Olivia Twiste, Part 1

[ MM/g, MM/g, g7, g8, g10, fondle, cons, finger, plotset, buildup, pedo, schoolgirl ]

carrolllewiswriter@rushpost.com

Published: 24-Aug-2012

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This story is a work of fiction which means that it did NOT happen. If stories featuring adult/child sex offend you, THEN DON'T READ IT!

The author and copyright holder of this story is CARROLL LEWIS.

Olivia was an orphan. Her mother Joanne Twiste had died shortly after Olivia had entered the world. Despite the best efforts of the medical team, the haemorrhage was just too much and nothing could be done to save her. With no other relatives capable or willing to take the new born baby, social services had stepped in and Olivia had been placed with numerous foster parents although at just 7 years of age, she didn't remember many of them. She quite liked the couple she was with now. Jenny and Mike Bumble were a kind couple. They lived in a nice house and of course Olivia, or 'Livvy' as the Bumbles called her, had her own room, all pink, girlie and full of Bratz and Barbie dolls. There was a nice garden with a slide and a swing, and in the summer there was a pool. Livvy loved to splash about in it and run around the garden naked.

There was a nice old couple living next door as well, but they were often away visiting their son. On the other side there was Robert Fagin. Livvy liked him. In the summer when she was running around in the nude, he would always be out there making Livvy chuckle and squirting her with water. Sometimes his friend Bill would pop round and the three of them would have a water fight. Livvy liked Bill too because he normally brought his little dog Bullseye with him. Sometimes Bill's girlfriend Nancy came over with him, but usually it was just Bill.

Quite often Robert or Bob as everyone called him, would have some sweets for Livvy, or he would buy her an ice cream when the chimes could be heard. Sometimes he would just give her a pound coin and say 'here ya go Liv - get some sweeties darling'. Olivia was normally a very shy and naive girl, but she always remembered her manners.

'Thank you Mr Fagin,' she would say and Bob would roll his eyes at her.

'How many more times...' he would say to her, 'call me Bob... or Uncle Bob if you want to,'

Livvy put her hand to her mouth and giggled.

'Oh Yeah!' she said in her sing song way. 'I keep forgetting!'

'That's cos you're a silly sausage!' Bob said with a smile.

Olivia giggled again. Just then a little bundle of golden fur came bounding down Bob's garden; all tongue and saliva as he made a beeline for the fence near to where Livvy was standing.

'Bullseye!.....bullseye!' Bill was shouting as he came through the side gate and into the garden.

'One word from you Bill....' Bob said,

'And he does as he bloody well likes!' Bill told him with a laugh.

'It's cos he likes you Livvy don't he?' Bob said to the little 7 year old.

Livvy just nodded. She was squatted down and stroking Bullseye through the fence, the little golden Labrador responding by licking Livvy's hand.

Unnoticed by Olivia, Bill & Bob looked at one another, then at the naked, squatting Olivia, and smiled to each other. An unspoken communication passed between them, and they both knew what each other was thinking. Of course Olivia was oblivious to what the two men were really thinking or what their motivations were.

'I hope you're not being a pain Livvy!' John Sowerberry called from the door of the kitchen which led into the garden.

'She's fine John,' Bob called back.

'Okay then, but if she gets too much, make sure you tell her!' he shouted.

'No worries mate!' he replied.

Bill looked at Bob. They both knew they could NEVER have enough of the little naked 7 year old crouched down in front of them.

'By the way,' Bob said to Bill with a wink, 'I have something to show you.'

Bill smiled.

'Shall we?'

It was a statement more than a question.

'We'll back shortly Liv,' Bob said to the little girl who was still stroking the dog.

'Okay!' she replied without looking up as Bill and Bob headed towards the house.

Once they were in the house they knew it was relatively safe to talk openly. Immediately Bob adjusted his cock through his jog pants which was now rock hard. Bob noticed him do it and laughed.

'She is one little hottie!' Bill said with a smile.

'Tell me about it!' Bob replied. 'Every time I see her I get a hard on! I just wanna lick her slit so bad!'

'Patience is a virtue my old son...' Bill said with a wry smile.

