The Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive
Author: Madam Kistulot
Story: Silver Eclipse
(6 of 17)

Silver Eclipse

Chapter 6: Mental Love Bites

I don’t know how long the world is spinny spinny, or how long I’m sleeping, but eventually it all stops. My body is still feeling all silly, like I was on a roller coaster for a week without any food. It’s not that I’m hungry, I’m just all… Wobbly weak. It’s not all that nice of a feeling and it makes me want to cry like the little school girl I am, slutty or not.

My eyes are still wonky for a second or two, and blinking them is hard so I just have to stare and wait for them to focus. Stupid eyelids, why can’t they just work right? Silly stupid eye lids… When they finally decide they don’t hate me and can work sorta right, there’s that pretty female archer and the ninja and they’re watching me. Oh! Jade and… The bad woman! The woman who captured me away from my new friends!

Without even thinking about it I whine and squirm on what I think is a couch. First I wake up sore, and now I wake up feeling all weak and wonky pitiful! This is just not my week! I’m missing classes too, so I’ll be so far behind, might get detention or something awful… But it’s Jadey! I don’t know if I should be upset or happy or… I’m just confused! “What’s going on…?”

“You were kidnapped.” Jade’s pretty voice sounds like it’s talking to a little girl which… Oh, that makes sense! That’s me! Oi, silly head not working right, it must still be upset from all of the spinning! “I saw her with you but I couldn’t catch up fast enough. They took you to this facility and I needed help. We broke you out… What did they do to you?”

I blink and look down at myself. Smoothing out my skirt for a second I try and wonder what she means. I feel so strange! Whisper is my friend, but Jade is my friend too! I don’t feel like they did anything bad to me… “They helped me empty out my brains! Were gonna teach me how to think… I should probably go back!”

Jade’s look turns from curious to all angry and glarey and doesn’t look happy at all. “Uh huh… Are you listening to yourself?” She shakes her head and frowns at me more and it makes me feel icky. “I mean really?”

I just want to make her happy so she’ll stop look at me like that so I take a hopeful tone. “No…? They were itchy in there, had to get ‘em out… They were all so nice!” I really had needed to get my brains out of my breasts! They’d never leaked out before and they were just so heavy. Walking around with them all heavy like that would totally break my back in half! I’d be like some sort of silly leaky Barbie doll!

“… What was itchy in there? What are you talking about?! Look you’re… You’re not some mindless whatever they told you! You can’t just not think!” Jade is so silly, I can’t think if I don’t have any brains! “God… What did they do to her?” The ninja lady just shrugs and Jade looks even more frustrated.

“They helped me get my brains out!” Yeesh, don’t these women like know anything at all? It’s breast and brain science, not rocket science! I don’t know if I like how Jadey is acting! “I’m not supposed to think… It feels better to be brainless! I hated having a brain…” I twist my face up into a frown and stare down at the floor for a second before looking back up at them. “And my brains were itchy, they started leaking out…” I motion to where they all leaked out (they tasted so good, I could go for some more…) “They might be building back up again…”

“Huh? Why would that be a bad thing? What… What is she talking about…?” Jade could ask me, but she asks the mean ninja lady instead. “God, we need a psychologist or something.” The ninja lady nods and leaps up at the ceiling, and when I look up she’s gone! “… I hate it when she does that.”

Smiling cutely as I can (I am a cute little school girl slut you know) I giggle and nod. “Feels much better to be without a brain? Didn’t you know it starts to hurt when they build up? It’s not too hard to fix either! But my arms are all… Weak.” I can’t lift my hands enough to be able to pull my brains out of my tits but… My lips! I’m a pretty smart brainless little school girl slut! “I could help with yours though!” I’m so excited, this is a great idea! I nod over and over and over again and hope she’ll see just how smart my idea really is. “We don’t need a psycholo… psycholo.. thingy! Ninja lady might though, disappearing like that is rude!"

"Yeah… You sound like you're drunk and high. And no, it doesn't feel better to be without brains. They don't build up. It's not like that, brains are good, they help us think and they let us be smart and being smart is good and… good and… damn it… Brains stay in! Or… Yes!" Poor Jadey is getting so, so frustrated!

