I've seen you looking at me. I saw you looking at my legs just now, and then the look on your face when you saw me with my hand in my knickers..." she said. Without giving him a chance to reply, she added, "I bet if I put my hand on your cock right now it would be rock hard!"

"Okay..." George admitted reluctantly, "You win. Now what?"

Vicky mulled the options over. She still hadn't relieved the itch between her legs. She smiled as she made her decision.

******

Vicky still had Tony's cock in her 5 year old mouth. Cum dribbled down her chin and out of her nose where she'd coughed and gagged. She'd still had her eyes closed when the bedroom door had opened. The noise made her eyes fly open and she saw Helen standing in the door frame. Her little naked body shook with fear at being caught in such a compromising position, and she quickly prepared herself for the biggest telling off she'd ever had in her 5 short years. She thought about what her Mummy would say, and the trouble she was in. She was in for a very big surprise... Helen smiled at her!

As her eyes welled up with tears, she couldn't believe what she was seeing. Helen was actually smiling at her. Tony turned around to look at his sister, causing his cock to come out of little Victoria's mouth with a pop.

"Hello sis!" he said with a big smile.

Little Vicky was now totally confused. Tony spoke like it was an everyday thing to be on the bed with a 5 year old girl who was stark naked, covered in cum, and until a few seconds ago, had her tiny mouth stuffed with cock.

"Hey... hey... hey..." she said softly, walking towards Vicky, "What's all the tears about sweetheart?"

Little Vicky was even more confused now. Helen stretched her arms out for the little girl.

"Don't you look a sexy girl?" she said to her softly. "Have you been good?"

Vicky tried to smile and nodded. It was a cummy one too, long ropes of the goo still dripping from her face.

"Has she been good Uncle Tony?"

"VERY good!" he replied with a wink. "You're such a big girl aren't you Vicky?"

Again the little girl nodded, feeling more relaxed now.

"Best get you cleaned up a bit eh?" he said to the little 5 year old.

"Hold on!" Helen said moving to the cupboard. "We can't let this special moment pass unrecorded..."

She reached in and brought out a digital camera. She then took a dozen or so shots of little Vicky's cum covered face from various angles and distances.

"That's better..." she said, reviewing them on the camera's little screen. "Go with Uncle Tony and he'll clean you up darling!"

Vicky went to reach for her clothes.

"Don't worry about those..." Helen said, "you won't need them for a little while."

Taking her by the hand, Tony led her into the bathroom. Helen smiled to herself. From the very first moment she'd seen little Victoria, she just KNEW the girl was ripe for the picking. She'd never, ever been wrong.

*****

It was George's turn to be shocked now. She had him by the bollocks. He knew it, and more dangerously, Vicky knew it. She stayed silent for a minute or so. She wanted to let him stew just a tiny bit after his empty threat. All sorts of things were going through George's mind. The loss of his job, the court case, what friends, neighbours and the local press would say. He could see the headline in his mind's eye...

"Paedophile Caretaker Jailed... How Safe Are Our Kids?"

Then of course there would be the police investigation. He shuddered at the thought of that. If there was an investigation then that was it and his life would be over. He thought back over the years and the various children of various ages that he'd sucked and fucked... and had sucked him. A lot of them were grown up with kids of their own now. He imagined them crawling out of the woodwork to tell THEIR story, lured by the thought of big compensation payments they'd receive upon his conviction. He imagined cell doors slamming, being called a "nonce" and "beast". He shuddered again. There was no doubt about it, George was scared... VERY scared, and his fate lay with the 10 year old girl sitting next to him.

Vicky suddenly spoke, bringing George out of his reverie with a jump.

"You're lucky..." she said to him.

"How do you make that out?" he replied.

"That it's me and not someone else!" the 10 year old told him.

"I don't follow you?" he said, puzzled.

"Well as I see it, it's like this..." she explained. "You're a paedophile... don't deny it..."

