Message-ID: <45776asstr$1071025802@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: <See.signature.line@mail.com> From: "Y. Lee Coyote" <See.signature.line@mail.com> Reply-To: YLeeCoyote@mail.com X-Original-Message-ID: <q7qctvgu32vjbosl21gih3cvmomhr85cgb@4ax.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-MIME-Autoconverted: from quoted-printable to 8bit by sara.asstr-mirror.org id hBA0VbsF031244 X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Tue, 09 Dec 2003 19:31:37 -0500 Subject: {ASSM} [BSFSF] St: A View to the Future Date: Tue, 9 Dec 2003 22:10:02 -0500 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2003/45776> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: hoisingr, hecate [BSFSF] St: A View to the Future The following story is fiction. It contain a scene sexual talk. If such a subject is offensive, uninteresting or if you are a minor (i.e., child) please leave now. This story is a post-festival story to the First Annual Bradley Stoke Flash Stroke Festival (BSFSF-2003) which requires a story not to exceed 18 lines of 70 characters including the title and blank lines. This work is copyright by the author and commercial use is prohibited without permission. Personal/private copies are permitted only if complete including the copyright notice. The author would appreciate your comments -- pro and con, including constructive criticism, and suggestions. E-mail: YLeeCoyote@mail.com Mat presented a challenge to write a BSFSF story matching the given outline. A View to the Future By Y. Lee Coyote Two year old Ted had just plopped down allowing me to look at my mooneyed big bro, chatting with his girlfriend at the picnic table. What the hell did he see in her? She was a slut wearing just a skimpy tube top and short skirt and way too much face paint. Yuck! She even was sitting with her legs spread wide; hussy-like as granny would say. That I realized that things were even worse for she was not wearing panties; not even a thong. Her slit was bare for one and all to gawk at. And I do mean bare for it did not have any hair at all and it should have with those 36D boobs drooping all over. Her floppy lips were bright red; her love button erect -- ready to be pushed. I shifted my gaze to my brother. His muscle shirt accented his well developed form -- the envy of everyone. It was the body that I loved and knew so well. His snug shorts held his package in a tight curve keeping his privates private. If he had been hard it would have been most obvious. I was happy that he was not aroused for it meant that I had satisfied him well this morning. But why was he wasting time with that ho? He had me, who loved him now and forever, to fuck always. The End (C) Copyright A.I.L. December 9, 2003 So that you may judge compliance here is the outline as given: Working Title: A View to the Future Characters: Narrator, narrator's older brother, older brother's girlfriend. Scene: Family picnic. Situation: The narrator is amusing someone's toddler on the grass, and the girlfriend is sitting at the picnic table chatting with her boyfriend. The girlfriend is wearing a short skirt. Hook: The narrator discovers that vision straight to the girl's crotch is unimpeded. Conclusion: ! Y. Valid return address is <YLeeCoyote@mail.com> (Posting address is for the spammers) See my stories at http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/YLeeCoyote/www/ See Goldilocks stories at http://www.geocities.com/goldilocks1938/ -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ------ send stories to: <ckought69@hotmail.com>| | FAQ: <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/faq.html> Moderators: <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |ASSM Archive at <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org> Hosted by <http://www.asstr-mirror.org> | |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d; look for subject {ASSD}| +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+