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Subject: {ASSM} RP: Picking Berries in the Rain 0/4 (MF cons, M solo, MF oral rom)  {Jeff Zephyr}
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Date: Sat, 24 Jul 2004 04:10:04 -0400
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Picking Berries in the Rain (MF cons, M solo, MF oral rom) 
by Jeff Zephyr (four parts, plus this bit of background)



This story was inspired by "Summer Fun Ideas," a post on {assd} by
Baird Allen in Summer 2000.  It had other inspirations, including
another story about a different situation involving a girl walking in
the rain on a country road I read in a magazine (don't remember more
about that), and another experience involving picking berries.

But that part is already in the story.  The sexy story I read about
walking in the rain led just to flaming hot sex, not really a romance.
But the scene of the girl on the porch, soaked, seemed worth
repeating.

I lived on a farm for some time when I was younger, and the freedom to
explore the surroundings without a lot of interference was great.
Still, though we had a berry patch, and other things in our garden, we
never got around to picking them naked.  Barefoot, but Mom wasn't open
to us kids taking off more.  As I relate elsewhere (see my website,
chapters JZL_09, JZL10_01 cover this period) I did have fun getting
naked outside, in the rain and otherwise, while living on the farm. It
is an experience that I recommend highly, if you can find a suitable
location.

Aaron isn't a copy of anyone in particular.  Not me, for sure.  But
I've known friends who faced bad divorces, and I've seen some let
romance die, for a while, rather than risk a new love after a very bad
breakup.  Aaron's bad divorce was seriously bad, but I've known people
who faced things as bad, and worse.  I think that sometimes, being
alone is a better, more romantic thing to do than to be with others
simply to try to fit in.  

Culturally, what is he?  People used to the somewhat cosmopolitan city
lifestyles might be surprised (or not) to discover how the country
folk in our USA live.  It isn't all hayseed hicks and twangy accents.
My neighbor Debbie had an ancestral Norwegian accent despite several
generations departed from that nation.  He is an American, but not a
generic one.  He drinks tea -- which Americans do indeed do -- and has
some other bits of surviving English culture, including a deep-rooted
faith which doesn't need much explaining.  Not for his family, at
least; they just try to live well and treat each others nicely.  He
was lucky enough to find a place where he could live the way he
wanted, and not be compelled by friends and neighbors to conform.


Sulie -- that is an unusual name, and several people have told me so.
But I honestly did know a girl named Ursula, and that is what she
called herself.  Other than her name and some physical attributes (not
all), the girl in the story isn't her.  I did have a girlfriend whose
boyfriend went away to school, and the promise of faithfulness didn't
survive their separation.  His promise first; I was just friends with
the girl up to the point that he broke up with her.

One of the attributes is one which I do have strong feelings about.
I've known several women who felt unsatisfied with the size of their
breasts.  There are (in the USA at least) frequent advertisements for
products to increase breast size.  All of which play on the idea that
the natural size is somehow imperfect, not good enough.  I let Aaron
express my ideas about that situation.

As for the rest, I think that settling down to a nice romantic life in
the country would be (or is?) a lot of fun.

--

You can find more of my stories and other things at my website:

http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/jeffzephyr/www/

or via FTP:

http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/jeffzephyr/

-- 
Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights
reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated.
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