Message-ID: <55623asstr$1176732601@assm.asstr-mirror.org> X-Original-To: ckought69@hotmail.com Delivered-To: ckought69@hotmail.com X-Original-Path: q75g2000hsh.googlegroups.com!not-for-mail From: "Notmystory" <notmystory@kc.rr.com> X-Original-Message-ID: <1176702449.641978.209110@q75g2000hsh.googlegroups.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable NNTP-Posting-Date: Mon, 16 Apr 2007 05:47:29 +0000 (UTC) User-Agent: G2/1.0 X-HTTP-UserAgent: Mozilla/4.0 (compatible; MSIE 7.0; Windows NT 6.0; WOW64; SLCC1; .NET CLR 2.0.50727; .NET CLR 3.0.04506; InfoPath.2),gzip(gfe),gzip(gfe) Complaints-To: groups-abuse@google.com Injection-Info: q75g2000hsh.googlegroups.com; posting-host=24.163.234.67; posting-account=rhFKmQwAAAAfT1PNuzSNrbYskjoBvJ1n X-ASSTR-Original-Date: 15 Apr 2007 22:47:29 -0700 Subject: {ASSM} (Revised) Everybody Loves Raymond's Wife 1 (M+/F, Blackmail, Coer) Lines: 470 Date: Mon, 16 Apr 2007 10:10:01 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2007/55623> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: RuiJorge, dennyw I was reading my story starting back at chapter one to make sure I kept everything in line with the previous chapters as I worked on the next chapter of the story when I noticed several errors. I also found several things I felt I should have expanded on or just didn't like after further review. My grammar isn't the best either but I have made several changes and tried to clean it up and am pretty happy with the results so here is a revised and updated version of Chapter One of this story I will go through and update all the Chapters and repost them as I continue working on Chapter 29. As always I hope someone finds this story entertaining and if you do please drop me an E-mail and let me know. notmystory@kc.rr.com *************************************************************************** ** Warning: This story is fiction, and should be treated as such. The following story is for the entertainment of ADULTS ONLY, and contains descriptions of explicit sex. If you are not an adult, or reading sex stories upset you, DO NOT read any further. If it is illegal in your location, DO NOT read it. This is a copyrighted work. Copyright by Not My Story. Reposting or any other use of it is strictly prohibited without the express, written permission of the author, except that it may be posted as part of a review or posted to a free-access, noncommercial archive sites. Disclaimer: All characters are fictitious. Any resemblance to anyone, either alive or dead, is purely coincidental. 'Everybody Loves Raymond' is syndicated and (C) to King World Studios West Inc. Usage of the characters here is in no way reflective of the real show or the actors in it, and in now way intended to undermine their values. Thanks to Ted E. Bear again for taking time to edit, proof read and contributed to this story. Thanks. Please! Send me your comments! notmyst...@kc.rr.com (Note to readers after doing some research on-line I have narrowed down that in the Second season the Debra character is supposed to be somewhere between 33-35 years of age so I am basing this story in that time frame FYI.) *************************************************************************** ** Everybody Loves Raymond's Wife Chapter 1 Debra Barone drove her car into the uncertain fate that awaited her. Her ordeal had all began some three months ago. First she had found the photos in a large blue envelope left in the car seat while she was dropping the twins off at school. She had immediately recognized the photos. She had allowed her old boyfriend Nick to take them of her back in college before she had ever met Ray. At the time she had convinced herself it was art with Nick being an amateur photographer and majoring in art while attending school on an athletic scholarship but now looking back in retrospect it was nothing more than smutty porn. She couldn't believe she had ever allowed him to take photos like this of her in the first place. But in her defense she had been young, adventourous and stupid. She was an adventurous college student at the time experimenting with her own sexuality and Nick hadn't been the first to take a raunchy photo of her, she had been photographed raising her shirt at Mardi Gras and to her dismay found the picture on the front page of the local section of the local paper the next day black bars covering the nipples on her exposed chest. When the couple had finally broke up Nick swore he had given her all the prints and negatives. She took them, and after reviewing them disgusted at herself for allowing him to take so many photo's of her in so many disturbing poses from those of her with her legs spread while she fingered her sex to those of her with his cock resting on her chin or down her throat, convinced she had them all she then burnt them and put it behind her. She met Ray a couple of years later and never looked back. Then some 7 years later she had seen Nick's obituary in the paper and attended his funeral just over a year ago. His carefree life had been the cause of his early demise, and as Debra looked back at the life she had before Ray and her children she knew she had made the right choice. She had a loving husband and 3 wonderful children. Sure Ray was an idiot sometimes but he was her idiot and she loved him. The first note left with the photo's had warned