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Crazy Old Coot
By Mark Reed

The door to the cabin creaked open slightly before the
chilly northeastern wind nearly blew it off its
hinges. Jack felt the cold air whip around his legs
and quickly move up to blow the long beard which hung
from his face. The fire on the hearth next to him
flickered at the sudden change of atmosphere in the
small room. Two figures scurried through the door,
almost running from the dark of night and falling snow
outside. Jack pushed his feet gently into the floor
and his chair leaned back, starting the rocking
motions which soothed him. One of the figures turned
and pushed the door closed  before stomping on the
ground to get the snow off. The other figure, slightly
smaller, did the same after giving a nervous look
Jack's way. The taller one, Jack's nephew Ned, took
his companion's hand in his and led her closer to the
fire where they could warm themselves. As they
approached the fire Jack got a better look at the two.
He quickly placed the second figure as Ned's latest
little conquest. What was her name, Maria? No, Susan
or Lisa or something like that. 'It's hard to keep up
with the names these days,' Jack mused in his own
mind. 

"We'll be safe here until the snow stops falling,
sweets," Ned said. He spoke, as he always did, with
the unshakable confidence of youth. Jack's eyes closed
and he set his chair to rock just a bit faster. Ned
would learn, someday, not to assume nearly as much as
he did. Those lessons would come with time and pain,
as they always did. Jack tried to keep his mind from
wandering back to the places where he had learned such
lessons. 

The girl took her coat off and sat down, all the time
watching Jack closely. She could hardly take her eyes
off his face. Finally she shook her head a little, as
if coming out of a daze, and spoke in a shy voice.
"Hi, I'm Launa." 

"Oh, don't bother trying to talk to Old Uncle Jack,"
Ned cut in. "He doesn't hear you. He doesn't hear
anything. He just sits there all day in his rocking
chair, rocking away and staring at the wall. That's
why I said we wouldn't be disturbed. He probably
doesn't even know we're here." Jack's face didn't even
twitch in response, but his eyes danced with
merriment. 'If you only knew,' Jack thought. 

"That's so sad," the girl said softly. What was her
name? Luna. No, Launa. "Is he comatose or something?"

"Aw, Old Uncle Jack hasn't had a right mind in years.
You used to be able to talk to him for at least a few
minutes before he'd stop talking and stare off again,
but now he just does it all the time. He still takes
care of himself and everything, but he won't talk to
nobody. He's a crazy old coot. Aren't ya Uncle Jack?"
Ned laughed. In his mind, Jack laughed right along
with him. 

The two settled down to talk about their own lives.
Not of shoes and ships and sealing wax, or of cabbages
and kings, but of the small miniscule events which are
thought so important in a teenage life. Jack let his
mind drift back to his own musings and filtered out
the conversation around him. He remembered a day which
seemed not so long ago when he had possessed such self
assured confidence. He had possessed a woman, too, or
at least thought he possessed her. His rocking
increased as the night which surrounded the cabin
slowly turned to day.

----

The daylight streamed down to shine upon her golden
hair, only highlighting the beauty which was before
him. Sparkling blue eyes, soft milky white skin, a
slight grin which hinted at untold pleasures to come;
she had it all and she knew it. The way those eyes
peered into his own, he knew that she'd never have a
problem with being stuck up, because all she wanted
was him.  "I love you," she said softly.

"I love you," Jack replied. He took a step back and
knelt down on a knee, all the time gazing in to those
lovely two eyes. "Always," he said softly. He reached
a hand down to his pocket and began reciting the poem
he had been working on just for this moment. 

"You are mine, and I am yours. 
Our souls entwine, forevermore. 
'Till death do us part, my love I take thee. 
I give you my heart, knelt on one knee. 
Can dreams come true? It just might be. 
Becky O'Toole, will you marry me?" 

The look on her face as he opened the box and showed
her the ring was worth all the effort. She looked from
his face to the gift in his hands, and back to his
face. She blushed furiously and her eyes began to tear
up.

"Yes," she whispered softly. "Always."   

----

Movement drew his attention back to the present. The
pair on the couch in front of him were kissing. Their
mouths were open to each other, their tongues dancing.
The girl moaned and let her body melt a bit more into
Ned's. His hands crept up in response and eagerly
cupped her breasts. She moaned a bit more before her
body went rigid and she broke their kiss, glancing
worriedly at Jack. "We can't," she said. "Not with him
watching."

