Message-ID: <55705asstr$1177409402@assm.asstr-mirror.org> X-Original-To: ckought69@hotmail.com Delivered-To: ckought69@hotmail.com X-Original-Path: p77g2000hsh.googlegroups.com!not-for-mail From: Notmystory <notmystory@kc.rr.com> X-Original-Message-ID: <1177385988.082258.120090@p77g2000hsh.googlegroups.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable NNTP-Posting-Date: Tue, 24 Apr 2007 03:39:48 +0000 (UTC) User-Agent: G2/1.0 X-HTTP-UserAgent: Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 7.0; Windows NT 6.0; WOW64; SLCC1; .NET CLR 2.0.50727; .NET CLR 3.0.04506; InfoPath.2),gzip(gfe),gzip(gfe) Complaints-To: groups-abuse@google.com Injection-Info: p77g2000hsh.googlegroups.com; posting-host=24.163.234.67; posting-account=rhFKmQwAAAAfT1PNuzSNrbYskjoBvJ1n X-ASSTR-Original-Date: 23 Apr 2007 20:39:48 -0700 Subject: {ASSM} (Revised) Everybody Loves Raymond's Wife 6 (M+/F, Blackmail, Coer, Forced Peircings) Lines: 358 Date: Tue, 24 Apr 2007 06:10:02 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2007/55705> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: Sagittaria, RuiJorge I was reading my story starting back at chapter one to make sure I kept everything in line with the previous chapters as I worked on the next chapter of the story when I noticed several errors. I also found several things I felt I should have expanded on or just didn't like after further review. My grammar isn't the best either but I have made several changes and tried to clean it up and am pretty happy with the results so here is a revised and updated version of Chapter One of this story I will go through and update all the Chapters and repost them as I continue working on Chapter 29. As always I hope someone finds this story entertaining and if you do please drop me an E-mail and let me know. notmystory@kc.rr.com *************************************************************************** ** Warning: This story is fiction, and should be treated as such. The following story is for the entertainment of ADULTS ONLY, and contains descriptions of explicit sex. If you are not an adult, or reading sex stories upset you, DO NOT read any further. If it is illegal in your location, DO NOT read it. This is a copyrighted work. Copyright by Not My Story. Reposting or any other use of it is strictly prohibited without the express, written permission of the author, except that it may be posted as part of a review or posted to a free-access, noncommercial archive sites. Disclaimer: All characters are fictitious. Any resemblance to anyone, either alive or dead, is purely coincidental. 'Everybody Loves Raymond' is syndicated and (C) to King World Studios West Inc. Usage of the characters here is in no way reflective of the real show or the actors in it, and in now way intended to undermine their values. Thanks to Ted E. Bear again for taking time to edit, proof read and contributed to this story. Thanks. Please! Send me your comments! notmyst...@kc.rr.com (Note to readers after doing some research on-line I have narrowed down that in the Second season the Debra character is supposed to be somewhere between 33-35 years of age so I am basing this story in that time frame FYI.) *************************************************************************** ** Everybody Loves Raymond's Wife Chapter 6 Debra Barone approached the monster in front of her angry as hell and ready to strike. She had been pushed to brink by these men and the deplorable acts she had been forced to perform. Now being filmed on two separate occasions for the use in porn films . She felt the dried semen crack on her face as her brow wrinkled staring at the man. Bill watched as Debra stomped toward him, the drugs Jimmy had given her earlier had obviously worn off and he hoped to force her to perform for him from this point on willingly needing her to be able to think for herself and in so doing adding to her humiliation. She looked like hell her make-up smeared by her tears, sweat and the men's cum, her hair a mess, the skimpy halter top and denim skirt she wore both disheveled and thrown on obviously in a hurry. He could see the many signs of her ordeal in the mostly dried fluids on her face and top of her chest. His eyes had locked there gaze on her erect nipples poking through the thin top. Her first blow took him totally by surprise as Debra knocked him in the side of the jaw with her clenched fist hard enough she hurt her hand in the process. He recovered quickly and was able to block the knee to the groan that followed up her first strike. She was able to land several punches on his torso before he managed to grab her arms and then with the help of his two accomplices who had jumped from the SUV they violently pushed her into the back seat of the SUV.. Debra found herself pushed into the backseat of the Ford Expedition by her blackmailers but not before she had begun to scream for help. She had only managed a few screams for help before the door was closed and a hand was clamped around her mouth roughly. One of the blackmailers had climbed in the backseat