her not to tell anyone or else. It threatened everyone starting with her Mother-in-law Marie would get a set of the photos of her if she didn't do exactly as she was instructed. The note instructed her to go to a local motel after dropping her kids off at school the next day to make the payment arrangements necessary to keep the photos from those she loved. She was told to put on the included blindfold and knock on the door of room 315. With the warning of what would happen if she refused, she knew she had no choice but to obey. Debra knew there was no way she could ever let Marie or anyone else for that matter see the photos of her. Marie already hated her or so it felt and Frank and Robert would be unbearable to be around after being seeing photos of her like that. Deep down she thought Marie actually loved and accepted her as her daughter-in-law, but she knew the photos would change that and ruin her life. No way would the saint Marie ever accept the fact that her little angel Ray had married a tramp who would have had photos like that taken of her. She would never let Debra live it down. That would be bad enough if she only saw them a few times a year on holiday's and had to suffer the indignity, but to live next door to her in-laws and have to face Marie day after day, no way could she live with that. There was no way she could allow that to happen. She decided to do as the note instructed to keep those photos from her family. She feared what might happen but believed she could handle it. She wouldn't do anything else to jeopardize her marriage, but she had to get those photos back without anyone else seeing them. She arrived at the motel that day and followed the instructions on the note to the letter. Standing in front of the door she looked around worried before placing the blindfold over her eyes and timidly knocking on the door and waiting. After what seemed like an eternity standing at the door blindfolded she heard it open. She flinched as a gentle hand took hold of her arm and led her into the room. Debra Barone's heart stopped as a quiet and gentle male voice told her to have a seat; her purse was taken from her hand as she sat slowly in the chair. She had worn one of Ray's sweatshirts and a pair of her sweatpants under the thick winter coat she wore. She had tried to ugly herself up the best she could. She wore no make-up and left her hair a mess from restless night's sleep. The triple layer of clothes she wore made it impossible to see her figure and made her look much fatter than she was. Debra had stopped by the bank gotten all the cash she could then she had gone to an ATM machine taking out as large a cash advance on all their credit cards as she could, she only hoped it would be enough. She had no idea how much money it would take to buy back the photos but she knew she had to get them. She waited in silence listening to the motion around her. She thought there must be two or more people in the room from the sounds of movement she heard. Deciding five minutes of silence must have passed Debra finally spoke up. "Hello?" she said the fear echoing in her voice. "Yes Mrs. Barone what can I do for you?" the soft voice responded to her. "I... I don't. well I just wondered what was happening?" she said "What do you think is happening?" the voice asked "Um well I don't know." She paused "I guess I just don't understand why I'm here." She asked sounding confused and worried "Well you drove yourself here Mrs. Barone I would hope you know why you're here." The voice said smugly. "So why don't you tell me why you're here?" "Aaugh well I guess... no I mean I came here to get the pictures of me.... You said to be here to make payment arrangements... I uh don't really have a lot of money but I brought what I could so... well I mean what do you want for the pictures?" Debra asked more concerned now than when she had first got there. "I would like to know what it is you think I want for those pictures Mrs. Barone?" the voice asked again. "I don't know I don't think there really any good they uh well I mean they can't really be worth much who uh I mean who other than me uhm would even uh want them." She said stumbling for an answer. "Really you don't think anyone else might want to see them. Hmmm I bet your crazy old Mother-in-law or Ray's brother Robbie would love to see them so I guess the question is what do you think I want for them Mrs. Barone?" the voice asked. "I thought you would want money. I mean my husband he's a writer for Newsday and so I thought you know that you thought we had money and you could blackmail me for some quick cash." She said skeptically "No you didn't Mrs. Barone. We both know what you thought I would want from you." The voice said menacingly "but for now I just want to ask some questions Mrs. Barone." A tear streaked down her face as she realized she wouldn't be able to buy the photo's back nor could she do what she felt he was implying to get them back. "Well I guess I should be going." she said as she reached for the blindfold. "STOP!" shouted the voice "you take off that blindfold and these pictures will make it home before you do Deb" the voice said. And so it began. For three hours Debra was interrogated by the voice. She was never touched and no one made a move on her as she sat terrified of what was to come. The hours passed slowly under the