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***Major Rewrite almost entirely re-written chapter *****

I was reading my story starting back at chapter one to make sure I
kept everything in line with the previous chapters as I worked on the
next chapter of the story when I noticed several errors. I also found
several things I felt I should have expanded on or just didn't like
after further review. My grammar isn't the best either but I have made
several changes and tried to clean it up and am pretty happy with the
results so here is a revised and updated version of Chapter One of
this story I will go through and update all the Chapters and repost
them as I continue working on Chapter 29. As always I hope someone
finds this story entertaining and if you do please drop me an E-mail
and let me know.

notmystory@kc.rr.com

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Warning:

This story is fiction, and should be treated as such.  The following
story is for the entertainment of ADULTS ONLY, and contains descriptions of
explicit sex.  If you are not an adult, or reading sex stories upset
you, DO NOT read any further.  If it is illegal in your location, DO NOT
read it.


This is a copyrighted work.  Copyright by Not My Story.  Reposting
or any other use of it is strictly prohibited without the express,
written permission of the author, except that it may be posted as part of a
review or posted to a free-access, noncommercial archive sites.
Disclaimer: All characters are fictitious.  Any resemblance to
anyone, either alive or dead, is purely coincidental.


'Everybody Loves Raymond' is syndicated and (C) to King World
Studios West Inc.  Usage of the characters here is in no way reflective of the
real show or the actors in it, and in now way intended to undermine their
values.


Please! Send me your comments!
notmyst...@kc.rr.com


(Note to readers after doing some research on-line I have narrowed
down that in the Second season the Debra character is supposed to be somewhere
between 33-35 years of age so I am basing this story in that time frame FYI.)


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Everybody Loves Raymond's Wife