"He doesn't see us," Ned said in what was obviously
meant to be a soothing tone. "He's not actually there.
His body is but his mind has been gone for a long time
now. Just relax and go with it. You and I are the only
people who will remember this. Trust me." 

----

"Trust me," Jack said softly. He held her head so her
eyes were looking into his until she gave a slight
nod. He leaned in and kissed her gently on the cheek.
First on the right, then on the left, and finally his
lips slowly caressed hers. His touch was gentle,
adoring, attentive. He focused all his attention to
making love to her lips. Slowly he pressed further
into them to give more contact. His own lips parted
and hers opened slightly in response. He nibbled on
her lower lip and held her in his arms. His tongue
came out a little and he trailed the tip gently along
the length of her upper lip. Her mouth opened wider
and he pressed his lips to hers once more while he
sent his tongue into her mouth to explore. Her tongue
stirred in response to his gentle questing. Their
desire grew as his tongue caressed hers and she sent
hers forward to feel his. Time seemed to slow or stop
altogether. Minutes flashed by as the two explored
each others mouths. Their world expanded once more as
Jack sent his hands from Becky's head down to her
back, and slowly around to her chest. At the slightest
touch of his hands on her breasts, her chest moved
forward and ground the two soft globes into his palms.


----

Ned quickly unbuttoned her blouse as they kissed. He
was hurried now, anxious to get the show on the road.
He finished with the last button and pulled the shirt
off her shoulders until it hung off her arms. He
pinched her nipples through her white cotton bra,
causing her to open her eyes widely and squeak,
breaking their kiss. He grinned mischievously before
pressing his mouth to hers again and sending his hands
around to undo her bra. He seemed to be quite
practiced, because he quickly tossed it behind him. It
landed next to Jack's rocking chair, but Ned wasn't
paying attention to anything but the two newly
revealed breasts. 'Rather large,' Jack thought to
himself. 'Then again, Ned has always been attracted to
the big busted ones.'

----

She was panting by the time Jack had kissed his way
down to her left breast. She lay on the bed naked,
still trying to recover from the orgasm his hand had
just given her. Her eyes were closed, her face was
flushed, and his tongue was just beginning to circle
her nipple. He saw the little nub of flesh and nerve
endings stiffen in anticipation, but his tongue never
touched it. He trailed his licks and kisses around her
breast, and again licked a circle around the areole.
Just when he seemed about to touch it, his mouth moved
to the other breast. Becky let out a small whine of
disappointment. 

Jack trailed kisses around her right breast and the
already erect nipple which topped it, but went slower
this time. He licked gently at all the skin he could
reach, but refused to touch the bundle of nerves at
the center of the fleshy mound. He licked a third
trail around her nipple and finally took it into his
mouth. He sucked on it gently and let his tongue flick
against the tip, making Becky gasp and squirm. His
sucking became harder and rhythmic until Becky's
squirming caused him to lose the nipple. Jack watched
her face while she settled down. Her head rose up
slightly and her eyes met his. Jack could see the lust
in them just as plainly as if it had been written on
her forehead. He smiled at her lovingly and bent back
down to take her nipple into his mouth. Her hands
grabbed his head and she growled. "I want you. Now,
honey."

Jack gently bit the nipple he was working on until she
groaned and her hands loosened enough for him to lift
his head. "Trust me," he repeated. Her eyes gazed back
into his own and once again she gave a slight nod. Her
head fell back to the bed and she closed her eyes to
enjoy the ride. 

----

The girl's pants were tossed back to join the bra
laying next to the rocking chair. 'What's her name
again? Julia? No, that was two girls ago. Laura? Ah,
cripe. It's too hard to keep track anymore.' Jack
watched Ned's hands eagerly move down the sides of the
feminine form. His hands finally settled down as they
squeezed the soft cheeks of her ass. Ned's tongue
nearly drilled into her mouth, pressing her head
against the couch. His fingers hooked her panty line
and quickly removed her last obstacle of clothing. His
hands returned to her chest to squeeze the soft flesh
there. The room was filled with the sound of heavy
breathing. The girl's hands moved from Ned's back to
grab his shirt and pull it off him. Their kiss broke
and Ned stood to quickly drop his pants.