'Yeah right,' Bob replied, 'it's alright for you... you have Jackie!'

'I know!' Bill said with a big grin.

The grin was deliberate as he knew it always wound his friend up.

'Fuck ya!' Bob said laughing, 'I ain't gonna show you now!'

Bill responded by pulling his mobile phone out.

'Okay, I'll just give Jackie a quick call...'

'You wanker!' Bob said laughing.

'Ain't I just...but I bet you do it more than me....I have Jackie!'

Bob knew he was beat, as he always was. The two men walked over to the computer and Bob switched it on. As it booted up, Bob thought about Jackie....

Jacqueline Hawkins was 10 years old and although she was older than Livvy, she was also a total opposite. She had opinions about everything and wasn't backwards in coming forwards. If there was one thing she REALLY hated it was being called 'Jacqueline', so every one called her 'Jackie' or 'Jack'. Everyone that was, except her mother.

'I named you Jacqueline...so that's what I will call you...like it or lump it!' she would say.

'Fuck you bitch!' Jackie would say under her breath.

There wasn't much love lost between mother and daughter. She was the second youngest in a family of six children so she'd had to fight for attention with her siblings. Her family were poor. Their council house was run down and in bad repair. The carpets, where there was any, were threadbare, the walls were permanently stripped of wallpaper and covered in childish scrawls. The younger kids clothes were hand-me-downs from their older siblings.

To look at her, you wouldn't have thought butter would melt in her mouth, but they say looks are deceiving at times. Jackie was a master at deceit. With her long dirty blonde hair, freckles and slight frame, she looked much younger than her 10 years. Most people who met her described her as 'cute' and Jackie knew how to use that to full advantage, especially when it came to men, and usually managed to get exactly what she wanted.

Bill had met the family through his girlfriend Nancy. Her mother had been a friend of Jackie's mother. Bill was immediately enamoured by all the kids but especially the 8 year old Jackie - as she was when he first met her. Back then she was a totally different, shy sort of girl. He took to her and her to him immediately. Before long, whenever he visited, she would make a beeline for him and she would end up sitting on his lap; sometimes after an argument with her little sister Josie. That was when it had all started for her.

Jackie had been sitting on Bill's lap. She had her hair tied back in a pony tail and as it was summer, she had on a thin, sleeveless summer dress. It was a bit short on her but it was nice, light and the yellow and orange colours were just perfect for summer.

She some of the other kids were outside playing, her Mum was in the kitchen and her Dad was out. Jackie sat next to Bill on the sofa with her legs tucked up behind her, her head resting against him. Bill had his arm around the 8 year old, his hand resting on the top of her thigh close to her bum. He began to gently rub and caress the top of her leg. Bill made it seem like it was an innocent, absent-minded act but it was part of his plan. Bill ALWAYS had a plan. Gradually, every so often, he would move his hand so that he rubbed her bum. He carefully and discreetly observed the girl for any sign of discomfort, embarrassment, horror or the like. However, there was no reaction from the girl at all and Bill smiled inwardly. He needed to be sure that she was aware of what he was doing as they watched the TV. The only other person in the room was Josie but she was absorbed in her toys on the floor on the other side of the room, so she wouldn't have noticed anything.

Bill moved his hand onto her little round bum and left it there for a couple of minutes. Again, he began to gradually caress her little globes through the thin material of her dress. Suddenly Jackie moved and Bill was expecting the worst, but she was simply changing her position slightly. The 8 year old had turned herself into Bill even more, so that she was lying more on her tummy than her side. Bill wondered whether this was by design or accident, as it now gave him better access to her sweet little bum. He began to caress it even more, making it totally obvious what he was doing. Jackie looked up at him.

'You okay darling?' Bill asked as he continued to caress her.

Jackie nodded.

'Just getting comfy...' the girl smiled sweetly.

At was at that precise moment Bill knew he had her and it was all downhill from here. His cock was stiffening at the mere thought of what might lay ahead.

About ten minutes later, after having a good grope of 8 year old Jackie's bum albeit on the outside of her clothes, Bill spoke.

'Sorry darling, but you have to get up...I need a wee!' he laughed.

Jackie lifted herself up from him.