behind her the other had gone around to the other side and also got in the backseat. The driver climbed in started the vehicle and drove away from the scene not seeing any signs of trouble. Debra found herself lying across two of her blackmailers her head and chest in one man's lap her legs across the others. The man whose lap her head and chest sat in tying her hands together behind her back while the other one his arms draped over her legs holding them in place, used his hands to hold her hands together allowing the other to tie the knots around her wrist. She had started screaming again once the hand had been removed from her mouth but they man whose lap her head was in took care of that as soon as he finished tying her hands together by stuffing something in her mouth then taking a strip of duct tape the other man handed him and taping it in her mouth. Debra found herself tied up in the backseat of the speeding SUV in mere minutes. Furious at how she was being treated and how easily she had again been silenced and rendered helpless, she continued to struggle in her bonds laid across the men's laps, when she heard the men begin to speak to one another. "Well what are we going to do with her now she's still fighting us?" one said. "We stick to the plan. Just go to the parlor she'll make the call or else." another said coolly. Debra's mind raced what where they talking about? What parlor? Make what call? She started to try to unravel their conversation and stopped struggling in her bonds. She would not be forced to do another thing no matter what. She would fight, and she would die if that's what it took. She would stop this before anything else happened she promised herself. She lay on the two men's laps steadying her resolve when she felt a hand move under the tiny skirt. Where the man exploring her crotch discovered she hadn't gotten her panties returned to her. "So how long will her clit stay like this?" said the man exploring her sex, squeezing the engorged lips of her clit together as some of her fluids squeshed free. "Well I don't know to tell you the truth one dose last about 24 hours I gave her a triple dose and the last time I checked she was still stiff as a board down there if you know what I mean." The other man answered with a smirk. She felt a hand on the back of her neck as the knot holding her halter top up was undid and then her top was pushed down as the man whose lap her legs where in leaned over and grabbed a handful of her ample breast and squeezed roughly. "What about these honkers how big you think they are?" The man groping her chest asked. "We'll let's just say those 34B bra's she had won't her any good anymore I don't think. We bought a 36DD for tonight but once the swelling goes down we figured they'll just be 36D's. 'Course I'm thinking of giving the bitch a another dose twice as big as the last if she gives us anymore trouble. Make her fun bags explode from the swelling know what I mean?" Jimmy said to Bill's laughs. Debra sat horrified by what she heard, how could anyone be so cruel. She had been changed physically for life. The emotional scares would never heal nor would she be able to enjoy sex the way she had before this ordeal ever again. She felt like she had been killed and was now just an empty shell of her former self. The man returned to fingering her cunt and probed in and out of her womanhood asking yet another horrifying question of the other men. "So how many guys did we figure she'd been with so far this week." he asked sinking a second finger into her. "Well the four of us will five if you count Dan multiple times then the bachelor party what thirteen guys the Monday. Then what was it seven more johns before that basketball team of what eleven plus the coach." He said before being interrupted. "Hey that thirteen year old blew his load early he never got in." the man driving chimed in. "So the kid suffered a little premature ejaculation but he did make it in on his second go round with her. Okay and then the old dude last night and the four guys from the website she just did. So what is that like 41 guys fucking her god only knows how many times. I mean that's not counting the 47 guys she did that first weekend we put her to work. So we've got her taped with over like eighty guys I'm sure her family would like to see that little show." Bill said with a laugh. Debra cried tears mixing with the cum on her face as the men talked about her as though she wasn't even there. Then she felt the man whose lap her legs were on unzip his pants. "Help me get her up all this talk is making me horny." Bill said trying to pull her up onto his cock. "You're fucking depraved!" Jimmy replied helping push her up onto Bill's cock. Debra couldn't believe she was again being raped by these monsters. The pain of this intrusion was lessened because her groan had no feeling left to it. The dull sensation was now almost second nature to her. The bastard grabbed her enlarged breast and tried to use them to bounce her up and down on his cock. He complimented her on still having a nice