"I was a smart girl, but it's better not to be! Besides, brains are tasty! All creamy and warm… They're like pink ice cream! You know I have a friend name Pink?!" I smile bright and big as I can and try to stretch, even if my arms are still all limp. "And no they don't! They start to leak, and it makes you feel bad but it's easy to fix, and it feels good, and better after you're done!" I nod more before giggling. Everything is so good when you're a slutty little school girl! "Relax! I'm not drugged or nothing, I'm fine, I feel better this way! You would too, you know…"

"You, are crazy." Jade may think I'm nuts, but my body feels a little better! "You can't eat brains… and… ew… That would be gross! Not like ice cream! Leak? Eww… eww!" The pretty archer shudders and it makes me shudder too.

I stretch to try and feel how my body feels when it's not all limp and smile a little to try and make Jade feel better. "You sure? Because I slurped mine up after milking them out… Jade, relax, were friends right? Be nice! I'm not crazy…"

"…Yet you're talking about milking your brains out. You can't tell me that's normal or natural or okay at all in any way!" Jade's pretty almond hand reaches up and throws her cap away from her head. She looks so angry, it makes me feel bad, but then… Her bunched up dark hair moves down just like a dream, just like I hoped it could! Flowing down her back like a waterfall, pretty, sexy… Jade is so… She makes me feel all funny-warm inside.

I bet if I had a mirror I'd be able to see my eyes all shiny at that pretty sight… It's impossible no to smile like an idiot! Which, well, I sorta am! "I did it! And it was perfectly natural! My new friends taught me how…" Slowly, I try to stand up. I don't wanna fall right back down! That would just look silly! "Really, it's easy, but you don't have to do that if they aren't itching… They're not, are they?" Her face and hair is pretty, but I look down to her chest to see if I can see any pink leaking out from under her clothing.

"My what are itching? What…" I manage to stand up as Jade talks, and it's hard, but it's not too hard. "Your friends made you think you were stupid… They brainwashed you, but… I think Nightshade went to get someone to help you. I think. I'm not sure."

"I'm not brainwashed… I've been brain washed-out!" My face twists up in a big smile and I can't help but giggle as I move a little closer to the Jadey. "Your tits! Are they itchy? Mine were before they started leaking… and I hope she doesn't! I'm just fine!"

"No my breasts aren't itchy! They really did a number on you, huh? Turned your brains to guacamole in your head?" Jade sighs and bows her head for a second. She looks so sad…"We'll help you Silver, we really will…"

I sigh too and step just a little bit closer. She doesn't get it! I'm okay! "I don't want help! I'm fine!" My arms still are weak though, probably too weak to-… "Well, you can help me…"

"… If it involves your breasts in any way… I don't want to do that. Just sit back down and we'll wait for Nightshade, okay?" She tries to smile and not step away but she doesn't want me close… That's almost enough to make me want to cry, but that would be way too embarrassing even for me!

"It doesn't have to… Or yours if you're that unhappy about it… Maybe just a hug? I don't feel so good…" Sniffling I try not to cry. This is just so awful! I don't know what to think or what to say! "Everything is so confusing…"

"Look I…" I don't know if she wants to push me away or not and that makes me want to cry even more. This isn't fair! I just want to milk out my brains, and help her with hers, but I can compromise! I'm good at compromise! A hug would be great… Just when I want to start sobbing to get her to say "yes" she opens up her arms and sighs. "All right…"

Yay! Without another half non-thought I hug tight to her as I can without being mean and sigh, sniffling just a little more. "You're my friend… but Whisper was my friend! How do I know whose really being nice…?"

"Friends don't try to make your brains come out, silly… Friends just want to help you is all…" Her arms close around me, but they only half hug. It's like she's feeling strange about it, but I have no clue why!

"But… but… It didn't feel bad! They did just want to help…" My voice must sound so sad and pitiful, but that's how I feel. Nothing feels right… Behind Jade's back I make a little spark and make it dance from finger to finger to finger like I used to do back when I was a little girl. Doing little things like this made my hair turn silver so fast… "Sure you don't wanna try it? It feels really good…"

"It felt good to hide what they… Look…" Jade's arms squeeze tighter and for a moment it actually feels like a real hug. "I'm so sorry for what they did, really…" Her hand strokes over my hair and it makes me purr. It feels so good to be touched like that, held and touched by those pretty fingers like I was her little teacher's pet or . . "Just… Trust me when I say I want to help you."

