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Subject: {ASSM} BSFSF]  St: A View to the Future -- 2
Date: Sat, 13 Dec 2003 04:10:19 -0500
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BSFSF]  St: A View to the Future -- 2

The following story is fiction.  It contain a scene sexual talk.  If such a
subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please
leave now.

This story is a post-festival story to the First Annual Bradley Stoke Flash
Stroke Festival (BSFSF-2003) which requires a story not to exceed 18 lines of
70 characters including the title and blank lines.  

This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without
permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including
the copyright notice.

The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including
constructive criticism, and suggestions.  E-mail: YLeeCoyote@mail.com

Mat presented a challenge to write a BSFSF story matching the given outline.
This is the second one based on the (compressed) outline: The narrator,
narrator's older brother and older brother's girlfriend are on a family
picnic. The narrator is caring for a toddler on the grass, and the others
chatting at the table. The girlfriend is wearing a short skirt which the
narrator learn is most revelling.


A View for the Future -- 2       By Y. Lee Coyote
   Two year old Ted had just plopped down allowing me to look at my
big bro, chatting with his girlfriend at the picnic table.  Really
close now they were staring at each other's mooneyes.  Her short skirt
was pushed up and I could see her engorged beaver between her wide-
spread legs as she had 'forgotten' her panties!  His cock was hard and
actually poking out of his shorts; most understandable for his hand
was sliding up her soft thigh.  I was riveted by this action.  His
fingers danced through her curly hairs working their way to her love
button.  He reached it; she twitched at his touch.  Her hand slipped
under the table.  Damn it!  She going to stop him.  She found his hard
shaft; even slipping her hand inside his shorts.  A drop of pre-cum
glistened on the tip of his shaft.  She was rapidly stroking him as he
caressed her.  They were kissing; French for sure.  He even had a
finger up her pussy.  They played with each other until they both
came; her pussy pulsing and his cock blasting directly at me.
   I put the camcorder down; this video is going to cost him!  Or
should I use it for his birthday present?  He'll appreciate that.

The End

(C) Copyright A.I.L.  December 12, 2003

Questions: What gender did you assign to the narrator?  Why?  Suppose it was
the other gender -- does the impact of the story change?  How?


Y.

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