Chapter 4


Lou Chalmers glanced through the one way mirror seeing Debra Barone
finally moving about under the muscled body of the 16 year old forward
from a local basketball team. The coach of the team had promised them
a hell of a party if they won their division and through Lou's local
contact he had set it up to see to it the coach delivered on his
promise. Out of the 14 man team 11 had come to take the coach up on
the offer to make them men. Each of the inductees to manhood pleased
to lose their virgin status to the older woman whom they had just
ravaged. When the Team entered through the back door of the club seven
of the eleven youngsters had never been with a woman before, four of
the boys although never having made love to a woman had already
enjoyed the pleasures of their young girlfriends.
The woman although older than the boys expected was still incredibly
sexy and seemed very eager to please the youngsters. She danced around
for the boys gyrating her ass and crotch in their faces as they sat in
amazement. Her breast popping out of the sheer black silk and lace
bra, her legs alluring in the thigh high stocking held in place by the
garter belt around her waist just above the tiny G-string. After
Dancing the boys into the frenzy she climbed on the coach's lap
allowing him to suck on her glorious breast before leading him to the
bed and helping him lie down on it. With his back on the bed Debra
moved to smother his face in her crotch throwing her legs over his
head while she dug his cock from his trousers and gave him the best
blow job of his life. Finally with his cock fully erect and her
desires boiling over she rolled a condom over his shaft and then
flipped around on the bed and climbed on his throbbing member pulling
her flimsy G-string to one side and impaling herself on his engorged
member. She bounced up and down on his cock for several minutes before
climbing off him and taking position on her hands and knees
encouraging him to take her from behind doggie style. He did just that
ejaculating into his condom and slapping her round ass. Before leaving
the bed he grabbed hold of her G-string now ripped from their
animalistic mating and tore it from her body taking a memento of his
time with the whore.
Debra then took the star center, again starting with a BJ before
helping him to the bed rolling a condom of his young erect member and
allowing him to use her for his pleasure she repeated the performance
for all 11 members of the team before several of the boys joined the
last boy on the bed after watching him reach orgasm riding Debra in
the missionary position. With each young man having taken her
separately the boys followed their coaches advise and began using the
sloppy whore two at a time as she lay exhausted on the bed now missing
her bra, both hose and one of her shoes only a garter belt left on her
body its straps dangling down her thighs.
Debra had passed out exhausted before the team had finished having
their second and third goes at the passed out slut that had brought
them so much joy. During a break to catch their own breath each had
gotten several photo's of themselves and then multiple team shots of
the boys lying next to the passed out woman who had been the first for
so many of the team. By the end the others had all left exhausted only
the one boy staying to take another crack at her not wanting to leave
until he couldn't get his dick up for it.
Lou watched from the desk admiring the youngster's libido, this being
his fifth time with the once respectable Mrs. Barone.  He went back to
editing the video he had been working on for the past several hours
while waiting for a status report from his friend Eddie back in New
York. Eddie had stayed behind not able to get the week off from his
work, but allowing him to continue monitoring the Barone's' house. Two
of the small listening devices he and Greg installed had quite working
since they were first placed during Debra's initial trip to meet with
Lou at the motel, but the other two bugs, phone taps and cameras still
worked allowing them to gather data on Debra and her family.
Finally Eddie called him back with the good news her husband Ray had
swallowed the newest lie the men had concocted hook line and sinker.
They had asked Bill's girlfriend to call him and invite him to come to
Florida two days earlier than Ray had initially planned offering him a
chance to interview Don Shula. The story they had come up with was Mr.
Shula had heard about Ray's planned trip from a mutual acquaintance at
the paper and wanted to interview Ray because he was shopping for a co-
author to help him write a book on his coaching career and having
loved Ray's recent column about Cal Ripken Jr. To sweeten the pot Bill
had her tell Ray he would grant him an interview while treating him to
a round of golf at his private club. Bill had his girl pretend to be
Mr. Shula's secretary and telling her he was a friend of Ray's and was
just playing a joke on him he even had her give Ray a bunch of bogus
information like the time and address of a restaurant to meet Mr.
Shula at after she had got him to accept.
Slicing yet another clip of video into his compilation Lou thought
back on why he hated Debra so much.
He had seen Debra around campus back in their college days and knew
she was way out of his league. She'd never given him a second glance
as she hung out with her little click of hotty totty sorority
girlfriends. He was attending college to be a cinematographer. He had
dreams of someday working for Scorsese, Spielberg or Howard working
the camera on an epic movie for Hollywood's great directors. It had
been his one and only aspiration in life ever since his parents bought
him his first camera when he was just six years old. He grew up
filming everything, his entire life, and to that end, happily filmed
things for anyone who asked. He had been filming that night at the
frat party when Debra had gotten drunk. He filmed as his fellow
