Message-ID: <49043asstr$1093853417@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: <poster@giganews.com> X-Original-To: ckought69@hotmail.com Delivered-To: ckought69@hotmail.com X-Original-Path: nntp.adelphia.com!news.adelphia.com.POSTED!not-for-mail NNTP-Posting-Date: Sun, 29 Aug 2004 16:30:21 -0500 From: "Bernard Sagon" <bernard-sagon@hotmail.com> X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2800.1441 X-Original-Message-ID: <2O6dnbXTV_5z16_cRVn-jA@adelphia.com> X-DMCA-Complaints-To: copyright@adelphia.net X-Abuse-and-DMCA-Info: Please be sure to forward a copy of ALL headers X-Abuse-and-DMCA-Info: Otherwise we will be unable to process your complaint properly X-Postfilter: 1.3.13 X-Spamscanner: mailbox9.ucsd.edu (v1.4 May 20 2004 13:55:33, 3.2/5.0 2.63) X-MailScanner: PASSED (v1.2.8 35744 i7TLUN9d056470 mailbox9.ucsd.edu) X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Sun, 29 Aug 2004 17:32:22 -0400 Subject: {ASSM} (New) Amanda, My Sibling - 07 of 15 - Chap. 4 (no sex) Lines: 584 Date: Mon, 30 Aug 2004 04:10:17 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2004/49043> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: gill-bates, RuiJorge AMANDA, MY SIBLING - Chapter 4 (no sex). By Bernard Sagon Copyright (c) 2004 - all rights reserved. ================================================================ This is Chapter 4 of the sequel to my earlier story "Sis On Tape". As always, any comments and criticism from those readers interested enough to write will be greatly appreciated. Please send any comments to the newsgroup or directly to bernard_sagon@hotmail.com - I will attempt to answer all E-mail within a reasonable time frame. Comments posted to the newsgroups alt.sex.stories or alt.sex.stories.d will be answered within the newsgroup they are posted to. ================================================================ If you are unfamiliar with "Sis On Tape", the prequel to this story, I highly recommend that you read it first. Although "Amanda, My Sibling" has been written to stand on its own merits (such as they are), this story and its characters will be more understandable if you are familiar with the earlier work. I am reposting that story to the newsgroups for your convenience. ================================================================ Disclaimer: The following story is a work of fiction and contains sexually explicit adult material. If you are not an adult, do not wish to view such material, or if such material is prohibited in your locality, you should exit at this time. YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED. ================================================================ This is a copyrighted work of fiction and the author retains all rights to this story. This story may be freely copied and/or distributed for non-commercial use or by archival services with this notice and any applicable headers and footers attached, as required by law. This story may not be reproduced in any form for profit without the express written permission of the author. ================================================================ This story consists of a prologue, nine chapters, and an epilogue. ================================================================ Chapter 4: With the increased intimacy between Amanda and myself came other changes. Picking up on what my sister had confided in me, I set up a little surprise for her during the middle of summer vacation. Amanda had developed an interest in theater during her freshman year of college, so when I found out that the National Shakespeare Touring Company would be passing through our area, I made my plans. Perhaps I shouldn't have, but I knew I would be pushing her down a path she already wanted to explore. And I could never have guessed where that path would end up leading both of us. Now that we were both out of school, we had the house to ourselves during the week while our parents were at work. We were alone together in the living room, just listening to music on the entertainment center's CD changer. This was the other dimension of our new relationship - the non-sexual part. Over the months since our first couplings, we had developed a series of mutual likes that we shared. My sister had introduced me to progressive jazz. I had introduced her to modern folk and - God help me - rock-a-billy. Although our tastes in music remained distinctly different, we had managed to find a common ground of works that we both enjoyed. That day it had been her turn to choose the music, and the album d'jeur was by Miles Davis. I found that I liked it quite a bit, although not nearly as much as my sister did. I could watch the music wash over her and carry her away. Indeed, half the fun of our listening sessions was watching her response to the music - a visceral response that displayed almost as much intensity as her sexual ones when in the throes of passion. Amanda turned to me during a particularly complex interplay of instruments and said "Don't you just love the counterpoint during this part - the way it and the melody accent each other? It's