'Oh and I need to pop out for some cigarettes...' he said getting up.

His cock was rock hard and tenting out a bit. He wondered if the little girl noticed as he discreetly adjusted himself. He quickly climbed the stairs to the toilet and noticed that as well as being hard, he had leaked copious amounts of pre cum. He wiped his cock and struggled to force the piss out. After flushing he came back down, and was met at the bottom of the stairs by an excited looking Jackie.

'Hello sweetie pops,' Bill said with a smile.

'Can I come?' the sweet 8 year old asked.

'Err... I dunno...' Bill said, 'you best ask your Mum if you can?'

Jackie ran off and Bill heard her asking her mother if she could go with him.

'Whatever!' came the muttered reply.

Jackie came skipping back. 'Mum says I can go!' she said with a smile.

'Lets go then!' Bill replied, and with that they were both out the door.

They got in, buckled up and Bill started the engine. It was a hot day so he switched the air conditioning on. He looked down and across, admiring the little white thighs he could see there. He couldn't quite see the treasure he wanted to though, and that disappointed him. Whilst the car was cooling inside he decided he would take the plunge.

'Did you enjoy what I was doing in there?' he asked the cute little 8 year old.

Jackie looked a little puzzled.

'What do you mean?' she asked.

'What I was doing in there while we were watching TV?' Bill explained.

'When you was touching my knickers you mean?'

Bill smiled and nodded. So she did realise what I was doing, he thought to himself.

Jackie smiled.

'It felt really nice...' she said with a smile.

That was music to Bill's ears. Now it was time to try to take it further.

'Do you want me to do it again?' he asked her.

Without any hesitation at all Jackie nodded with a big smile.

'Would you let me do it inside?' he asked her.

'Inside my knickers?' she asked.

Bill nodded.

Jackie took a second to think and then nodded.

'What about round the front?' Bill asked her.

'Touch my minky?' she asked.

Bill laughed at the little girl expression for her pussy. 'Yeah your minky!' he replied with a wide grin.

'Yeah!' Jackie said with a smile. 'You can do it now if you want to!' she said mischievously.

'Best not at the moment...' Bill replied, 'not outside your house... in case someone sees us... but we can stop off somewhere and do it if you want to?'

Jackie grinned widely and nodded.

'If we do it, you can't tell anyone...ever...'

Jackie nodded.

'No one at all...' he added, 'or we will get into VERY big trouble...do you promise?'

'I promise I won't tell anyone... ever!' she replied crossing her chest with her finger.

'Good girl!' Bill said. 'We can have lots of nice fun together...and there are lots of things we can do!'

Jackie grinned like a Cheshire cat, clearly excited at the thought.

'I tell you what...' Bill said, 'how about you lift that dress up a bit so I can see your knickers?'

Without a seconds thought, Jackie grabbed the hem of her short dress and slid it up to her tummy.

Bill took a sharp intake of breath. His eyes drank in the sight before him. From her scabby knee caps, up her skinny legs, and then up her white little thighs to the main prize. Jackie was wearing a tiny pair of green Disney knickers which had a motif of 'Ariel' from the little mermaid on the front. Like the rest of her clothes, they were a little threadbare and had obviously seen better days, but to Bill they were very sexy. He had a penchant for little girls knickers with their Disney prints, flowers, teddy bears and the like. To Bill, a cute little girl in little girl knickers was one of the most erotic things in the world, and was guaranteed to get him hard in an instant. Jackie was no exception and he felt his cock straining against his jeans.

'You look lovely!' Bill said to her. 'Very, very sexy!'

Jackie beamed. She'd not had many compliments in her short life, and to be told she was sexy by an adult made her swell with pride.

Bill put the car into drive and pulled away. He found it hard to concentrate on the road but the fact that it was automatic meant he didn't have to try too hard. As he drove, he kept taking looks at those sexy knickers and the treasure which lay beneath them. Bill drove to a secluded lane nearby that he knew and parked up where his car wouldn't be spotted. He switched the engine off and looked at the little 8 year old sitting in the passenger seat showing off her knickers. Bill reached over and put his left arm around her and she cuddled into him.

