Message-ID: <55727asstr$1177679401@assm.asstr-mirror.org> X-Original-To: ckought69@hotmail.com Delivered-To: ckought69@hotmail.com X-Original-Path: r3g2000prh.googlegroups.com!not-for-mail From: Notmystory <notmystory@kc.rr.com> X-Original-Message-ID: <1177650052.508892.262740@r3g2000prh.googlegroups.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable NNTP-Posting-Date: Fri, 27 Apr 2007 05:00:59 +0000 (UTC) User-Agent: G2/1.0 X-HTTP-UserAgent: Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 7.0; Windows NT 6.0; WOW64; SLCC1; .NET CLR 2.0.50727; .NET CLR 3.0.04506; InfoPath.2; Media Center PC 5.0),gzip(gfe),gzip(gfe) Complaints-To: groups-abuse@google.com Injection-Info: r3g2000prh.googlegroups.com; posting-host=24.163.234.67; posting-account=rhFKmQwAAAAfT1PNuzSNrbYskjoBvJ1n X-ASSTR-Original-Date: 26 Apr 2007 22:00:52 -0700 Subject: {ASSM} (Revised) Everybody Loves Raymond's Wife 7 (M+/F, Blackmail, Coer, Forced Peircings) Lines: 345 Date: Fri, 27 Apr 2007 09:10:02 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2007/55727> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: RuiJorge, newsman I was reading my story starting back at chapter one to make sure I kept everything in line with the previous chapters as I worked on the next chapter of the story when I noticed several errors. I also found several things I felt I should have expanded on or just didn't like after further review. My grammar isn't the best either but I have made several changes and tried to clean it up and am pretty happy with the results so here is a revised and updated version of Chapter Seven I have re-written much of story up to this point and plan to continue revising it up to chapter 28. I will go through and update all the Chapters and repost them as I continue working on Chapter 29. As always I hope someone finds this story entertaining and if you do please drop me an E-mail and let me know. notmystory@kc.rr.com *************************************************************************** ** Warning: This story is fiction, and should be treated as such. The following story is for the entertainment of ADULTS ONLY, and contains descriptions of explicit sex. If you are not an adult, or reading sex stories upset you, DO NOT read any further. If it is illegal in your location, DO NOT read it. This is a copyrighted work. Copyright by Not My Story. Reposting or any other use of it is strictly prohibited without the express, written permission of the author, except that it may be posted as part of a review or posted to a free-access, noncommercial archive sites. Disclaimer: All characters are fictitious. Any resemblance to anyone, either alive or dead, is purely coincidental. 'Everybody Loves Raymond' is syndicated and (C) to King World Studios West Inc. Usage of the characters here is in no way reflective of the real show or the actors in it, and in now way intended to undermine their values. Please! Send me your comments! notmyst...@kc.rr.com (Note to readers after doing some research on-line I have narrowed down that in the Second season the Debra character is supposed to be somewhere between 33-35 years of age so I am basing this story in that time frame FYI.) *************************************************************************** ** Everybody Loves Raymond's Wife Chapter 7 Lou had been waiting for his co-conspirators for over five hours and had just finished reading the last of Debra's six diaries that Bill and Eddie had collected on the first weekend he had questioned Debra. He had learned so much from reading the diaries and was mad as hell with himself. Why hadn't he bothered to read them in the months since he had gotten them, why had he instead spent his spare time editing the many tapes he had of Debra and her debauchery. He had learned from her diaries just what she had told him earlier, she had no knowledge of the many men Nick had shared her with nor did she want to experiment with anyone else as Nick did. She had wrote about how much she liked Nick in the entries when the two had started dating, and as time passed she went from talking about him as a boyfriend to "the one" she had planned on marrying him. She had then begun making entries about how he was pressuring her to experiment sexually but she wanted no one but him finally reluctantly she agreed to let him tie her up and blindfold her. He told her to pretend it was someone else making love to her but she claimed in her diary she never did and only told Nick that she did wanting to make him happy. It could have been worse Debra thought as she stood waiting for the vagrant having insisted on getting something for her to rest her knee's on not wanting her to hurt herself on the hot cement. She looked up seeing the sun between the buildings surrounding the alley taking the opportunity to say a silent prayer to God praying he would watch over her and let her get through this as painlessly and without any further harm being done to her or her marriage. Thankfully the pills the blackmailer she had now learned was named Jimmy had given her had quickly helped alleviate much of the pain from the piercings. She was however getting more worried however the more she learned about her blackmailers. The first day of this trip when she hadn't been drugged they had made it a point to share no