----

Jack couldn't believe how good her sex smelled. He
inhaled deeply and felt himself become slightly dizzy.
It was musky and heavy, but the smell sent tingles
down his spine. If there was ever any proof needed
that she wanted him, this was it. His tongue moved out
almost automatically and lapped at her swollen lips.
It was a taste unlike anything he had ever experienced
before, but he was sure he would quickly grow to love
it. His tongue probed deeper and he began to explore
her folds with it. She wiggled in response to the
stimulation, and her scent grew stronger. He found the
nub he had rubbed his fingers against earlier to such
great effect, and quickly flicked it with his tongue.
Becky gasped and moaned. He flicked it again and she
gasped again. Jack grinned slightly to himself. Cause,
and effect. Flick, and gasp.

Her hips began thrusting towards him slightly and he
decided to move on. His tongue moved lower and probed
deeper into her until he found his way inside her. The
taste of her juices was especially strong here, nearly
overwhelming. He darted his tongue to the side until
he felt small bumps or lines on her skin. He rubbed
against them as hard as he could and got a moan and
hip thrust for his efforts. He probed deeper into her,
trying to lap the juices which were intoxicating him
so. Becky began thrusting her hips against his tongue
regularly and he quickly pulled it out before she
could work herself up anymore. He swallowed the juices
he had obtained and smiled at her. He could read the
frustration on her face and took pity. His tongue was
getting a little sore from being used so much, so he
penetrated her with a finger and took her throbbing
clit into his mouth. He ran his fingertip against the
nerves in her canal and began sucking rhythmically on
her clit. One large moan followed another, and the
third became a scream as her body tensed up and the
pleasure exploded from her center.

----

Ned's hands moved to her hips as he entered her for
the first time. She moaned in delight at the feeling
of having someone inside her and looked up to his
face. His eyelids were closed, though, as he
concentrated on the pleasure. His hips began slowly
moving in and out and his hands traveled up to squeeze
her breasts. She tossed her head back and closed her
eyes, concentrating on the feelings as he was. Ned
began working up to a faster rate and reaching deeper
into her. Jack watched the girl's mouth open slightly
as she followed the movements of the organ inside her.
In, out, in, out, in, out. Her face began to flush and
Ned's hips began moving even faster. In, out, in, out,
in... The girl's eyes opened in sudden surprise as Ned
ground himself deeper into her while he came. She
moaned in frustration, her need evident. She waited
until Ned's breathing slowed and his eyes opened
before she asked plaintively "what about me?"

"Don't worry, babe," he said confidently. "It'll only
take me a few minutes to recover. We're not done yet.
You could help, though. Ever given head before?"

Jack had to fight to keep his face motionless as he
almost snorted. 'Same line with every one of them,' he
thought to himself. 'The amazing thing is that it
works!'

----

With as many times as Becky had come that night,
sliding into her wasn't much of a problem. Jack went
slow anyway, until he met the obstruction he knew
would be there. Her eyes were already lost in his own,
so he just smiled and said "I love you. Always." 

She smiled back and a look of lust and determination
swept over her face. "I love you," she repeated.
"Always. Do it." Jack nodded and pushed with
increasing pressure until he felt the tear. She winced
a little but it was quickly removed as he slid the
rest of the way in. Her eyes closed for a second
before they opened again to give him a look of wonder.
They shared the look as Jack began to slide back out
and in again. The feeling of her around him was
incredible. It was like a warm, velvety glove, and
every other bad cliche he could think of. He had to
concentrate on making movements to minimize his own
pleasure while trying to heighten hers. Jack had
certainly waited long enough for this night, and he
wasn't going to let it end quite so soon.

