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Subject: {ASSM} [BSFSF]  St: A View to the Future
Date: Tue,  9 Dec 2003 22:10:02 -0500
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[BSFSF]  St: A View to the Future

The following story is fiction.  It contain a scene sexual talk.  If such a
subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please
leave now.

This story is a post-festival story to the First Annual Bradley Stoke Flash
Stroke Festival (BSFSF-2003) which requires a story not to exceed 18 lines of
70 characters including the title and blank lines.  

This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without
permission.  Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including
the copyright notice.

The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including
constructive criticism, and suggestions.  E-mail: YLeeCoyote@mail.com

Mat presented a challenge to write a BSFSF story matching the given outline.



A View to the Future          By Y. Lee Coyote
   Two year old Ted had just plopped down allowing me to look at my
mooneyed big bro, chatting with his girlfriend at the picnic table.
What the hell did he see in her?  She was a slut wearing just a skimpy
tube top and short skirt and way too much face paint.  Yuck!  She even
was sitting with her legs spread wide; hussy-like as granny would say.
That I realized that things were even worse for she was not wearing
panties; not even a thong.  Her slit was bare for one and all to gawk
at.  And I do mean bare for it did not have any hair at all and it
should have with those 36D boobs drooping all over.  Her floppy lips
were bright red; her love button erect -- ready to be pushed.
   I shifted my gaze to my brother.  His muscle shirt accented his well
developed form -- the envy of everyone.  It was the body that I loved
and knew so well.  His snug shorts held his package in a tight curve
keeping his privates private.  If he had been hard it would have been
most obvious.  I was happy that he was not aroused for it meant that I
had satisfied him well this morning.  But why was he wasting time with
that ho?  He had me, who loved him now and forever, to fuck always.

The End

(C) Copyright A.I.L.  December 9, 2003

So that you may judge compliance here is the outline as given:

Working Title:  A View to the Future

Characters: Narrator, narrator's older brother, older brother's girlfriend.

Scene: Family picnic.

Situation:  The narrator is amusing someone's toddler on the grass, and the
girlfriend is sitting at the picnic table chatting with her boyfriend. The
girlfriend is wearing a short skirt. 

Hook: The narrator discovers that vision straight to the girl's crotch is
unimpeded.

Conclusion: !


Y.

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