information about themselves with her. She had noticed they never called one another by name and kept the conversation amongst themselves to a minimum in her presence. Her concerns about their continued plans for her got even more serious if that was possible, when they began to fight amongst themselves in front of her earlier after the one she had slept with overnight had almost showed a little kindness to her and had begun asking her questions. Her concerns grew even more serious while she was tied to the chair, she had learned the name of the blackmailer she had slept with this morning was Lou but later with her tied in the chair the three casually called each other by name as they joked about the way she looked and how she howled in pain as she was tortured to their delight. She also learned Jimmy was a former med student as he began to explain the medical ramifications of her piercings to the one called Bill, the third apparently really was named Dan and found the whole thing quite hilarious. She just couldn't help thinking they had no plans to release her as they didn't seem to care if she knew their names nor did they care what changes they had made to her physical appearance. She had given up fighting them earlier realizing her efforts to resist them were ultimately futile even if she never made the phone call they would keep her as long as they wanted. At least by making the phone call she could keep Ray from worrying about her for another three days she reasoned. She knew that she could refuse to follow their orders but they had proven to her beyond any doubt that they could force her compliance with their drugs. She was torn on this decision however wondering if it wouldn't be better to be drugged. At least then she wouldn't be doing the things consciously, but the last dose of the drug had left her conscious of her actions but still unable to keep herself from doing as she was told. She reasoned it was better to just cooperate hoping maybe they would go easier on her if she did. As a fresh tear streaked down her face Debra Barone dropped to her knees on the scrap of cardboard the filthy bum had been kind enough to find for her. She already felt worn out and defeated as she cautiously reached out to take this vile strangers cock into her mouth. At least it was only for five minutes she kept telling herself as she swallowed hard trying to keep from vomiting in disgust. The stench of his unwashed crotch flooded her nose with its pungent, stomach turning odor allowing her mind to drift from her worries to the new task at hand. She slowly reluctantly opened her mouth wondering if it wouldn't be less painful to just go in and let them pierce anything else they wanted, as she brought her lips to his member. She slowly moved her mouth across his putrid cock deciding the only thing worse than the smell was the horrible taste of his member. As she moved her mouth up and down on his cock slowly, she closed her eyes hoping to distance herself from what she was doing. That became impossible to do when filthy street person then placed his soiled hands in her hair and began gently helping her move her head up and down on his cock. As her humiliation grew Debra's attention turned to her tongue it felt so strange as she ran it back and forth along the wretched cock of the vagrant. The thick stud in the center of her tongue pushed around in her mouth painfully by the cock rubbing against it as she bobbed up and down on it. She continued her efforts for finding it difficult to bring the old man to erection. She was certain the five minutes must have already passed as her jaw got sore from the disgusting task. She opened her eyes and tried to look around at her blackmailers for a sign, hoping they would put an end to the terrible humiliation she was being forced to suffer. Instead she saw two of the men standing around her with camcorders filming the pathetic act, as the third handed the bum a condom and pointed him to a makeshift table. She had at first just been thankful no one could see her from the street, but what did that matter now as the bastards were taping it probably for the world to see she thought. The bum now finally sporting an erection had a look of joy plastered across his face as he helped Debra up from her knees and to her feet leading her by her hand over to the table. Following his instructions and with the bums help she was barely able to jump up onto the unstable structure of the table. She looked forward in shock as the hoodlum pulled her legs wide apart then stepped between them. She felt the piercings in her crotch tug on her skin as he held her legs apart. He then handed the condom to her and lowered his gaze to his glistening cock now positioned between her legs. His whole attitude had changed it was as if he was a different man than the fumbling idiot who had just been begging for money just a little while ago. He now had power, power over the slut that was Debra Barone. Debra rolled her eyes as she realized what this disgusting bum expected of her knowing she obviously had no choice but to do as he wanted. She wanted to tell this vagrant what to do with himself, and the condom, but she knew what a failure to do what was expected of her would mean, and she couldn't allow that. She had all but forgotten the pain of the