"I wasn't about to!" he protested. "I could hardly deny it after what you found can I?"

"S'pose not," Vicky said with a chuckle. She continued. "I know what paedophiles like... I know enough of them!" she said with a sly wink.

George pondered for a moment, trying to take in what the 10 year old had just said.

"Are you saying what I think you're saying?" he asked her.

"What do you think I'm saying?" she asked.

"Well... unless I've misunderstood... I think you're saying..." he took a deep breath, "that you've had sex?"

"Hmmm... yeah... I was actually saying a little bit more though..."

With that she reached over and placed a hand on the hard lump in his trousers.

"Oh... my... god..." George gasped as he felt her squeeze his hard cock.

******

The naked little 5 year old came strolling back into the bedroom holding Tony's hand, all happy, clean and bright eyed.

"Hello poppet!" Helen said warmly with a smile, "all nice and clean now my little angel?"

Vicky nodded as she climbed back onto the bed.

"Here you are sweetheart," Helen said, handing her the tube of promised smarties.

"Thank you!" she said sweetly.

"I've downloaded those pictures onto the hard drive," Helen said quietly to her brother, "they're hot!"

Tony walked over to the PC in the corner of the room, clicked the mouse a few times and was rewarded when a picture of little Victoria popped up. It was a close up shot of her face with cum dripping down it.

"Look Vicky!" Helen said pointing to the computer screen.

Vicky's lips were a myriad of different colours from her sweets, as she looked over and giggled.

"It's ME!" she shrieked.

"And don't you look a very big, very sexy girl!" Helen added.

Vicky's little flat chest swelled with pride. Tony flicked through the set, eliciting a little squeal from Victoria as each one showed on screen. Helen noticed how fascinated Victoria seemed to be with the images. She grabbed another chair and put it next to Tony's.

Beckoning Vicky over with her finger she said, "Come and sit over here sweetie... want to see some more of other boys and girls?"

Vicky smiled as she rolled off the bed and climbed up into Helen's lap. Helen felt the soft warm skin of her bum cheek on her thigh as the little 5 year old wriggled to get comfortable.

"Let's start with these shall we?" she said, clicking the mouse and opening up a folder full of images.

The thumbnails showed a collection of images of a little girl around Vicky's age, possibly slighter younger, but not much. Helen clicked the first thumbnail and the full image appeared of a little blonde girl's face smiling and staring into the camera. She was very pretty, with red cherry lips and a little upturned nose, lightly dusted with freckles. Her light blonde hair was in bunches, held by elastic hair bands adorned with little cherries. Helen cuddled little Vicky into her, her fingertips lightly caressing and stroking her flat little chest, dancing across her tiny nipples making them stick out slightly. With her other hand, she undid a couple of buttons on her blouse, revealing the fleshy mounds of her small pert breasts. She noticed Vicky take a quick look and noted her interest for later.

"She's a pretty girl..." Vicky observed.

"So are you!" Helen said lovingly as she gently squeezed one of Vicky's nipples between her finger and thumb, "isn't she Uncle Tony?"

Vicky was so engrossed in the pictures and the nice feelings from Helen, she'd almost forgotten that Tony was even there.

"She sure is!" Tony agreed adding, "And a very big sexy girl... AND... a great kisser as well!"

She felt Vicky's chest swell with pride at that.

"Great kisser? Big girl kisses?" Helen asked.

"Uh-huh!" Vicky murmured with a nodding head and a big smile.

"Can I have one? A BIG grown up girl kiss?"

Vicky looked up sweetly into Helen's eyes and nodded eagerly.