almost like two lovers flirting back and forth with each other." "You have quite an imagination there, Sis." I answered. "All I can hear is music. Not that the music isn't nice, but I think I'm more oriented toward lyrics. I need words to move me." "Words operate on a different part of your brain," she countered. "You have to think about them. Pure music works on a deeper level. You need to open yourself up to new experiences Kenneth - learn to let your feelings go." Amanda admonished me with the voice of authority, "Not everything can be put into words." I grunted, "Yeah, I've learned that." Stepping into the opening she had given me, I continued, "Speaking of new experiences, you're due for one of your own. I've been saving a little surprise for you." "A surprise?" she responded inquisitively. "What kind of surprise?" "The good kind, I hope." I said, smiling. "Just stay right there. I'll be back in a minute." I left her gaping at me as I headed up the stairs, taking them two at a time. It was a short trip to my bedroom to retrieve my prize from the drawer of my desk. Bounding back down the stairs, I returned to her holding an elongated envelope in my hand. "I think you'll like this." I said, pressing the envelope into her palm. She turned it over in her hand, examining it carefully. She had no problem knowing what the envelope must contain. The "Ticket Master" logo was prominently printed across the envelope. Amanda lifted the envelope's flap and looked inside. "Oh my God... " she exclaimed as she looked at the contents - two tickets fourth row center to the National Shakespeare Company's production of "Othello". "I don't believe this! I love Shakespeare! How did you ever know?" I answered with a slight laugh. "Do you think that the only time I pay attention to what you're saying is when you're in the middle of an orgasm? You've been talking about theatre ever since you got involved with that little theatre group at your college." "But there's two tickets here," she said, pointing out the obvious. "I didn't know you liked Shakespeare." "You're right about that." I acknowledged. "'Best Little Whorehouse In Texas' is more my speed." She looked at me, confusion on her face. "But if the second ticket isn't for you, who IS it for?" "Cindy Hartwell." I replied simply. Amanda looked at me very strangely. "Cindy Hartwell? But we don't hang together. You know that." "I also know you told me that you wished that you and she were friends. This is your chance, if you play it right. I'm sure she'd enjoy the play. I've been doing a little strategic reconnaissance lately. Cindy is home from college for the summer and I've managed to do a little eavesdropping on her and her friends. In fact, she was the one who mentioned to her companions that the National Shakespeare Company would be in town and how much she would love to see them." "So why doesn't she just go with her friends?" "Because," I stated - as if explaining the facts of life to her - "as you once told me, she's one of six kids being raised by a widowed mother. Not everybody in the world has the cash to spare for seventy-five dollar theatre tickets." "You spent seventy-five dollars for these tickets?" Amanda asked, stunned. "Seventy-five dollars EACH." I corrected. "God Ken! You shouldn't have gotten me these. You can't afford that kind of money." "Not as a routine expense, I can't," I responded, lightly. "It really wasn't that bad. I knew this was important to you." If my sister only knew. I had spent the spring working odd jobs to save up enough to cover the cost of car repairs on my shitbox Ford Escort. Now it would be at least another three months before I'd be able to earn enough money to put new rear tires on my car. My poor bank account had taken a SEVERE hit buying those tickets. "Well, I still don't know. What if Cindy doesn't accept? It's not like she knows me." "Then I'll be out the cost of the second ticket," I responded, casually. "I assume you'd still want to go. But I don't think that's going to happen. I know you. You know how to turn on the charm when you want something." I could see the battle going on in her mind. Amanda had never had to worry about being accepted. But this was different. This involved some real risk. She would be inviting an outsider into her world - or ever riskier, she would asking to enter another person's world. She wasn't sure of the rules of THIS game. "Do you really think she might accept?" she asked sheepishly. I knew then that she wanted to do it and that I had been right to push the issue. "Why wouldn't she?" I replied. "At worse, she'll find out that you're not her cup of tea. She'll still get to see a play she wouldn't otherwise be able to. I think she'll take the chance." "Well, I hope you're right." "So, why don't you find out? Give her a call." "You mean right now?" she said, nervously. "No time like the present. I just happen to know her phone number." My sister gave me a questioning look. "You plotted all this, didn't you?" "Guilty on all counts." I confirmed, with a grin. Then I continued more seriously, "This isn't some kind of