Message-ID: <62066asstr$1334517002@assm.asstr-mirror.org> X-Original-To: ckought69@hotmail.com Delivered-To: ckought69@hotmail.com From: TBD <tbd@hushmail.me> X-Original-Message-ID: <a2pjo7trfku0bumcd39t2fgm5l2rf74v5n@4ax.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-Auth-Sender: U2FsdGVkX1/o/hgwZetllZwCLtNTb6Uknbvd5QOy7zkoty7IoJYjMw== Cancel-Lock: sha1:2ni5hgDGeFW4ESGEhSAb9Q8dmt8= X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Sat, 14 Apr 2012 20:30:45 -0700 Subject: {ASSM} Canid - Hominid Wars (alternate reality, k9-pov, nosex) TBD Lines: 192 Date: Sun, 15 Apr 2012 15:10:02 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2012/62066> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: RuiJorge, dennyw This was going to be an alternate reality that explored the idea of the canids, due to their shorter generations, having evolved a sophisticated civilization long before humans came on the scene. --- The Canid-Hominid Wars Before the Wars - Chapter One Hunter's Luck --- After eating his fill, Dreams-With-His-Eyes-Open settled in some shade to lick his wound clean. He growled softly as he remembered what had happened earlier. He'd misjudged his lunge for the fleet-thing-with-spikes-on-its-head and the beast had tuned sharply away from him. One of its feet had hit his side and left a long gash in his fur. Fortunately the gash wasn't deep and it would heal quickly as long as he remembered to keep it clean. As he cleaned his wound he had time to reflect on his pack's luck. When the beast turned it had run directly into a tangle of the hanging-things and while struggling to free itself had broken its neck. The pack had eaten well in spite of his unusual mistake. He settled his head on his forelegs and sighed. They'd been lucky and he knew it. If the hanging-things hadn't been there they would have gone hungry until they could find other prey. He rolled to his back and twisted himself back and forth. It felt good to be able to relax and not have to worry about hunting for the next two days. The fleet-thing would provide enough meat so they could settle and let themselves regain strength before they followed the herd south. A sudden movement in the branches above him caught his attention and he froze. A large stick-thing was hunting one of the small flying creatures. It lunged--and missed! The flying creature screeched and fell backwards as it escaped. He expected it to get away but it got caught in a weaver-thing's trap. The stick-thing started to work it's way to the weaver's trap but froze as the weaver-thing appeared. He laughed to himself. 'So, there is someone else who made a mistake while hunting. If not for the weaver-thing he would have eaten well, too. If only the pack had someone so careless in their hunting that it chased its dinner into our waiting jaws...' He couldn't stop his yip of surprise. He kept his eyes on the weaver-trap and rolled to his feet. The weaver-thing was patient. It let the flying creature exhaust itself before it carefully wrapped it so it could feed without getting hurt. When the weaver-thing settled to eat he turned his head away and looked at the hanging-things thoughtfully. 'Could we chase one of the fleet-things into the hanging-things and then wait until it was tired before we kill it? If it was tired enough it wouldn't be able to hurt any of us--just like the weaver-thing doesn't get hurt when it eats things much bigger than it is.' He settled on his haunches and called his pack to him. After they settled he started speaking to them: "The next time we hunt one of the fleet-things, here is what I want to do..." His idea worked. When they met the pack that lived in the territory next to theirs Dreams-With-His-Eyes-Open spoke the words-of-peace and shared his discovery with their hunt-master. By the time four-fours of cold seasons passed the wolves of Earth had become highly skilled tool users. It would take many-many fours of seasons before another wolf had the vision that made them cooperative tool makers--and the undisputed masters of their world. ~~~ The Canid-Hominid Wars Before the Wars - Chapter Two Puppy Play --- Dreamer laughed as she watched two of her cubs play tug-of-war with a short piece of one of the hanging-things. ~~~ The Canid-Hominid Wars Discovery, and Battle Plans. --- Picture, if you will, a civilization so old, so skilled--that their social ethics are genetic rather than learned. We, in our ignorance, would say they are instinctive. They are, but they are so by conscious choice, not evolutionary accident. This race matured early in their planet's history. Evolutionary accident and chance put them on the path that led to civilization. Their toolmaking skills are minimal, confined mostly to simple modifications of natural materials. They are a race of philosophers with an unmatched understanding of themselves and their world. With short lifespans but a willingness to take a long term view, some of their projects have taken thousands of years to reach completion. Their culture was stable and perfectly integrated with their world. Chance, in one of her whimsical moments, decided to replace them. This is the story of the their discovery of the prehominids, hands, their battle with chance--and their final victory. * * * The scouts, far from home and their usual hunting grounds, settled on their haunches to study what lay on the ground before them. "Barely a way-snack. Look. Its forepaws are deformed. No wonder it was so easy to catch when it tried to run." Treadslightly casually flipped the small body over with his nose and indicated the forepaws. "The toes are too long and the nails too short." Silkenfur laughed at him: "Treadslightly, anything smaller than you would be nothing more than a 'way-snack'. Your appetite is legendary. It's no wonder you were 'asked' to join the scouts." The other scouts laughed when his ears flattened in apology. Silkenfur took pity on him. "Your nose is keen my friend. If not for that, and your speed, this creature would have escaped, just as its companions did." She moved to place one of her forepaws next to one of the body's. She was thoughtful as she studied the differences. "No good for running, true. But quite good for helping it escape from our nets and then climbing trees. All of them had forepaws like his. I don't think it's a deformity." She sighed and looked around at her small pack. "I'm afraid we must find other game for our dinner. This creature needs to be taken before the council. Prepare the litter." Several of the wolves, especially the youngest ones, sighed. None of them enjoyed the idea of having to spend the next several days fending off scavengers while they made their way home. All of them were thoughtful as the body was carefully placed on the litter and secured for travel. The poles of the litter were secured to travel harnesses. Once they were ready the pack formed into its travel grouping and they headed for home. ~~~ Working thoughts: ---- There's a lot of backgound still in my head that hasn't been written down. The descriptive names they use are a deliberate attempt on my part to emphasize their world view. I'm still working of that but I figure it is an extremely pragmatic one that uses simple naming conventions with modifiers to describe an object's relationship to the wolves. The culture as I visualize it is actually quite old and established by the time they 'discover' the method of driving their prey into a net. I was going to have a bit about him wondering how often he could make mistakes before he was replaced but I left that out because failing during a hunt is not something that would lead to the alpha wolf being replaced. Another point that I haven't put down yet is that the wolves we know today are actually the degenerate remnant of the originals. The social structure they have now is not what it was thousands of years ago. As I visualize things, the wolves we see lost most of their civilization after they made the decision to allow the hominids to 'domesticate' them. There's a lot more of course. One thing I also have tentatively visualized is that the coyotes are descended from the 'scouts' and 'rugged indiviualists' that lived on the edges of the original civilization. Since they were already genetically predisposed to be exceptional survivors, the survival aspects of their 'jobs' added pressures that let them evolve into the adapable survivors they are today. ~~~ Other notes: Wolfs and coyotes, all do the same thing - it would seem only to be a matter of scale. That is the size of the canid, the game, and the pack. What separates them, as a nature show about the Yellowstone wolf packs plainly illustrated, is that wolves are quite content to chow-down on their petite cousins if they so happen to oblige. ~~~ End Canid-Hominid Wars -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ------ send stories to: <ckought69@hotmail.com>| | FAQ: <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/faq.html> Moderators: <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |ASSM Archive at <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org> Hosted by <http://www.asstr-mirror.org> | |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d; look for subject {ASSD}| +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+