grueling questioning and by the end he had begun to ask her more and more personal questions. Questions about her sex life with Ray and her sex life before she had met Ray. She was asked about the photos and when they were taken and by whom and why she would have allowed it. She was forced to tell every detail of her life, her friends family and schedule, but most importantly of her sex life. She was forced to say how many partners she had been with and every detail about them. She got more concerned as the questioning continued it seemed as if he already knew the answers to so many of the questions. The fact is every time she would try to lie to the voice he called her on it telling her he knew she had lied and demanded she tell him truth. It had been an excruciatingly long and grueling three hours when the voice told her she would be free to go she just had to wait two minutes before she could remove the blindfold and leave. It had been bad but the worst part was she had never had a chance to ask about getting the photo's back, after every answer she gave immediately came another question until finally the voice told her it was over, at that point she was just so thankful to end the questioning she had totally forgot to ask about the pictures. Another four weeks past before she heard from her blackmailer again. She had received another envelope containing even more photo's of her from her college days. This envelope included several shots that shocked and appalled her to the point of anger, she couldn't remember Nick having taken the shots of her or anything else about when the must have been taken. The photos showed her with men other than Nick strange men some she knew from school some complete strangers all with her blindfolded many with her tied to a bed. She was shocked and infuriated as she put what had happened together in her mind. Nick had a thing for blindfolds himself he used to love to encourage her to get drunk and stoned and tie her to the bed then blindfold her before making love to her. Only now did she know it hadn't always been Nick but many times his friends who would have their way with her as she lay helplessly on the bed. Again the envelope had contained a note and a blindfold. She was instructed to do the same as she had the first time. She had decided on the drive home from her first encounter to not to go to another rendezvous with her blackmailer scared to death what might happen if she did instead choosing to take her chances trying to explain to Ray and his family her relationship with Nick but now with over a dozen photos of her with different men she decided she had no choice but to meet him one last time. Nothing had happened on her first encounter with her blackmailer and she would rather face a strangers questions than those of the entire Barone family. She was at least relieved by the timing of the latest demand. Ray, Robert and his parents where picking up the kids from school that day and taking them camping for the weekend. She had planned on driving out of town to see her mother after dropping the kids off at preschool that morning. Now she would just have to leave from the motel. At least she would have a few days away from Ray and the kids to deal with whatever was to come. Again she timidly knocked on the door after placing the blindfold over her eyes and again she had been led into the room and sat in silence for what seemed like an eternity. The first thing the voice had said to her was "Open your mouth." Reluctantly she opened her mouth thinking of how to respond to such a strange request. As soon as her lips parted to speak a small rubber ball was forced inside her mouth spreading her jaw apart painfully. Instantly two sets of hands had grabbed each of her arms and held her in the chair. At the same time the ball gag had been latched in place behind the back of her head. She panicked knowing at least four men had her gagged and pinned as she tried to break free squirming as best she could in the grip of the powerful hands holding her in place. Fear shot up her spine as she felt the sleeve of her coat and sweatshirt pulled up her arm exposing her bare skin to the cool air of the room. Her fear and panic had spiked as a cold cotton swab was rubbed on her forearm she had struggled with all her might before the needle pushed effortlessly thru her skin. The struggle to break free from her captors was the last clear memory she had when she woke up late Sunday afternoon naked and sticky in her own disheveled bed at home. Debra Barone awoke both tired and sore, a painful ache in her crotch, ass, breast and mouth. In truth every inch of her body ached from her ordeal. She knew she had sex, lots of sex. In fact she had been screwed more times than she could count from the time she arrived at that hotel room. Her limited memory of the events that weekend was foggy almost dream like. As she struggled to recall what had happened to her she thought back to her struggle in the motel room and slowly brief recollections of had happened began popping back into her head. There had been at least half a dozen men in the room that morning. She remembered the blindfold being taken off her, allowing her to see the room full of men. She didn't think she had recognized any of them but the memories were so foggy she couldn't be sure. The men had taunted her for several