He moved his hands to her chest and began to gently
roll her nipples between his thumbs and forefingers.
She moaned softly and her head hit the bed again as
she enjoyed the feeling. Her hips began to complete
his motions with rocking of their own. Jack could feel
the warmth from their joining filling him, filling
her, moving throughout their bodies to send sparkles
of pleasure along their nerves. Every time he felt
himself get close he would thrust into her and stop,
and she would wiggle her hips to stimulate her clit
against his skin. It wasn't too long before she was
panting heavily under him and squirming again. Her hip
movements had become a little out of synch and more
desperate. Jack took that as a good sign and began
allowing himself to feel the incredible sensations
that were running through his member and up into his
stomach. The warmth began to spread until his entire
body felt like one set of muscles, all working
together and all receiving the same pleasure. His
breath became labored and he couldn't have stopped
himself at this point if he had wanted to. All Jack
felt was the building sense of pleasure. Every nerve
from his fingertips to his toes were tingling in
anticipation, and the energy seemed to be moving from
everywhere in his body to his cock. The pleasure began
to build so much that it became almost unbearable, and
then he exploded. He felt Becky's muscles contract and
spasm around him as she screamed. He grunted and felt
his whole body pulse in blinding pleasure.

Pulse. Pulse. Pulse, pulse, pulse. Then the world went
black.

----

Ned was hard again and groaning in delight. The girl
hadn't done this before but he had quickly taught her
how. She didn't seem to like it much, but Ned sure
did. He let her run her tongue across the head of his
dick one more time before he told her he was ready to
go again. She eagerly moved back onto the couch,
getting on her hands and knees. "Do me from behind,
baby," she said huskily. Jack saw the wide grin on
Ned's face as he moved behind her to position himself.
Part A screwed into slot B just as it was supposed to.
Ned reached around to cup her hanging breasts in his
hands and squeezed. The girl moaned and rocked her
hips. Some of her hair hung down from her face to
block Jack's view, and she tossed her head so she
could watch him. 'She seems to be more relaxed with
the idea of being watched,' Jack thought in amusement.
The smile didn't reach his face, but he was grinning
inside. The memory of him and Becky in the mall after
hours popped up, but Jack pushed it aside to pay
attention to the present.

Ned was groaning quite nicely as he slid steadily into
and out of her. She was moaning in response, tossing
her head from side to side with her eyes closed. The
breathing in the room became louder and heavier. Ned
picked up the pace again and was rewarded with another
feminine moan. The girl's breasts jiggled deliciously
as her body pounded back into Ned's. His hands were on
her hips again to help steady them as they worked into
faster and faster rhythms. Soon their rhythm became
disjointed in the clear signal of approaching orgasm.
This time the girl went first, pounding her butt back
into Ned's center and wiggling madly while giving a
long and lovely moan. Ned's groan quickly followed,
his back and hips spasming to fill her with his seed.
The pair collapsed onto the couch until they could
recover.

Jack let his mind wander again. Images from days long
past flashed through his mind and became his temporary
reality. He and Becky at the alter, swearing their
vows to love one another, always. The night he
proposed, their first night together sexually, when he
had worked her up slowly so she wouldn't feel it as
much when he took her virginity. Waking up later that
same night, realizing he had blacked out from the
experience. Their honeymoon. That horrible morning
seven years later when the police had arrived at his
door with news he could already feel in every fiber of
his being. The funeral. His brother helping him build
his quiet cabin up in the mountains where he could
live in solitude. The family choosing that spot to
build a few more houses into a sort of mini resort 10
years later. Everything flashed by so quickly, but it
was all real. It was all there. Slowly his world
changed again, to the dark cabin and his rocking
chair. The fire by his side and the two lovers
stirring before him. Ned, still on top of the girl,
slowly looked at his watch, and only then moved to
quickly get off her. "We got to go, babe," he said
anxiously. "It's 10:45." 

That woke her up. Her eyes flew open almost as fast as
the "Oh shit!" from her mouth. The two quickly
scrambled to get dressed again and moved to the door
of the cabin. Ned opened the door, allowed his date to
scramble out into the snow, and closed it firmly
behind him without ever saying a word to Jack. He had
stopped bothering to say anything to the old man after
using his cabin for his first few conquests. By now,
ignoring him was habit. 

If Ned hadn't been in quite such a hurry, he might
have heard the slow, mocking applause coming from the
old man in the rocking chair as the pair scrambled out
to get the girl home. For the first time that night,
Jack spoke. "I hope he brings that one back. Laura?
No, Launa. Yes, that's the one. Reminds me of Becky..."

~fin~




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