prank, Amanda. I did it for you. You told me how you wished you had approached Cindy. Well, I don't want you to have to live with regrets of what might have been. Maybe it will work out, or maybe it won't, but you'll never know if you don't try. So dial the number." "Alright." she said. "I'll do it. Just stay with me for moral support. I'm not as certain as you are that this is a good idea." "I'll be right here with you. Why don't you use the speakerphone? That way I'll know what's being said." "Okay, we'll do that." she agreed. "Come on," I said and headed toward our parent's bedroom with Amanda tagging along behind me. We crossed the bedroom into Dad's den on the other side. I waited for my sister to take the chair at the desk, and then seated myself in the recliner by the window. "Well, here goes nothing" my sister said, obviously nervous. She flipped the switch on the speakerphone, bringing it the life. The soft insistent sound of the dial tone could be heard. I gave her the number, which she dialed, the tones audible over the phone's speaker. The telephone on the other end began to ring. I sure hoped that someone was home. Having pushed Amanda this far, I didn't know if I'd be able to convince her to risk making the trip a second time. I needn't have worried. The call was answered on the fourth ring by a soft feminine voice. "Good morning, Hartwell residence. Can I help you?" "Ah... yes," Amanda said hesitantly. "Could you tell me if Cindy is there?" "This is Cindy." "Oh... ah, hi. This is Amanda Carson. You may not remember me, but we were seniors together two years ago in high school. Anyway, I happen to have been given two tickets for the National Shakespeare Company's production of 'Othello', and I was just wondering if you might ... ah ... you know ... ah ... want to go to see it with me?" There was a long pause from the other end of the line before Cindy responded, "Are you sure you want to ask ME?" "Absolutely certain," Amanda replied, without hesitation. "Why? Why me? We're not friends or anything. We've never hung with the same crowds. I don't understand." Amanda tried to ease her confusion. "I want to go with someone who can appreciate what we'll be seeing. I discovered theatre last year in college and just fell in love with it. I want to share the experience with someone who'll enjoy it as much as I will. That's why I thought of you." You could hear the lack of comprehension - the doubt - in Cindy's voice. "But why would you think of me? I still don't understand." "Because we had senior English together. You sat in the front of the room and were so smart. I was near the back and, I hate to say, wasn't as involved. But I remember when we had to read 'MacBeth'. I could tell then that you were into Shakespeare, so that's how I knew that you might be interested in seeing 'Othello'. So what do you say? Would you like to attend a show with me? You're invited if you want to come." "Well," Cindy stammered nervously, "I don't know..." "Please?" Amanda continued. "What have you got to lose? At worse we'll find we don't hit it off. You'll still get a nice evening out of it and you WILL get to see the play." Even I could hear the uncertainty, the fear of being the outsider in Cindy's answer. "Well, are you sure you want me with you? I don't think I'll fit in very well." Amanda could feel her chance to reach out to Cindy slipping through her fingers. She must have made up her mind to go for broke, because when she answered she didn't hold anything back. "Cindy, please. I really want this. I know how you must feel. You think I may be setting you up for some cruel joke. I can't blame you for that. Some of the girls I used to hang with in high school would do just that sort of thing. They wouldn't think twice about trying to get you into some sort of embarrassing situation and hurting your feelings just so they could feel superior to you. But I'm not like that, Cindy. I want to be your friend. I really do. Do you think you could believe that?" "Well," Cindy replied hesitantly, "I suppose so." "Then please say you'll come. I know you'll enjoy the play." "Well... " "And Cindy...?" "Yes?" she responded, rising to the bait. "If it makes you feel any better about this," Amanda continued, "you should know that I'm just as scared about asking you to go to this play with me as you must be about accepting." "Really?" Cindy responded, a tone of surprise in her voice. "You're afraid of ME?" "Terrified actually," my sister confessed. "You and the rest of your friends are all so smart. I was always afraid I'd end up looking so stupid if I tried to join your group." Amanda released a small sigh. "Put yourself in my shoes. It's not all that safe for me to reach out toward you. I know the kind of things that people used to say about the girls I hung with. You could end up rejecting me as part of the 'Bimbo Brigade'. I could get hurt too, you know." "I'd never do something like that." Cindy assured her. "I know. I've seen you with your friends. I know what kind of person you are. I've been hoping to get to know you for a long time now. I wanted to