A whimper escapes my throat before I can help it, and my little sparklette poofs out with a bright puff. "I do… I do… but I trust them too!" Whining I pull tighter and try to think, of something else, anything else to think about… "Tell me what happened with Mind Bore…?"

"Oh… well she… Drilled into my brain pretty much, right there in front of a few others, and I got this giant grin and these wide empty eyes… Then I helped her beat them, and she took me back to her lab and they, she had me in this chair and I got to watch as they put these things into my brain and… but I was rescued before it was too late. Just like I helped you!" She hugs me again, tighter, warmer, and it almost makes me feel good enough to giggle.

I hug her back tighter and whimper, squirming and nodding against her. "So many people that drilled into my head became my friends later… It feels so much different this time though! But it does every new time… at least they didn't put a metal pole in my head…" The memory makes me whine and I squirm, shivering and quaking against her. I'm so afraid, I hated that stupid rod with that one word on it and that mean evil witch Yanta! Orange hair and those clicking heels… just thinking about them makes me want to scream!

"Huh? People drilling into your head becoming friends? What are you talking about?" Jade sounds really worried, and if a woman like Jade is worried then I should probably be even more worried! "We weren't too late! It wasn't like they were doing any kind of physical implants like Mind Bore was going to do, it's just psychological damage! You'll be fine!"

"Not drilling really, just… Oh… Never mind, you wouldn't understand… They really aren't bad people!" I smile up at her and pull back just a little. Thinking of my friends back at the big tall building and the pretty lady at the top floor makes me feel warm and happy. "But… If it's good to have a brain, then it's bad that I already want them back out… right?"

"Yes, that can't be good… but it's all right… We'll stuff all of your brains right back in. You'll be fine. You'll really be fine. I promise. We won't stop till we help you…" She sighs against me and pulls me just a little closer, and that makes me feel all warm again.

"But… Glimmer and I…" I blink and shake my head. I don't want to think about it! It hurts to think about it! I want my Glimmy and Whispery but I want Jade more right now, and she's here and close and worried about me and that makes me fell all fluffy and pretty like some silver furred kitty… "I'm sorry…"

"Shh… It's okay… Maybe just sit down to wait for Nightshade, huh?"

"Stay close…?" I'm really so afraid, and so needy, I just, I just need her, want her there! "Please?"

"Okay… Okay… I'll stay close." She squeezes me again, ever so softly. "Don't worry, it'll all be okay, I promise."

"Ok…" I just stay close and we sit back down on the couch. I can't stop sniffling but having Jade close makes me feel at least a little bit safer…

* * *

We just sit there, like pretty silver student and pretty almond skinned teacher. It feels like forever, just waiting for them to show up. Whoever'll show up, I don't know. No one ever taught me how to think and all of my brains got drained out and slurped up. How sad that makes Jade makes me feel really bad for drinking them up. Maybe I should have tried to push them back in!

Finally though, after what must be a million years, someone knocks on the door and then it's open. Nightshade is there, and another woman who looks so proper in turtle shell glasses, brown hair resting over her shoulders and fancy clothing making her look like some therapist right off of TV, one of the pretty ones that makes you feel all warm when you see them being all nice and sweet and helpful.

I want to know what the pretty new lady talks like, but ninja lady speaks up again and I wrinkle up my face. "I brought Mystic, to see if she could help."

Apparently Mystic is more than just pretty, because Jade smiles up at them and holds me just a little itty bitty bit closer. "Good thinking!"

I look up at them too and wiggle my fingers in my classic cutesy little wave. It's perfect for a little school girl like me! "Hullo… I'm Silver!"

Mystic walks in and over to me without saying a word. She kneels down in front of me and stares into my eyes, slowly raising up and hand and… The air looks like it's shimmering, and in my head, I can feel something, some kind of pressure, it hurts, it feels really really strong and… I might lose everything that my new friends taught me! Or is that a good thing?

I don't know!

"W-w-wait!" My eyes stay locked on Mystics and I can't help but whimper. Pressure in my head doesn't feel good! "What're you gonna do?! It's sill my head!"