piercings she had suffered earlier as she suffered through giving this bum a blow job, but now lying on top of the table, her legs spread obscenely wide the rings in her navel and cunt along with the studs they had begun to pulse with a mild throbbing pain. The stud through her tongue made her mouth feel full even without it being stuffed with cock. Gritting her teeth to deal with the humiliation and pain she reached down between her legs and slowly tore open the packaging and unraveled the condom sliding it over the bums cock. His cock now sheathed in the condom he took hold of his weapon and slapped it against the shiny ring at the top of her cunt and then the two studs in the lips of her stiff sex. Debra dropped her head back as the intense sensations of the slaps shot through her body. Finally the filthy bum tired of playing the drums on her womanhood and slid his cock into her tortured sex. As he thrust in time and time again his filthy hands pulled her full breast free of the leather top that incased them in his palms. Debra wanted to scream out as her body was rocked with the sensations of his attentions but instead she bit down hard on her lip, drawing blood under the intense pressure. She suffered under his thrust as his strokes brutally rubbed against the fresh piercings in her cunt. She heard the bum directed to make sure he shot his load in her face and not waste it in the rubber and then his quick response that he would as his tempo increased. He rammed his tool deep into Debra like a man possessed. He had completely tugged her breasts free of the top and began drooling on them in his euphoric state. Debra was beside herself as she looked down between her widespread legs at the homeless bum pummeling his cock into her body. She was better than this; she had grown up in a sheltered life. She had been fortunate enough to go to the finest schools. She'd been a cheerleader, student council president, Queen of the winter dance. How could all this be happening to her? She had been through so much already and didn't know how much more she could take. She was brought out of her thoughts of despair when she felt the stranger pull his cock from her body. She was quickly shuffled from the wobbly table and forced back to her knees. Then she felt the first stream of his disgusting sperm sprayed across her face clenching her lips tightly not wanting his fluids in her mouth. It was quickly followed by a second and then third. He let loose several more shots as he slapped her face with his wretched cock. She heard the bum repeatedly thanking the men for the use of their girl, the hot sun backing the sticky cum on her face as someone helped her to her feet. She tried to wipe the jism from her eyes using her fingers as she was led back to the SUV. Once safely back in the SUV she was seated in the backseat between two of her blackmailers Bill and Jimmy. She whimpered as her legs were spread wide apart and hands moved across her exposed sex. After several minutes of teasing Debra with their fingers one of the men slipped a cold steel ball inside her cunt and then another pushing them deep inside her cunt. The chill of the intrusion sent a shiver down her spine causing a low moan to escape her lips. Next another small device shaped like a tiny egg was slipped inside her sex, and then with the flip of a switch the egg shaped device began to buzz to life inside her. It rattled inside her body and pulsated against the other two metal objects buried inside her. The sensations she now felt rushing through her body were unlike any others she had ever felt. Her eyes closed, her breath grew ragged and she was totally unaware as the thick black anal plug was being lubricated in front of her. Only when she was lifted from the seat and the cold greased plug pressed against her anal bud did she become aware of it presence. She licked her lips and then bit down sharply on her already gnawed lower lip as it was pressed into her sphincter. The thick plug was pushed in to its base the further into her it got it she could feel it rub against the Ben-Wa balls in her cunt thru the thin membrane separating them. Her body jerked in response to the strange sensations cursing through her crotch. The experience entirely unlike any she had ever felt before. Although she was disgusted and repulsed by her bodies' reaction she was none the less being pushed to new sexual peaks by the multiple sensations. Debra felt the men pinching her nipples but didn't bother to open her eyes as they just continued adding to her condition before the first thin metal clamp was snapped in place over her erect nipple. The second clamp attached to the thin gold chain dangling from the first clamp was then snapped into place over her other nipple. The chain had another small chain attached to it in the middle this chain was then pulled through the leather top she had been forced to wear and guided through the ring in her navel before being pulled into her skirt. Finally it was clasped in place on the ring piercing through the lip of her cunt. A small round disk was also clasped onto the chain next to the ring in her cunt. Next the two men worked together to pull a pair of tight latex panties over her shoes and up her legs as she was again lifted and the panties were pulled into place. Her top was