Helen placed a hand gently at the back of Victoria's head and brought her face to her own. As she noticed Vicky start to close her eyes, with her other hand, she signalled the digital camera to her brother behind little Vicky's back, before bringing her lips to Vicky's. She felt the little girl on her lap slip her tongue just inside her own mouth, and her tongue came to meet it as she closed her eyes. She could hear the bleep of the camera as Tony took pictures of the naked 5 year old on the lap of the adult woman, the pair of them locked in a passionate kiss. As their tongues did a merry little dance, Helen stroked down the little girls back and cupped one of her smooth soft little bum cheeks. The other hand continued to play with Vicky's flat little nipples, as the little girl moaned with pleasure into Helen's mouth. As they broke away, Helen opened her eyes and saw Tony signalling "four" with his fingers, indicating the number of pictures taken.

"Oh... you ARE a great kisser!" she said encouragingly to the little naked 5 year old.

She then clicked the mouse to show the blonde girl in full length. She was dressed in a short denim skirt and a pink "Minnie Mouse" t-shirt.

"What's her name?" asked Vicky.

"That's Tamara," Helen told her, "but everyone calls her Tammy. She's a little younger than you. She's not 5 yet. Actually her birthday's next week!"

"Oh!" was all Vicky said.

"You'll see her tomorrow. I look after her as well, but her Mummy wasn't working today so I didn't need to look after her."

"Is she a good kisser as well?" Vicky asked innocently.

Tony and Helen both laughed.

"Yes she is..." Helen answered.

"But not as good as you though!" Tony added, not wanting the 5 year old to feel second best.

"Do you look after lots of little girls?" she asked.

"A few... and boys too... you'll get to meet them all eventually I'm sure."

Helen clicked the next picture which showed Tammy had taken her t-shirt off and in the following one, the skirt had gone as well so that she was standing in just a little pair of lime green knickers. In the picture that followed, Helen could be seen licking the little girls non existent titties.

"Ooh!" Vicky squealed when she saw it. "You're kissing her boobies!"

"That's right!" Helen said.

"Why?" the little girl asked.

"Because it makes her feel nice. Doesn't it feel nice when I play with your little boobies?"

Vicky nodded.

"Well, it feels even nicer when it's a mouth or a tongue."

Vicky thought about it for a moment. She remembered Tony's hot tongue on her little pussy and it made sense.

"Want me to show you?" Helen asked.

Shyly, Vicky nodded. As Helen bent her head down, Tony picked the camera up again.

******

George thought he'd died and gone to heaven as the little 10 year old, the one who had been the object of so many of his wank fantasies, fumbled with his zip. She was going to get his cock out, and she was doing it willingly. He tentatively reached over to Victoria and stroked her upper thigh, wondering what her reaction might be.

The reaction he got wasn't what he expected as Vicky's legs parted to give him better access. His cock suddenly sprang out and Vicky gasped at its size. The purple head looked angry and was oozing pre cum, as she took a firm hold and gently stroked him.

"Oooh..." George murmured as the 10 year old played with his piss hole, rubbing the pre-cum over its head, making him produce more.

George lifted her skirt up to reveal Vicky's Barbie knickers. He was right, she WAS wearing little girl ones. In fact, she had on the same pair as his own 4 year old Granddaughter owned. He knew, because he'd seen them many times. Vicky shuffled closer to him as she continued to stroke his cock. George's hand slipped under the waistband and the tip of his finger found her hard little nubbin.

"Oh yeah... rub it George... rub there... nice and hard!"

George did as he was asked and started to diddle her love button. He felt the girls hand squeeze him tighter and stroke him faster.

"Mmm... oh yeah baby... you are good!" he spluttered as the 10 year old wanked him.

Vicky lifted her hips and with her other hand, pulled her knickers down and off so that she could spread her legs nice and wide.

"Lick me!" she gasped to George. "Please... lick me... bring me off with your tongue!"

She was almost begging him now.

George, being a confirmed paedophile, wasted no time in dropping to his knees in front of her splayed legs. Victoria shuffled to the edge of the old sofa and raised her legs up so that George had easy access to both her holes. He took each of her legs and placed them on his shoulders as she felt his hot breath on her pussy and his mouth closed on her.

******

Helen sucked on the little 5 year old's non existent titty, flicking the tiny coral coloured nipple with her tongue.