tight cunt after all the perverts who had plowed through her. She closed her eyes and tried to forget what was happening to her as he pleasured himself inside her. Finally she felt him release his seed inside her sore vagina as he grunted his labored compliments to her for the fine lay. She sat on the bastards lap his softening cock still impaled inside her for the rest of the ride. It took another ten minutes before they stopped in the alley one of the other two men opening the car door and then she was pulled from the man's lap and tossed over the drivers shoulder. She was carried into the backdoor of a building sperm running down the back of her leg. She was dropped in a dentist like chair as the men began to disperse into the building. The seeming leader of the little group stayed behind and after producing a knife cut the rope free of her wrist. He told her to clean up as he pointed to a small room off to the side of the main room. The first thing she did after entering the tiny bathroom gently pulling the duct tape from her face and spitting out the cloth stuffed in her mouth and holding her head under the sink gulping down as much water as she could. She found upon further inspection the tiny room contained a shower, sink and toilet but no way to escape. She took the time she was given to clean herself first sitting over the toilet for many long minutes before getting up taking off what was left of her clothes and jumping in the shower. She enjoyed the shower greatly feeling as though she was finally able to clean some of the dirt off herself washing away some of the dirty things she had done. She found after exiting the shower that her clothes were missing. Knowing if she didn't exit on her own they would come in after her she started to step out of the tiny bathroom wearing only a towel. As soon as she stepped into the main room she was grabbed from behind by two of her blackmailers and tossed like a sack of potatoes back into the dentist like chair. She was quickly bound to the chair by her arms, legs, and neck each secured to the cold vinyl of the chair as her towel was ripped from her body. Her first sound of protest landed a slap to her face causing her to sit silently as her bounds were secured to the chair. The apparent leader of the little group then wheeled up next to her face and sternly looked her in the eyes as he began to speak. "Look Debra this is what you're going to do. I'm going to put you on the phone and you're going to tell your fucking husband that they botched your hair or any other bullshit you feel like making up and that they are giving you three more days to make up for the mistake but you have to stay three extra days on this trip okay?" Bill said snarling at her angrily daring her to refuse. "NO!" she said pausing to catch her breath but vowing to stay true to herself and stand up to these bastards no matter what it meant for her. "Fuck you I'm not doing another thing for you I'll see you in hell before I do anything" she told him defiantly as he pulled a tray up to the chair. "Hey Ripper I think we're ready for you now." He said as he pulled the paper towel from the tray exposing the needles underneath it. Debra felt her legs still tied to the chair pulled apart as a burly looking tattooed freak entered the room. He rolled up on a stool of his own smiling down at the sight between her now spread legs. "Where do you want me to start?" he asked as he rubbed his hands together. Debra thought she saw him drooling at the sight of her exposed sex. "We'll start by piercing her belly button then both her breast. Then I think we'll have you do her cunt you know the top of her clit a couple of rings in both of her lips. Then if she's still acting spunky well do her nose and both nostrils saving the tongue for last. Then I'll let you do her lip or eyebrow you know whatever else you want. Then you can take your payment from between her legs." Bill said speaking loudly. "By the way has your hepatitis gotten any better." Dan asked snickering. "Fuck you all, you fucking bastards!" Debra yelled before she was again slapped this time even harder than the last. "Maybe I should have had you start with her tongue." Bill said as Ripper rubbed an alcohol pad over her belly button. She stared defiantly as Ripper held a large gauge needle in the air over her stomach. "You can stop this anytime Debra by making the phone call. So what will it be?" Bill asked her holding up his hand his voice almost sounding as though her wanted her to refuse. She glared hatefully at him not bothering to answer him. Lou smiled and lowered his hand motioning for Ripper to continue. Ripper then lowered the needle and proceeded, he laid the needle on her flat stomach as he began to pinch at her belly button. He then took a metal device of some type and used it to pinch and clamp the skin around her navel together. She grunted in pain as he clamped down on her navel. The room was completely silent of all background noise. All Debra could hear as she watched Ripper work was her own labored breathing and the rampant