pulled up to cover her breast and she now felt the roughness of the leather on her erect nipples. She opened her eyes as one of the men took a moist towelet and wiped her face clean handing her another to wipe her hands with. The SUV eventually pulled up to the front door of a shopping mall. Debra almost panicked as she was helped out of the vehicle and Bill whispered in her ear. "We're going to go in here to get something to eat. Anger me scream call for help whatever and we'll go back to see good ole Ripper back at the parlor. If you do get away we got a friend back in the big apple old Lou will give him a call an it will be sweet little Ally seeing old Ripper. So do you understand what is expected of you slut." He asked. Please send me you question or comments Notmystory@kc.rr.com Debra shook her head in total agreement not wanting him to follow through on his threat yet still biting on her lip as she tried to come to grips with the feelings of the devices now attached to and inserted in her body and her complete humiliation. She was then taken by her arm and escorted into the mall by Bill. She noticed immediately the cruel stares of the people around her at her whorish appearance. She felt so awkward the devices buzzing about inside her the studs in her cunt rubbing each other as she walked. She felt the butt plug straining against the tight latex panties trying to escape as she clenched her legs together as she walked across the mall. The buzzing device and the balls moving around in her cunt had brought her to the brink of a sexual climax but she fought hard not to give into her carnal feelings. Bill watched Debra closely as they walked down the mall together he had to slow down as Debra struggled to keep up with his pace as he looked across the mall at his friends filming her from a distance not wanting to miss a minute of her humiliation. He took note of her lip biting and shallow breath, he knew she must be on the verge of a massive climax. She was doing an admirable job of holding back the flood of her passions as she walked down the mall looking down at her feet unwilling to look anyone in the eye. Bill reached in his pocket and pressed the button on the tiny remote causing the small device clamped on her chain to begin pulsing in wild vibrations. The tightly stretched chain sent the vibrations through her clit, navel and nipples simultaneously. The new sensations hit her like a tidal wave. Her climax was intense and overwhelming; she let out a load moan as she stopped in her tracks racked by an earth shattering climax. Bill had no idea her reaction would be so boisterous, the attention of everyone in the mall had suddenly turned to the couple as Debra continued to throw her head back and pant in the throes of passion. Her face had turned a bright shade of red as her intense orgasm swept across her body. He reached into his pocket again and turned off the device then pulled sharply on her arm bringing her out of her daze. She looked up first at Bill then at the crowd of people who had gathered staring at her in shock. She was even more humiliated than before and her face already a bright red from her orgasm turned even redder from the humiliation. She began to cry silently as Bill led her to the food court and forced her to order her food. Her body was still racked by the feelings of the devices inside her but she was no longer in any danger of orgasming. She sat and ate wiping away the tears still streaking down her face, she smiled and tried to act pleasant not wanting to anger Bill. He had reached into his pocket and started the other device several times during their dining but had never got the same reaction from her, she was now to humiliated to climax again. Bill had pointed out the many men and even the group of young teenage boys who had followed them staring at Debra. She sat through dinner humiliated beyond belief. The walk back to the car was equally awkward to her as she wished for death to take her away from the agonizing experience. Next Debra was driven to a Sorority house at a local college Bill explained to her he had sold her to the sisters for several hours and she was to do whatever the girls wanted. He handed her a bag and told her to get her ass in the house. As Debra nervously walked to the door of the house she looked inside the bag to see a strap-on dildo and a rubber ball gag along with a ring gag and cuffs. She knocked on the door not sure what to expect. She was lead into the house and then into the large main hall by three young girls the oldest perhaps a meager 21 or 22 years old. In the hall three other girls sat waiting for them. Debra sat and listened in shock as she was told what the girls expected of her. She was to strip to her panties and lick each girl to orgasm starting with the houses only black sister. -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ------ send stories to: <ckought69@hotmail.com>| | FAQ: <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/faq.html> Moderators: <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |ASSM Archive at <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org> Hosted by <http://www.asstr-mirror.org> | |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d; look for subject {ASSD}| +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+