"Mmm... feels nice!" Vicky squealed, her hands on Helen's head pulling her closer to her little body.

Tony meanwhile, was clicking away with the camera.

When she brought her head up she asked her, "Was that nice darling?"

Little Vicky nodded her head.

"Shall we go back to the bed? We can always look at these again later can't we?"

Vicky nodded eagerly, the naked little girl jumping off Helen's lap.

"I think it's unfair!" Tony said with a sly wink to Helen.

"Why?" Helen asked him, playing along.

"Well... Vicky's the only one with no clothes on... aren't you sweetheart?"

Vicky smiled and nodded.

"I think Helen ought to take hers off as well... don't you?"

Vicky was nodding eagerly.

"Fair enough!" Helen said, sounding like it was a chore, as she started to unbutton the silky blouse she had on.

Once undone, she let it fall to the floor. Then she undid her skirt and that followed suit. All the time, Vicky was watching her intently from the bed. She stood there in her see through red knickers and looked at Vicky.

"Want to take them down for me sweetie?"

The 5 year old pondered the question for a second, before saying "Yeah!" with a big, beaming smile, scrambling across the bed on her hands and knees towards Helen.

When she reached her, she put a hand on each side of Helen's knickers and began to tug at them, as the camera started beeping again. Vicky got them down to mid thigh, but the gusset caught by Helen wet slit.

"Oops!" Helen laughed, looking down where they were caught.

Vicky immediately reached for the part that was caught and dragged them down. Helen gasped as she felt the 5 year old's hand brush her pussy. Helen stepped out of her knickers and was as naked as little Vicky now.

Although she was in her 20's, Helen's body looked like that of a 12 year old. Her tits well small and pointy - hardly enough to fill a bra so she never bothered with one. A smooth flat tummy, leading down to an equally smooth, hairless pussy. Helen had never had much in the way of pubic hair anyway, and the little she did grow, she got rid off as soon as it had appeared. She had sought out a very expensive cream to do the job, which was long lasting and did away with any itching or "stubble". Her pussy was as smooth now as it was when SHE was 5! Her pussy lips hadn't developed much either and so her pussy had the look of a little girls. She climbed onto the bed next to little Vicky.

"Are you going to suck MY boobies now?" she asked the 5 year old.

Vicky leaned over and latched her mouth clumsily onto Helen's left tit.

"Ooh... that's nice baby!" she said encouragingly. "But I think I need to show you how to do it properly eh?"

Vicky unlatched herself and looking up at Helen, nodded.

"Now you have to be gentle... suck it nice and gently... see this bit here?" she said pointing to a nipple. "That's called a nipple... like you've got... see?"

Vicky looked down at her own flat little chest.

"Now they're the best bit... you can flick them with your tongue or suck them... but as long as you do it gently because they're very sensitive," she explained. "Want to try again?"

Vicky nodded and moved her mouth back onto Helen's tit.

*******

"OOH... YEAHHH!" Vicky gasped, grabbing the back of George's head and pulling him onto her bald 10 year old pussy.

George ate her like a man starved. Well he was. He hadn't had any real pre-teen pussy in a while... well except his Granddaughter's of course, but that was "on tap" so to speak. What he hadn't had for some time was FRESH, preteen pussy, and as the opportunity didn't always knock very often, he was determined that he was going to make the most of this hot little nympho.

He pushed his tongue into her tight, slippery love tube, feeling no resistance. Her juices were flowing and he lapped it up like a kitten at a bowl of cream. In George's eyes, or more to the point mouth, there was nothing tastier than a pre-teen pussy. It was always sweeter than any woman's. Fragrant and light, not musky Hard to describe, but the sweetest tasting nectar in the world. Vicky was thrusting her slim hips at George as the man tongue fucked her.

"Oh... Oh... Oh..." she gasped with each thrust.

