Stories To Be Critiqued

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Here are the stories currently up for critique.

88.	Slow Cruise, by Gray Beard (MF, slow, rom)
87.	Taken, by Jack C Lipton (FM rom 1st oral)
86.	Laura, by Altan (exhib nosex)
85.	The Deal, by Conjugate (MF, oral, light bdsm, cons)
84.	Keiko, by Naive
83.	Hell Hath No Fury, by Alexis Siefert and Shon Richards (Myth, MF)
82.	Rumors of Glory, by elle`attend
81.	Winter Nights, by Dryad (MF, Cons, Fantasy)
80.	Lap Dancer, by Katie McN
79.	Fire, by john (love story)
78.	Chocolate Knights and Chocolate Daze, by Gary Jordan (MF, rom, cons, oral, anal, light bondage, wl)
77.	Denver Gwen (part 2), by Poison Ivan (MF MMF oral anal)
76.	Denver Gwen (part 1), by Poison Ivan (MF MMF oral anal)
	Stories From Previous Weeks

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Remember: focus on constructive criticism. For each piece, reviewers should post two positive comments and two suggestions for improvements. Please, try not to repeat!