'You're beautiful...' he said to her, knowing how much little girls loved to be told such things.

Jackie smiled.

'Watch this...' he said to her as he pressed a button on the cars console.

Suddenly, Jackie's seat started to silently recline. Shortly the seat was flat and little Jackie was laying down with her knickers on show to him. Bill then reclined his a little. Leaning over, he began to rub her thighs with his right hand, gradually inching it upwards.

'You okay?' he asked little Jackie.

The 8 year old nodded at him smiling. Bill looked closer at her knickers and felt his cock harden even more. With his finger, he traced the line of her tiny slit on the outside. Jackie shuddered.

'You okay?' he checked again.

'Yeah...' she replied quietly, 'it just felt a bit funny...but nice though...' she said with a smile.

Bill smiled back and applied a little more pressure as he heard the girl gasp. He pulled the gusset to one side slightly and traced her bare slit for the first time with his finger.

'Hmm...' Jackie murmured with a dreamy look on her face.

'Nice?'

'Very!' she managed to get out.

Bill stopped for a second and hooked his fingers into each side of the elastic waistband on her knickers and gently started to ease them down. With no hesitation, Jackie lifted her bum up off the seat a bit to help Bill with the process, and he pulled her knickers down to just above her knees.

'Wow!' Bill said with a gasp. 'You really are lovely, and that's a beautiful little...what did you call it again?'

'My minky!' Jackie replied.

'Well...you have a beautiful little minky Jackie...' he told her.

Bill noticed the gusset of her knickers were stained with a bit of yellow. This made his cock throb even more. He loved girls that were not obsessively clean, and even more so, he loved watching girls take a pee. He also liked to sniff their knickers and had built up a fair collection over the years.

Bill traced her slit again with his finger and was sure he could feel some dampness there.

'Open your legs for me a bit please darling?' Bill asked the 8 year old.

The little girl tried but wasn't able to open them far.

'I can't...' she told him, 'my knickers are in the way!'

'That's easily solved...' Bill said with a grin.

He hooked his fingers back into them and pulled them down to her ankles, before Jackie kicked them right off.

'That's better...' Bill said, 'with them out of the way!'

Jackie giggled and opened her legs for him.

Bill watched closely as he saw her tiny slit open up a little and he could just make out a pea sized clit. He reached over and with one two fingers expertly pulled her little pussy lips apart. At the same time, he started to stroke her little clit with his thumb.

Jackie gasped.

'Hmm... that feels really, really nice...' she said.

With that, he applied more pressure and started to speed up.

'Oh... oh...' the little girl's breath was starting to become shorter.

'Nice?' Bill asked.

The little girl nodded, thrusting her hips as Bill thumbed her tiny 8 year old clit harder and faster.

'Ooh... aaahh... I feel funny...' Jackie gasped.

Bill realised she was about to have her first ever orgasm.

'Let it happen darling....it will feel really, really nice...cum for Uncle Bill Jackie...' he encouraged her.

The little girl let out one huge gasp, and Bill watched her body shudder as she came for the first time in her short 8 years. Once she was over it, Bill eased off and eventually stopped, knowing how sensitive she would be between her legs now. Bill's cock was now aching and he was leaking non-stop. He needed some relief, and now was the moment he would try and get it... with a little help from Jackie.

To be continued.....

*** END OF PART ONE ***

© Carroll Lewis 2009

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lolitalover46

Great story as always. Keep it going

Carroll Lewis

Glad you like it LL.
As you can see I started this in 2009 before I had to take a lot of time out when I became seriously ill. I am up to part four (I think!) so I will post those and will continue it when I get the chance as it was one of my favourite stories to write - I think because it's fun to write a story with characters that are similar but different to the original story - if that makes any sense?

Thanks for your comments, they are always welcome!

ladybug

Very good, i like the way the story is developing, keep up the good work.

Philip Spencer

You can't be a Yankees fan AND a Mets fan at the same time. You can't root for both the Cubs and the White Sox. And no self-respecting girl collects both Barbies and Bratz.

And what's with the Cheshire cat? More appropriate to a story about Alice Pleasance Liddell than Olivia Twiste.

Good effort, but disappointing.

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