She just tilts her head, and the pressure gets worse and worse, like some kinda really sharp strong, tight, cold thing. She looks so cold, so mean, so unfriendly! Why does Jade know icky people like her?! It hurts! I wanna go home! "Don't panic, she's trying to help!" Jade smiles and rests her hands on my shoulders, but I'm still so afraid!

"But-but!" I try not to but I scream. I can't stay calm! There's too much to worry about, way too much to worry about! The hands on my shoulders feel nice, but everything else is just scary! "But… but… she looks mean, and, and, and… I miss Whisper and Glimmer!"

Both of the scary lady's hands come together, and it hurts, it hurts! It's like a painful, scary lightning storm and-!

There are no words… No words at all. I . . I can feel my head again but it feels… normal. It feels like it felt before I woke up and those two women made me milk my brains out of my own breasts and… I am massively under dressed! Sometimes, having no mind has major benefits, like not realizing that what you're wearing is barely enough cloth to keep you even halfway decent! I can feel my cheeks burning, and I know I must be turning a dark silver. I wish I could just squirm out of existence! "Thanks…"

"It feels like there are other things in here I might need to look at…" The woman doesn't put her hand down, and I don't like the look she's giving me.

"You don't need to… I'm fine with everything else in there, I'm just fine now, really! No wanting to squeeze my brains out of my bust, perfectly angry with the women who done me wrong, you know, good ol' Silver!" I can't think of anything that might be in there besides The Lady's little dips, or something Dust or Pink might have done, and I sure as hell don't mind those. It's not as if I haven't left Dust and Pink their own share of presents.

Pink's lips might be pink, but they still taste like me. Dust might not be dusting herself helplessly, but her lips look just as silver to her as mine do.

"Are you sure…?" That damned woman is probably looking around in my brain anyway… Can't anyone let me make up my own mind?! Even the people who want to save me just want to reshape me, no one is happy with me the way I am…

Jade raises an eyebrow and looks a little more worried. "What could it hurt? Get everything out of your head and all…"

I whimper and frown, shaking my head just a little. I don't want anyone prying into my head! At least not her… "Umm… Think of what's left as love bites in my brain." Oh, great. As soon as I say it I know that doesn't sound good. That's even better.

"Love bites on your brain?" They all speak in that sort of creepy unison that should only happen in musicals. It's almost enough to make me run out screaming, but I'm not dressed very appropriately for running out screaming.

"I… uh…" I laugh in that "please don't ask" sort of way, trying to think of anything that could possibly make them just leave my head alone. "Just some friends that get a little over eager… It's all fine, really…" And even if The Lady stopped using it, a part of me doesn't want her to not be able to make me see those cotton pink- no, I'm not going to think about that. This is no time to collapse with my eyes rolled up into my head, drooling all over Jade or whoever's carpet. "Really. Promise. Nothing that'd endanger anyone!"

"Wow! It looks like something is laced completely through her brain! I've never seen anything like this… It's sort of like a tree. It had roots and then it spread… It's everywhere." Mystic sounds ever so worried, and that's when it starts to click just what that is.

Oh, shit.

That is the last thing I need them ripping out of my head!

Jade frowns and leans just a little closer to me, her hands pressing down on me just a little bit harder though it still feels sort of nice. "How did they do that in such little time…?"

"That's not… Please, don't…" I take a very, very deep breath and try to think of how the hell I'm supposed to explain this. How do you explain something like this? It haunts my nightmares. Those eyes of hers, the way she just tore everything I had away and left me there writhing, arching, doing just what she wanted… and she had Pink, and Dust, and who knows who she would have gotten next and…

It's all that's holding me together! "It's not them, it's not them at all! Please, don't just go into someone's head destroying things, I… Awhile ago, a long while ago, this woman, she was a witch, she… she broke my will and my mind over my knee. She stole everything I was, and made me nothing but an obedient little toy, just shattered and worthless… I don't know how, but I got away, and a woman helped patch my mind up, she helped me so I could think without getting confused and breaking myself all over again… I… please, just leave it alone!"

"Oh…" Mystic blinks. "It might be… I don't know… I've never had to patch up a 'shattered' mind before…"

Jade softly squeezes my shoulders and it feels nice to know that she cares. "That sounds horrible."