minutes after the blindfold had been removed, giving the drug time to work. Then they released her arms and removed the gag. They allowed her to rest in the chair for only minutes before her nightmare began. Then she remembered being asked to strip. Oh god the cameras, she had stripped for the group of men in front of at least two cameras. As she lay there trying to recall the events of that weekend she found herself unable to believe what had happened and what she had done. She had begun to follow the men's directions and had danced and even flirted with the men as they helped her remove the many layers of clothes she wore. Oh God no she screamed to herself she had been filmed having sex with multiple men and not just having sex. She had enjoyed it. She had done it willingly she had... She cried herself into the shower after pulling the soiled sheets from the bed, as she tried to wash away the memory of what had happened and what she had done. The fact was that other than having had her already neatly trimmed bush now shaved clean and a few small bruised on her thighs, breast and arms she could find no other signs of her infidelity on her body. Debra stayed in the shower for over an hour and a half, crying as she recalled more painful memories from that weekend. At least Frank installing that new water heater had paid off she had thought, before wondering what sick things the crude old man would say if he knew how she had spent her weekend. She remembered being led from the motel room after satisfying all the men there, but before they left she had been helped to shower and cleaned including shaving clean her bush by several of the eager fellows who had just ravished her. Her short red dress, Ray's favorite in fact had been handed to her to put on. She was given her makeup bag and instructed to doll herself up nice. She left the hotel looking like a million bucks despite just being used like a cheap tramp by a group of strange men. Three of the men took her to a fine restaurant downtown in the lobby of a hotel. After the group had finished dinner Debra was taken to the dance floor where she was swapped from one partner to another as the men she came with returned to their table and began speaking to different men who had joined them at the table. Debra danced for over half an hour while her blackmailers talked at the table. Finally one of them approached her. He instructed her to accompany Mr. Smith for the time being. Mr. Smith if that was his name was at least sixty years old and obviously lonely. She accompanied him to a hotel room above the restaurant. In retrospect she couldn't understand why she had done it but the fact is she had. When the couple entered the room the old man had climbed all over her after pushing her down on the bed. She remembered being there and succumbing to his aggressive sexual advances but she still couldn't figure out why she allowed it to happen. In less than an half an hour he had finished with her and kissing her gently on her head he dressed and after placing several bill's on the dresser he left her lying nude on the bed his senior citizen sperm swimming inside her once proud body. Debra lay on the bed looking up as her older lover went to leave. When he opened the door he was greeted by two of Debra's blackmailers. She remembered seeing the money from Mr. Smith sitting on the dresser picked up by one of the two men. As he left they entered they were quick to help her get dressed, cleaned up and retouch her make-up before they took her back down to the hotels bar. No sooner had they arrived than Debra was given a tall fruity drink and introduced to a Mr. Jones. She was hurried to finish the drink before she was told to show Mr. Jones the highlights of local entertainment. As soon as she sat her finished drink down on the bar Mr. Jones escorted her back to the same hotel room. She had noted the bed had been remade and a bottle of champagne had been opened and left on ice. If Mr. Smith had been Sixty Mr. Jones was his older brother. He poured them each a glass of champagne and sat and watched as she sipped hers while sitting on the edge of the bed. When she had finished he began to instruct her on what he wanted her to do. Again she had obeyed his every wish standing and slowly dropping her dress to the floor. She climbed on the bed as he asked and began to tease her nipples just as he directed, she then rubbed the ice from the champagne across her breast and then her crotch to the old mans glee. Soon she was diving her fingers erotically into her now well used cunt in front of the leering old man. She couldn't remember when he had dropped his pants and joined her only that he had. He had used her as so many others that day had. Again as he left, her blackmailers returned, took the money he left and helped her dress and clean up and then returned her to the bar. No sooner would she get there than she would be sent back to the room with someone else. By eleven at night this had been repeated over and over again she was unsure how many times. Saturday had been a day of more of the same she had awoken to a shot of drugs in her arm and dick in her ass. After the three men in the hotel room had used her she was given the morning after pill, some other pill she hadn't heard what and some breakfast. The group stayed in the hotel room till some time after