students climbed on and off the bed each one using her just like the
slut he learned she was.
He had met her boyfriend Nick three months before that night and the
two had become fast friends. Nick was a wild young man at college on
an athletic scholarship and the star of the schools hockey team who
was being scouted by the NHL. He had met Lou in an art class, Nick
claimed to be majoring in art but in truth he concentrated more on
hockey and partying. Nick was a great guy unlike a lot of the athletes
around campus Nick was easy going and friends with everyone he met.
The two had been partnered in their class and soon started hanging out
together more having gone to grab a brew after class or catch a game.
As he got to know Nick better he learned Nick was dating Debra and was
shocked that Nick knew so little about his girlfriend that he didn't
even know what her major was even after the couple had been together
for months. He had been around Nick and the guys many times when the
free spirited Nick would tell his friends or anyone else he talked to
that he was dating a Sociology major that was studying to be a
therapist when even Lou knew Debra was really there studying for her
degree in Public Relations.
He hadn't been friends with Nick a month when he was introduced to the
couple's bizarre sex life. Nick asked Lou for a favor telling him that
he and Debra wanted him to do something for them. Knowing Lou's
affinity for photography he asked Lou to film him and Debra making
love. Lou was reluctant at first and declined at first but finally
agreeing to feeling more comfortable when Nick told him Debra liked
being blindfolded claiming it enhanced the experience for her if she
was bound and blindfolded. Lou found filming Nick and Debra very
erotic and was turned on seeing the sexy Debra Whalen grunting and
groaning around Nicks cock in her mouth or her body writhing around
under Nick as he took her roughly. After filming Nick and Debra
together three times in just a week he was introduced to the couple's
bizarre kink.
He had come to Nick's room just like the three previous times he had
filmed the couple to find all the lights on with a couple of desk
lamps aimed at the bed, music blasting and Debra lying nude on the bed
her wrists tied together a rope tied to the center of the headboard a
blindfold covering her eyes. But with another guy their Lou hadn't met
before. Nick had Lou set up and start filming just as before but then
the stranger not Nick got undressed and climbed on the bed. Lou was
shocked when this stranger pressed his cock to Debra's lips and she
began greedily sucking on his cock just as she did Nicks on the
previous occasions. The stranger then went on to make love to Debra
first flipping her over with her arms still bound having her get on
her elbows and knees as he took her doggie style before finally
flipping her back over to lie on her back spreading her legs as far
apart as they would go and finishing himself off in her unprotected
womb. Nick took her next using her anally for the first time in front
of Lou. The next day on the way to class Nick told him Debra liked to
be used like that never knowing who she'd been with. Lou filmed her
with at least 20 different guys and even got his chance to be with her
on one occasion. Nick and Debra's only rule about the sessions had
been everyone must remain silent and the music was left turned on and
load. Nick had also told Lou Debra never wanted to know who else had
made love to her saying it would ruin it for her.
He and Nick had stayed friends even after Debra had graduated and
dumped Nick, telling him she needed to grow up and become a
responsible adult. She had gone on to work in the Public relations
office of the New York Rangers. Lou had always thought it was a shitty
thing Debra had done to Nick dumping as she had, especially after
using his connections to get her job.
But Lou would meet Debra again, after college he had gotten his first
real job as a cameraman at a respected local studio. Debra was working
on an ad for the Ranger's one of his studios biggest clients. It
wasn't his first big assignment but it would be his last. The shoot
was to be filmed outside in the arena's parking lot with several of
the players. Debra had insisted they get it done before noon over the
protest of Lou, the director, and almost everyone else. They told her
the light was wrong but she had insisted adamant they stick to her
schedule. Apparently she had booked the players at another event that
afternoon and couldn't miss it.
Everyone had been right the shot was worthless. The film to grainy to
be used and the cost to shoot it again would be considerable. Someone
had to pay Debra had demanded, his studio responded to her demands. He
was fired the next day.
He applied with every other studio in town, but after being fired for
ruining a shot that cost so much no one was interested. He finally
moved out to the west coast to try his luck in the film capitol of the
world but the dark mark on his resume followed him and still no
respectable studio would even give him an interview.
His funds exhausted he returned home to New York to live with his
mother. Working as a used car salesmen for a year before he finally
got a job as a cameraman. A friend of his knew someone who shot
amateur porn. It was by no means a glamorous job but it was steady
work that paid the bills. His eye to detail and quality work was soon
noticed by others in the industry and he soon moved up in the business
and eventually worked on some of the biggest films in the adult
industry earning himself a healthy living, but was never able to break
into mainstream film productions.
The news of Nick's death did not surprise him, Nick had signed with an
NHL team just a few weeks after Debra dumped him. He had only played
in the league a year and been a mediocre player at best never making
it to be a starter before being injured and getting dropped. Nick took
the failure hard and got hooked on the pain killers he had been given