congratulate you back when you got your Fulbright, but I didn't know how to approach you." Amanda paused for emphasis. "Cindy, I still don't know how to approach you, but I'm making the effort. I'm taking a risk with you. I think you're worth that risk." "Wow! I never knew you felt like that." was Cindy's response. "I don't know what to say..." "Then say you'll go with me to the play. PLEASE?" There was a long pause that seemed to last forever. "Very well," Cindy finally said, "I'll go to the play with you." "Oh, thank you. You won't regret it." "No promises though. I still don't know how well we'll get along." Amanda agreed. "Right - no promises. All I'm asking for is a chance." Things pretty much wound down from there. Cindy and Amanda continued to discuss practical things like times and dates. Finally Cindy and my sister said their goodbyes and the soft click of Cindy hanging up could be heard over the speakerphone. Her hand shaking a little, Amanda flipped the small switch, hanging up her end. "Well," I volunteered, "that seems to have gone pretty well." The flicker of a smile crossed my sister's face. "Yeah, it did kinda, didn't it?" Amanda shook her head in disbelief. "I didn't think she'd ever agree. I could feel how uncertain she was about my approaching her." "Well, I knew you could do it." I grinned at her knowingly. "I think the part where you told her the risk you were taking was what pushed her over. None of that was an act, was it? You were really that scared?" "It was all real - at least with the exception of my telling her the idea of asking her to join me was mine. All the rest was the God's-honest truth." "That's what I thought. I'm sorry I had to push you into calling her, but you might never have done it on your own." "I know." Amanda replied sheepishly. "I guess I owe you one." "Don't worry about that." I answered lightly. "Just have a good time with Cindy" **************************************************************** During the two weeks before the weekend of the play approached, several more phone calls took place between Amanda and Cindy as arrangements were finalized. At Amanda's insistence reservations were made for dinner at one of the better Italian restaurants in the city. This restaurant was one that my sister was quite familiar with, as it had been a favorite with a number of the boys she had dated in high school due to its good food and - more importantly - its reasonable prices. My sister discussed the whole idea with me and explained that she had deliberately gone out of her way to choose a place that Cindy could afford on her limited budget. I had to admire her forethought, and told her so. I had not thought past the play tickets when I had planned this outing. My sister could use the fact that they were a gift to pass the cost of them off so Cindy wouldn't have to pay for hers. This dinner was a perfect addition. It would allow Cindy to avoid the embarrassment of having to let Amanda pay for the entire evening and make this whole affair more of a meeting of equals. Amanda also went out of her way to make Cindy comfortable by ensuring her clothing would compliment her companion's. On this last item she was pleased to discover that no dressing down would be required. Cindy was in possession of a very nice, very elegant cocktail dress that would nicely match the outfit that Amanda planed to wear. (We would later learn that it was her mother's, who was almost the same size, and who had become quite adept at performing alterations while trying to stretch her budget to clothe her six children.) In the last few days before the play, Cindy even managed to call our house once or twice. I was allowed to eavesdrop as plans were finalized. It was evident that Cindy was excited to be able attend the play and her enthusiasm was contagious. Having decided to accept Amanda's invitation, she had warmed to my sister, and my sister toward her. The reserved tone they had both first displayed toward each other was gradually replaced by an easier, less guarded one as the big evening finally came around. Still, I don't think I've ever seen my sister more nervous than she was when that evening finally did arrive. By this time everyone in the family was aware that Amanda would be going out with a new friend. The whole thing was amazing to me. My sister and I had managed to hide from our parents the fact that we had been fucking each other's brains out for almost a year, but let Amanda try to go out with a new girlfriend - a person she wasn't certain about - and my parents had almost immediately picked up on the fact that something different was going on. Amanda had willingly succumbed to my mother's third-degree when it arrived. I think she wanted more encouragement than just what I could provide. Thus, both my parents knew who she would be going out with, and how much she desired a successful outcome for this evening. Of course, they didn't know how deeply rooted her fears and hopes were (and my little part in this escapade had judiciously not been mentioned). Still, a solid front of family support was on display. My