lunch. Debra had been well cleaned in every way possible to start her second day on the job nice and clean. They took the young mother to a local shop where they bought her a couple of dresses that barely covered her thirty something body having her wear on out of the shop. After having her eat a light dinner and down several mixed drinks Debra was taken back to the hotel room. At the direction of her blackmailers she put on her new black dress and plenty of make-up. She had been given a pair of six inch heels to wear but after falling down twice before getting out of the room they let her wear a four inch pair out of pure necessity. The men took her to an exclusive nightclub were they danced and had her flirt for several hours. By 9 p.m. the club had opened its exclusive VIP area. Unlike some clubs that had only a small room the VIP room here was a club of its own. As Debra was escorted back to the room by some type of security person she saw one of her blackmailers taking a large wad of cash from some sort of club management. As she watched this one of the other blackmailers whispered in her ear. "Just do everything you're told Mrs. Barone. You do anything anyone wants like a good girl you understand me?" She remembered shaking her head in acceptance of his orders as the two separated and she was lead into the posh exclusive VIP room. Inside the room a group of the cities young elite indulged in all their carnal desires. Drugs like Ecstasy where everywhere throughout the room and it took only seconds before she was ushered onto the dance floor by a hunky young man. The music was load and thumping she had never heard anything like it before. The dancing was also foreign to her as her partner on the dance floor ground his body into hers in a most elicit display. He was soon replaced by another and then another as man after man jumped in to grind the body into her on the crowded dance floor. She was eventually pulled from the dance floor where she was given a drink. She wasn't sure what it was perhaps a screwdriver she thought. As she sipped on her drink one of her former dance partners brought a pill to her lips and after slipping it in her mouth he brought her glass back to her lips forcing her to wash it down. Once she finished her drink he took her back onto the dance floor. This time the constant grinding really started to effect her as her arousal grew the longer the stimulation went on. Unsure when or how she remembered being led from the dance floor and laid on one of the large couches lined up around the walls of the room. She found her dress was bunched up at her waist as her dance partner began sucking heavily on her breast with his fingers exploring her cunt having pushed her tiny g-string aside. Her eyes explored the room as her partner explored her body and she noted she must be one of the older women in the room, perhaps the oldest. As time passed her dance partner had moved from sucking and fingering her to screwing her savagely he ravished her and left her lying there exposed for the next lucky fellow. It took no time at all before he was replaced by a tall strapping black man. She remembered looking down at her crotch as the dark shaft was pumped inside her body over and over again, disappearing deep inside her. She remembered his gushing climax as he sprayed his seed across her face having pulled himself from her cunt and moving to her head jabbing his spewing cock at her mouth urging her to swallow. He was quickly replaced by another and then another. She had found herself sandwiched between two men one thrusting his rigid cock into her tightly clenched ass from below while another rammed her cunt from the top. As she screamed in discomfort someone else shoved a cock into her open mouth. She remembered looking around the room at the time and seeing other women in similar situations lying on couches around the room. The VIP room had become an all out orgy with more people entering all the time. Her memory of the rest of the evening faded into the orgy she found herself a part of. By the time Ray and the kids had made it home she had stopped her crying but only because she didn't think she was physically capable of shedding even one more tear. She tried to act normally as she greeted her husband and the children, and of course it wasn't an hour before Ray's parents and his brother had come over. She suffered thru the evening and the next several days. She had been able to put Ray off for several days but eventually she had to agree to his request for sex. She had shaved herself clean before so Ray only mentioned it in passing. He told her it seemed somehow better than he remembered. This frightened her did he know? No of course he didn't she wasn't on ESPN he had to be clueless she reassured herself as she rolled over to fall asleep. Please send comment or questions to notmystory@kc.rr.com -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ------ send stories to: <ckought69@hotmail.com>| | FAQ: <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/faq.html> Moderators: <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |ASSM Archive at <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org> Hosted by <http://www.asstr-mirror.org> | |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d; look for subject {ASSD}| +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+