"How did you ever cope?" Nightshade asks, and I'm glad that I'm capable of thinking of her as more than just ninja lady. I swear, people just don't like me using the whole of my mind. I'm sure a controlled Silver with a brain would have plenty of uses! I can think of plenty!

"I…" I sigh and look down, nibbling on my lip. "I just learned to get used to it, I guess? I'm lucky I escaped, so many women had minds that couldn't be put back together…" I wrap my arms tight around myself with another sigh. "You see, I'm no newbie to having my mind torn apart. I don't know. I just have to keep moving, right? That's why I'm going back to that facility."

They all blink and just stare at me. They obviously don't know what I mean. "Huh? Going back?"

"I appreciate that you all saved me. Really." I look down at myself and cross my arms just a little bit higher up. Damn it! This outfit is just way too slutty! I'm just glad that no one was actually dressed up like a principal or something or… "I wasn't going to enjoy being some toy… Well I was, so let's not go there. But there are other people there, and those women need to be stopped! Isn't that what the super heroine business is all about?"

A thought occurs to me, that maybe I should give The Lady a call, she must be worried… but I'm on patrol. Sure, I come back every night, but this is a mission, and important as any recruitment. I have to see this through to the end.

"Oh, and we found out who… ordered you… apparently." Nightshade hands me a piece of paper and I clutch it desperatly. Finally, some damned answers!

Mystic looks a little bit worried. No doubt she wants to be far away from the girl with a tree in her head. Today is just all about making Silver feel special. "Well, I have things I have to do…"

"Made-to-order-Silver-Sluts must run pretty expensive. And if you found out the price, for the love of all that's shiny, if it's low, just please don't tell me!" Slowly I start to unfold the paper and take a deep breath. "It's okay Mystic… You don't have to come, and I owe you one."

The paper has just a name and a picture. At first, it's hard not to think that the picture is of me. It looks just like me. It is me, there's no way this can't be me! She's not dressed anything like I would dress, much more like someone I would be taking down then someone I would be but… The name, it says Domina Argenti. Whoever the hell this woman is… She… This isn't possible!

My eyes go huge. I want to be angry, and scream at Nightshade for her to stop being a bitch, but she isn't kidding. This is real. This… "Who the hell is that?! She's some sort of chameleon, right?! I mean, I mean, doppelgangers, evil twins, they aren't real, are they?!" I feel like I’m going to hyperventilate and pass out any moment now. My hands are really so close to tearing the paper in half. “I mean… this is just some sort of really sick joke, right?!”

“Um… no?” Jade ever so helpfully offers her own two cents before she steps around from behind me. Jade may be absolutely wonderful and sweet, but that is not what I need to hear right now!

I ball up the paper and throw it as hard as I can into the corner. If I could, I would cover it with silver fire and burn it all the way to hell. “Do… Do any of you know anything about this… Domina? Domina Argenti?”

They all shake their heads and shrug, muttering out apologizing remarks, and that’s the last thing I’m really in the mood to hear at the moment.

“Then we have to go back.” I nod. There are no two ways about this. I have to go. I have to meet this Domina. “We have to go back, and find out what’s going on…”

“Okay… It’ll be very dangerous though. They aren’t slouches. We can probably get a little bit of police backup.” Jade nods, and that, that is actually helpful.

“All right, whatever we have to do. I’m ready. I’m not a push over…” I shiver and pop a spark out of each fingertip and make them twirl. It’s not much, but it makes me feel a little bit better. “I’m just too trusting, but I’m not about to trust anyone in that facility.”

Nightshade nods and looks down to mystic “Well then, Mystic, you wanted to go?” Mystic just nods and waves, stepping out the door. I wave back with a half smile. I owe her one, but she still almost turned me into a girl with no memories again. “I’ll contact the police. We’ll have them meet us there… if they’re even still there. They’ve probably packed up and left.”

“We have to try, don’t we? Besides, it seems every time I walk into a trap I come out with the false reputation that I’m actually good at handling myself…” I laugh, and it sounds pitiful even to me. “Get everything ready, maybe get me some new clothes and I’ll… I’ll try and remember any twins.”

(6 of 17)