George brought a hand up and started rubbing her clit at the same time, while the other sought out the tight, wrinkled rosebud of her anal hole.

"Oh yeah... put a finger in... fuck my arse hole!" Vicky began to shriek as George's digit invaded her sphincter.

"Aaah... yeahhh... gonna cum... aaahh... YYYEEESSSS!"

George felt Vicky's bum muscle contracting and her body start to judder as her cum rippled through her 10 year old body. Her legs automatically came together. almost suffocating George as she thrashed about in ecstasy.

"Ooh... yeeeaahh... yeeeaahh... ooooh goddd!"

George eased off to let her come down naturally from her pleasure peak.

After a few minutes, Vicky had recovered from her orgasm, with that dreamy look little girls have after a climax.

"You look like you needed that!" George said to the 10 year old in school uniform as she lay on the sofa, skirt up around her waist, legs splayed obscenely, her bald little pussy glistening from her own juices and from George's tongue.

Vicky nodded dreamily with a big grin.

"You don't know how much!" she replied.

George leant forward and kissed her, as she reached for his hard cock which was covered in slippery pre-cum. Slowly she pulled on his cock.

"Oh... yeah..." he sighed, as Vicky slid off the sofa so that her face was in line with his manhood.

With one hand, she took a firm grip at the base of his cock, the other stroking his balls, as she stuck her tongue out and swirled it around the head. She knew from experience that George wouldn't last very long, as she slipped her lips over the head.

"Aaahh!" George gasped again as the 10 year old expertly started to give him head.

His hands reached down and took hold of the back of her head. Getting the hint, Vicky removed her hands and allowed George to use her mouth as a fuck tool as he began to fuck her mouth.

"Hmmph... hmmph..." Vicky made sounds as George's cock slid back and forth.

Vicky gulped each time George thrusted forward, driving him wild. George wanted to prolong the pleasure, but fucking the mouth of a half naked 10 year old was just too much and he soon lost the battle.

"OOH... FUCK... YEAH..." he grunted, thrusting hard into the girls mouth as he erupted.

Vicky was prepared as she brought his cock to the edge of her mouth and it began to discharge its hot thick load. She swallowed quickly matching his spurts, her experience and expertise clearly showing, and not spilling a single drop. As he slowed and eventually stopped, Victoria slipped his cock back into her mouth and sucked the last few drops from him, before pulling off and then sitting herself back up.

"Jeez..." George said breathlessly, "that is the best blow job I have EVER had in my ENTIRE life!"

Smiling, Vicky said, "Well I've had a lot of practice!" as she slipped her knickers back on and straightened her skirt.

By chance she spotted the clock on the wall.

"Shit!" she said, "It's almost time to get to class!"

"Time flies when you're having fun Vick!" George replied.

As if on cue, the bell rang.

"Can we meet up again?" George asked.

Grabbing her bag, Vicky nodded.

"When?"

"Tomorrow?" Vicky suggested. "My Mum's at work all day, but we can't use my place... bloody nosy neighbours... they'd tell my Mum!"

"No problem. You know where my bungalow is don't you?"

It was in the school grounds so it wasn't hard for her to miss. Vicky nodded, checking herself in the mirror.

"10 O'clock?" she said.

"See you then sweetheart!" George said, quickly pecking her lips.

As quick as a flash, Vicky left Georges office and with a slight limp, made her way to her class. George stood there in a daze, not believing what had happened in the last half hour.

David Jennings watched unseen as Vicky left George's office and wondered why she'd been there. It was his nature to find out why and use it to his advantage.........

********

As 5 year old Vicky leaned over and sucked on Helen's nipple, the woman caressed her smooth silky bottom. She rubbed her fingers along the crack before pulling her open with a couple of fingers, and then stabbing the outside with another. She then moved her hand underneath and stroked the hairless little slit there as Vicky came off.

"Oh you are so good baby!" the woman cooed at her, as she continued to stroke her pussy. "Is that nice?" she asked as she diddled her little clitty.