beating of her heart. She watched in a state of distanced shock as he placed the needle in to some type of device gun like device. Holding the handle of the device he brought it to her navel steadying his aim. The pain of the needle piercing her skin was instant and severe. She opened her eyes moment after the piercing to see a gold hoop he slid in her belly button, it was a half inch in diameter and she continued to whimper in pain as tears ran down her cheek. "Well Debbie you ready to make that call now Hon? Lou asked. Debra stared up at him blankly she was in a state of shock how could this be happening to her she was a member of the PTA a regular church goer. She had never been unfaithful to her husband before that first weekend, not that she never thought about it, she had but not seriously anyway. She had never done anything like this before not willingly or knowingly anyway. To find out what had been done to her all those years ago and to now have to suffer what she had been through. She didn't deserve this she had never done anything to anyone to deserve what she was suffering, why would any human being be willing to do this to another she wondered to herself still trying to deal with the pain. "Fine go for her cunt next Ripper I want a ring right on the hood." Bill said almost happy not to get a response from Debra. Ripper motioned for her legs to be spread farther apart as he moved his chair and cart in further between her now wide spread legs. Debra grunted and wheezed as her legs where pulled further apart and locked in place. She felt like a wishbone and thought she too would snap in half as she watched in terror as Ripper took a closer look between her legs. His fingers began to pry into her sex causing her even more discomfort than she was already in. Only having his clamp like device locked in place over the hood of her clit brought her out of her trance like state. "Oh my GOD stop! Please stop! Please I'll do anything! Please just stop it okay stop!" she cried in unbearable pain as she wriggled her hip trying to alleviate the pain cursing through her crotch. "Okay Deb I'll have him stop if you make that call like a good girl okay babe?" Lou asked leaning over her face looking at her as she continued her heaving breath trying to deal with the pain. "Yes whatever please just make it stop oh God it hurts so bad please get it off! I'll do anything just please stop it!" she yelled in pain as Ripper tightened the clamp. Motioning for him to remove it Bill began to explain to Debra what she had to do as Ripper pulled the clamp from her. She listened to his demands and knew she couldn't take another three days at the hands of these brutes. At her first utterance of protest however Bill had Ripper immediately reapply the clamp and told him to insert the loop. Again she begged for release and agreed to Bill's terms before he again had Ripper remove the clamps. Soon she had calmed her voice enough that Bill had a speaker phone brought over to the side of chair next to Debra's face and dialed after a threat from Bill about what screwing up would mean to her. The call went smoothly right till the end when Ray told her how much he loved her and she began to lose it. The man next to the phone had hung up the phone just before she had muttered the first syllable in her call for help. True to his word Bill punished her having Ripper pierce the hood of her clit with a gold loop and matching studs stuck into each of her cunts lips. It didn't end there however he had Ripper pierce nose with another gold hoop along with sticking a stud through her tongue. He stopped any further piercings after she swore her cooperation to him after seeing herself in a mirror. Finally she was released from the chair promising to do whatever she was told, promising not to cause her blackmailers any more grief. She was then handed a red leather mini skirt and lacey black top that pushed her chest up and apart. She put them on with a pair of red six inch stilettos to match her suit. She then applied the bright red lipstick and dark mascara heavily just as directed before she pulled her hair back into two ponytails on either side of her head. She followed the men out thankful she had not been forced to have sex with this Ripper character. In the alley the group was startled by a bum in the alley after he knocked over a trash can looking for god knows what. Debra was disgusted by the man's unkempt appearance and smell. He obviously hadn't bathed in days perhaps weeks. She was repulsed he was so disgusting she cringed as she looked at him some strange growth on his neck. He begged Lou for a dollar and she began to fell petty for him. That's when she heard Bill say "How but I give you something even better." Then asking the bum when the last time he'd gotten laid was. The bum responded saying it had been so long he couldn't remember the last time he had been with a girl. That's when Bill did the unthinkable and offered Debra to him for five minutes to do with as he pleased. 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