for his injury. His drug addiction to the pain killers led him to
illegal drugs. Lou had tried to help his friend but Nick was to
depressed and wouldn't take his friends advice and seek help for his
addictions. Lou had sat and listened to Nick recount all the things
that had gone wrong in his life many times before he finally died of
an OD. One of those regrets he that had always stroke Lou was when
Nick would go on and on about how sorry he was for his and Debra's
relationship. Nicked blamed himself for the couple breaking up but
never told Lou any more than that he had done her wrong and she had
been the best thing in his life and he was sorry he had ruined it. Lou
never understood Nicks guilt always having felt Debra had wronged his
friend and then wronged Lou as well.
He had been shocked to see that bitch Debra at Nick's funeral over a
year ago. It was clear she still didn't know or remember him. He had
never been a friend of hers only Nick's but she didn't even recognize
him from school or the commercial job at the funeral. He had over
heard her talking to someone else at the funeral. Apparently little
Miss Debra had quit the Rangers after just a couple of years and was
now a happily married women with three kids and a loving husband.
Lou was furious; she had cost him his life's dreams for a job she
hadn't even worked at for three years. She now had this perfect little
life and Lou had nothing and now Nick was dead. The worst part was she
had ruined his life and still didn't even know who he was.
Lou went home that night and dug out the old videos of Debra and Nick
he had. He also found the stack of pictures Nick had given him many
years ago after Debra dumped him for safe keeping. He watched the
tapes of Nick and Debra the night of the funeral and decided then and
there he would get his revenge on Debra. He planned his vengeance
well, taking over a year to meticulously put his plan into action.
He had gotten close to those who were close to Debra getting to know
her brother-in-law and her husband, but making it a point to never met
Debra. He learned about the dysfunctional family to which she
belonged.
The first blackmail letter was the toughest and most important if she
didn't take the bait what then. It was the riskiest thing he had ever
done in his life. He had rented the two connecting hotel rooms a week
ahead of time from his friend Eddie the manager of the motel and set
up all his camera gear. All looked well in the days leading up to the
first encounter Eddie had reported that no cops had come by asking
about who rented the room and had put them under a bogus name just in
case. Lou was relieved beyond words when he heard Debra's soft knocks
at the door that first day at the motel after getting the call from
Bill confirming she hadn't been followed and then the call from Eddie
saying she had headed up to the room alone. She had come and she had
submitted to all of his demands. He knew that would be the toughest
part after having talked to Ray and Robert about her.
That first day they had taken her purse and Eddie had gotten copies of
all her keys made. Eddie and Bill then went back to Debra's house
using the copied keys to get in and placed several microphones around
the house, tapping the couple's phone line and even placing small
cameras in the vents in their bedroom and bathroom. Bill then
connected the wireless devices to send their signals through Ray's DSL
connection back to Lou's computer and left before anyone was the
wiser. The biggest score of the day had been when Eddie had discovered
a box of Debra's old diaries in the attic while wiring the camera's
into the houses electricity and brought them back for Lou knowing he
already had one from her college days.
Lou found Debra's lies about her sex life amusing as he compared her
answers with the entries from the diary she had left at Nick's place
so many years ago. He would ask her questions just to see what she
would say then upon hearing her lie would call her on it. The
frustration in her voice each time he called her a liar and demanded
the truth from her made him smile as he tormented her with his ever
more graphic questions.
Lou had planned the second encounter after learning of her plans to go
out of town alone. Seizing the opportunity he had used his friends and
connections in the porn business to get and drug her and use her in
front of the camera. He would ruin her life the way she had ruined
his. He had lined up the clients for her that Friday night from the
members of her father-in-law's Frank's  lodge. Fortunately none of the
men had ever met or seen Frank's daughter-in-law before so they had no
idea who the young hooker he had set them up with was.
Lou had bought his friends help that weekend by giving them first
cracks at the young mother. They had kept her drugged and willing the
entire weekend. It was refreshing to see her so cooperative under the
drugs they had given her after having spent weeks hearing her bully
her poor husband around. Lou would return her to Raymond after having
broken the women and her will.
The next night at the club Lou could have been paid well for the use
of his hoe but he instead worked out a deal to film the encounter. In
all his years filming porn he'd never seen anything as erotic as what
he had filmed that night. The entire room had turned into an orgy of
truly epic proportions. The men and women in that room swapped
partners freely throughout the night. Debra had been used by men of
all persuasions that evening and even a women wearing a strap-on
dildo.
Early Sunday morning Lou had collected his whore who was covered in
booze and semen. Her cunt gapping open from the abuse it had received.
She kept mumbling her husband's name as he lifted her of the couch and
carried her to the waiting car.
He took her home and after taking several dozen photos of her laid out
on her bed covered in semen and sweat he setup a camera and tripod and
filmed as he plowed vigorously into her ass on the bed she shared with