mother offered her maternal encouragement as Amanda was leaving, giving her a series of matronly banalities as my sister waited to exit from the house. I wonder if most parents realize how trite the advice they give their kids sounds; the only saving grace was my mothers' obvious sincerity as she gave it. My father (never a man of many words) grunted his encouragement, and then it was my turn. I wished my sister well and sent her out to face the great unknown, hoping that the whole thing would work out. **************************************************************** And a good time was had by all. The evening could only be considered to be an unqualified success. Cindy had enjoyed the restaurant and the two girls had managed to split a bottle of wine, getting loose before they ever reached the theatre. Once there, both Cindy and Amanda had loved the play - the acting had been excellent and of course the material couldn't be faulted. From what my sister later told me, they both gushed about the performance all the way back home. Cindy called the next day to thank Amanda for inviting her and they ended up talking to each other for almost an hour. I wasn't allowed to eavesdrop on this communication, but as it took place with Amanda on the phone sitting across the living room from me, I could listen with detached amusement to my sister's end of the conversation. A lot of it centered around the play - about what they had seen, what they had thought, what they had felt - but a lot of it was just girl talk. It seemed that Cindy and Amanda had managed to hit it off. Confirmation of this occurred over the rest of the summer vacation. Cindy invited Amanda to join her and her friends for a series of French films at the local Arts cinema. Amanda had been a bit hesitant about meeting Cindy's friends but finally agreed after a great deal of encouragement from Mom, Dad, me, and finally (and most importantly) Cindy herself. She found she was fine once Cindy's friends got a chance to know her and discover that while she might be a blonde, she was hardly a dumb one. She was soon accepted by Cindy's group - treated as an equal and able to hold her own in conversation with any one of them. Nor was the relationship one-sided. Amanda had already started sorting through the group she had once hung with, keeping her relationships with the girls she decided had some substance, and avoiding those who were too petty or self-centered. It was interesting watching the process - in some cases it was even a revelation. Several girls that I would never have considered to be very well endowed in the character department turned out to be really nice people when they were allowed to be themselves without all the games. I guess you can never really know from appearances. My sister introduced Cindy to several of her friends who she thought might appreciate her despite her nerdish reputation. They soon took the less-experienced girl under their wings, giving her pointers on make-up, hairstyles, fashion and life in general. A change gradually took place in her under the tutelage of my sister and her companions. Cindy had always been something of a "plain Jane", hardly even wearing lipstick, her mousy brown hair in a simple ponytail. Although she was reasonably attractive, she had also been a late bloomer and was hardly someone you would think of as turning heads. That wasn't true any longer. The change in her appearance was subtle but dramatic. Suddenly, with Amanda and her friends working to bring out the best in Cindy, a person could look at her and see how pretty she really was, catching more than a hint of the classy good looks she was growing into. The end result of all this cross-pollination was the partial joining of Cindy's and Amanda's former groups. It certainly wasn't complete or totally without friction, but it was successful to a surprising degree. Without the high school caste system hanging over them imposing its rigid social strictures, both groups were surprised to discover the others weren't quite the oddities they had once thought them to be. Some of them ever started to like and/or even date each other. By the time the fall semester of college started up Cindy and Amanda were well on the way to becoming what they would eventually become - best friends. And all because of a little push on my part. **************************************************************** End of Chapter 4 of "Amanda, My Sibling" bernard_sagon@hotmail.com Additional Bernard Sagon stories can be found at storiesonline.net or the alt.sex.stories text repository at http://www.asstr-mirror.org/ -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ------ send stories to: <ckought69@hotmail.com>| | FAQ: <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/faq.html> Moderators: <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |ASSM Archive at <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org> Hosted by <http://www.asstr-mirror.org> | |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d; look for subject {ASSD}| +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+