Vicky nodded, as Tony moved in for a few close up shots.

"How about making Auntie Helen feel nice the same way eh?" she asked, taking the little girls hand and moving it between her own open legs.

With her hand guiding Vicky's, she stroked her own smooth slit and manoeuvred the 5 year old's fingers to rub at her clit.

"Mmm... you... are... so good..." she said encouragingly, "put your finger right inside it sweetie," she said, guiding the little girls small digit into her wet hole. "Oh... yeah... that's it in there... push it in... and out..."

Helen had hold of the 5 year old's wrist and was showing her how to finger fuck her.

"Oh that's nice... really nice!" she encouraged. "Stick another finger in... and another..."

Vicky did as she was asked and was pumping three of her tiny soft fingers in and out of Helen's sopping snatch.

"Make a fist with you hand baby... like this..." Helen balled her hand to show her, "now put it in..."

Helen reached for the little girl's wrist again and using her like a dildo, began to pump her 5 year old fist in and out of her pussy.

"OH YEAH... YEAH... GONNA... MAKE... ME... CUM... YESSS... CUMMMMMMIN!" she gasped.

Tony moved in with the camera to catch 5 year old Vicky fisting his sister.

"Oh yeah sis... that is SO hot!" he told her.

Helen came hard on the little girls fist, coating it with juices. Eventually Victoria pulled her fist out and she saw it was wet and sticky.

"Urrgh... I'm all wet!" she said, holding her hand up and looking at it.

"That's my special juice... like Uncle Tony had?"

Vicky nodded her understanding.

"Does it taste nice, like his does?" she asked.

"Very!" Helen replied, taking the little girls hand and licking it to demonstrate.

Copying Helen, Vicky stuck her tongue out and licked Helen's juice from her hand.

"Mmm... yummy!" she agreed and continued to lick her hand clean without further prompting.

Tony snapped away, recording her first taste of woman juice.

"Some really great shots sis!" Tony told her.

"Am I still a sexy girl?" 5 year old Vicky asked innocently.

"Oh yes, you most definitely are!" Helen replied, pulling the naked girl on top of her and kissing her head. "A very, VERY sexy little girl" she told her, hugging her close.

The trill of the ringing telephone broke the moment, and putting her finger to her lips, signalled for Vicky and Tony to be quiet as she picked it up.

"Hello? ... yes speaking... oh hello Lisa... oh right... no problem... hold on I'll just get her..."

She pressed the mute button.

"Mummy wants to speak to you poppet..." she told Vicky handing her the receiver, "don't forget... our little secret?" she whispered to her.

Vicky nodded as Helen released the mute button.

"Hello Mummy!" she squealed. "Oh yes...I've had lots of fun..."

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blackpedo

In part 1 of this story, Vicky's mom is named Lisa and the caretaker's name is Helen. When I started the story, I thought Vicky's mom had just caught her with Tony's cock in her mouth! Please remember your character's correct names. Otherwise, this is a fantastic story so far.

Darles Chickens

Sorry for any confusion - I changed the character names halfway through writing it, but it looks like I may have missed one or two. Apologies for that!
Anyhow I have rechecked and rewritten where needed and a REVISED VERSION of part 3 will be posted very shortly.
However, I am confused now as you state that in 'part 2' the caretaker... the caretaker doesn't appear until part 2! lol
(Unless by 'caretaker' you are referring to the childminder?)
To clarify, LISA is Vickys Mum HELEN is the child minder (it did start out the other way around at one point though!)

Glad you like the story anyway!
DC

A Happy Fan

I would just like to say that i love this series and that i am eagerly awaiting part 4. Thank you!

vince

cant wait for part four if u mad any mistakes i didnt catch em. I was hard reading all of them cant get her off my mind

Casper

I first read this last night, and I woke up this morning thinking about Vicky so I read it again, what a great story. I see its been some time since it was written, but I'm hoping you eventually continue the story. Thanks

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