her husband.
After the second encounter with Debra he had learned from reading the
many dairies retrieved by Eddie that she had no knowledge of the
events that night at the sorority house finding an entry from that
date in one of her books stating she had gotten so wasted that she and
Nick had to leave the party early and Nick had been a dear and taken
her home and put her to bed. He also discovered from reading her
entries she had never been aware of the change in partners Nick had
pulled on her after blindfolding her for sex. He even found a list of
partners Debra had made the week that she accepted Ray's marriage
proposal listing all the men she thought she had ever slept with and
stating Ray Barone would be the last name added to the list. Lou was
shocked by just how small the list was it was shorter than what she
had taken in just the one night at the party containing only 13 names.
Lou found it amazing she had never figured it out or that no one had
ever spilled the beans after all these years.
At that point he considered sending her husband the tapes of what he
had already done to her but decided that would be letting her off to
easy for destroying his life, and so he waited for his next
opportunity. When it looked like none would come he made his own. He
sold Ray the raffle tickets claiming they wore for his niece's school.
Next he sent Debra the letter stating she had won. Only after it
became clear Ray wouldn't let her go was he forced to send Ray his
invitation for the golf trip. Boy would Ray be surprised and
disappointed when he found out Mr. Shula had no clue about the
interview or Ray.
He had watched her response from the hidden camera to the tape he had
left her the day she refused to meet him for this encounter and knew
he had her even before she picked up the phone. In fact everything but
her blow up this Monday had worked out perfectly. He had wanted to
force her to obey his wishes without the drugs but either way he would
have his revenge.
He was making this tape to refresh her memory on what she had done
over the last few hours in hopes that the threat of more of the same
would make her obey him. The truth was she would get more of the same
no matter what she did. But she didn't need to know that at least not
yet.
He sliced in a scene of her haggling over price with the Basketball
coach just before a scene of her asking a young teenager his age
before taking his cock into her mouth. He was the first of the
underage boys she had sex with that evening but not the last.
He added the footage of Debra and the boys to the tape already showing
her with numerous other men. Each scene on the video clearly showing
her taking some John's money before willingly servicing him. He had
also thrown in some footage of her and the bachelor party.
He looked up as the last of the youngsters left her room having
finished with her. Lou allowed her to cry herself to sleep as he
continued to work on the tape. An hour had passed before he finished
and he got up to stretch. He sent one of his friends in to get her
cleaned up as he took a much needed nap.
He woke two hours later to find that Debra had been cleaned and
dressed and was now trying to get a little bit to eat before she was
forced to endure anymore suffering. He entered her hotel room carrying
a plate of his own food and sat down across from her.
"So Mrs. Barone you have seen what will happen if you refuse to
cooperate with us." He told her smugly enjoying the power he felt over
her.
"Look I can't do what you want I'm a married" she began to cry.
"Oh but you see Debra you will do what I want on your own or" he said
pointing to the television as it flickered to life. Debra watched the
screen as again she was forced to watch herself whore her body out to
man after man. The video just helping to clarify the blurry memories
she had.
"Please, I have children and a husband. I can't do what you're asking
me!" She pleaded "I'll forget this whole thing okay. Just let me go
home and I won't call the cops okay I won't tell anyone okay?" she
begged.
"No, afraid not Mrs. Barone just because you don't want anyone to know
what a whore you are doesn't mean I don't." Lou said waiving his hand
in the air. "Maybe you'll see it my way by tomorrow."
One of the men moved up behind her and held her in the chair as again
she was injected in her arm with the drug. She had begun to scream for
bloody murder when Lou had her given another dose of the drug. As soon
as it was finished the man behind her moved his hands from her arms to
her chest and mouth forcing her mouth closed.
Lou watched her heave under Jimmy's grip. She was far to small to
escape his powerful arms. Lou sat and ate as he watched her struggle.
The inflammatory drug had caused her breast to swell inflating her 34B
breast to a 34D or DD cup size. As the swelling finally went down she
would be left with only about 75% of the growth she now showed.
Jimmy held his hand over her mouth for about five minutes until she
stopped trying to scream. Seeing she had calmed down under the drug he
sat down at the table with Lou and Debra for a bite to eat himself.
Debra began to giggle to herself now fully under the drugs influence.
Lou took pleasure as he watched her enlarged breast bounce in the tub
top she wore as she giggled over and over again. He took note that her
skin was still as white and creamy as it had been all those years ago.
She had an incredible body for a woman who had given birth to twins
just a few years ago. He had enjoyed filming her back in college and
found he was enjoying himself even more now over a decade later.
He finished his food before standing up from the table he left the
room and returned a few minutes later his camera bag in hand.
"You ready to get out on the streets there Mrs. Barone?" he asked with
a smile. Debra simply looked up at him as her head fell from one side
to the other as he helped her from the chair.

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