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Subject: {ASSM} A Life of Its Own  (MF)
Date: Tue, 24 Jun 2003 01:10:03 -0400
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A Life of Its Own  (MF)

[** A writer's conversation with his characters.]



Well, if I'm going to write a story for ASSM, I need a girl.

GIRL:  "Hello."

Let's see.  I'll make her a farm girl.  Something about farm girls
that is, oh so, appealing.  So hair in pig tails, a pink and white
blouse, and decent tits that displays a tempting cleavage.  She's
got to have long, slender legs.  The type of legs that wrap around
you as you fuck her silly.  She will wear short-short cut-off jeans
containing a cute firm ass.

GIRL:  "So I look pretty?"

She's the type of girl that the instant most any man sees her, he 
gets a instant hard erection.

GIRL:  "Is that good?"

And of course I need a guy.

GUY:  "Hello."  He then looks at the girl and says "Helloooooo."

The guy is physically fit and attractive.  So now I have to have a
reason that they have sex.

GUY:  "Do we actually need a reason?"  He eyes the girl.

I'm writing a story.  I want a reason for the sex and not just to 
throw you two into immediate sex.

GUY:  "Just to let you know, I don't have a problem starting the
story with my dick in her pussy."

I want more to my story than just sex.

GUY:  "In your life, would you prefer just sex or do you want some
long build up to it."

Sex, of course, but that's not how it happens in real life.  

GUY:  "I thought this was a story.  Go straight to the sex."

Look, I'm going to do it my way.

GUY:  "Hmppph."

Hmmm, it might be fun for them to have sex in the barn laying on the
hay.

GUY:  "A barn?"

GIRL:  "Do I have a horse?"

You can have a horse.

GIRL: "Yippee!"

But it's not part of the story.

GIRL: "That's okay.  I just always wanted a horse."

I have an idea, now.  The guy is named Tim.  He is from the city
and sells tractors to farmers.   The girl's father....she needs
a name...?....?....Tonya?...yeah, Tonya sounds like a good name to
me.

GUY:  "Heeeellooooo Tonnnnnyaaaa!"

GIRL:  "Why does he keep talking that way?"

So Tonya's father can't make the payments.  Tim sees Tonya out feeding
the chickens.  Tim gives the father the option of either repossessing
the tractor which means unavoidable bankruptcy or letting Tim have sex
with Tonya.  Of course, Tonya's mother died sixteen years ago and she
is an only child.  Tonya is a naive 18-year old virgin.

GUY:  "Whoa!" he said  in reaction to Tonya's change in appearance.
"Please tell me I'm naked right now."

No.  You are wearing a business suit.  You are a sales professional.

GIRL:  "Hi,"  noticing the change in Tim and acting kind of shy.

So, Tonya walks into the barn.

GIRL:  "I'm already in the barn."

Yes, but she's not there at first.  Her dad has to tell her to go to
the barn.

GIRL:  "Since, I'm already here, can't I just start here."

Alright!  Tonya is in the barn.  Tim is sitting on a bale of hay.

GUY:  Goes and sits on a bale of hay.

So, Tim says to Tonya, "You need to do what I say or your Daddy will
lose his tractor and the farm.  You don't want to do that to your
Daddy do you?"

GUY:  "Can't I just say, "Ride my dick all night long."

No!  So Tonya says "What do you want me to do?"  and Tim says "Take
off your clothes".  No, wait!

GUY:  "What!  What do you mean 'wait'?"

GIRL: "What?"  What do you mean take off my clothes?"

First off, Tonya is naive and she is willing to do whatever it takes
to save her Daddy's farm.  Secondly, before Tonya came in the barn,
Tim was already naked.

GUY:  "Now your talking!  Now that's real writing!"

And he's under a horse blanket.

GUY:  "A horse blanket?"

You don't want to scare Tonya off by appearing nude the first time she
sees you.

GUY:  "Okay.  I can buy that.  Can I ask you a question?"

Sure.

GUY:  "Why wasn't her Daddy banging such a nice piece of ass?   Not
that I want that.  I'm excited to be the one to get her virgin pussy,
it's just that if you have a hot girl like her around the house
wouldn't you want to do her every night?"

It's not that type of story.

GUY:  "Okay.   Like I said, I'm not complaining."

So Tim tells Tonya to come over to him and that he is going to
undress her.

GUY:  "Come on over by me."

GIRL:  Walks over.

GUY:  "I'm going to take your clothes off."  He reaches for the
buttons of her blouse.

I think I want different tits on her.

GIRL:  "Hey!  Where did my tits go?"

I want real big tits on her.

GUY:  "I'd rather have a proportioned woman if you don't mind.
It looks more natural."

It's my story.  So I say that Tim likes big breasts, so he likes
Tonya's big tits.

GUY:  "Nice rack!"

GIRL:  "Why, thank you!"

Now where was I?

GUY:  "I'm undressing Tonya."

Oh, yes.  So Tim undoes Tonya's blouse.  He slips it off her
shoulders.   She does not have a bra on.  He pulls her closer and 
sucks on her tits.

GUY:  "Mmmph, mmmphh, mmmph."

Tim buries his face in Tonya's cleavage.  He knows that if he 
suffocated within her tits, he would die a happy man.  After a wonderful
ten minutes, enjoying Tonya's tits (hmmm..."Enjoying Tonya's Tits"...a
future story title?), Tim wants to take her shorts off.

GUY:  "Let's take your shorts off now."

Tonya needs to help slide her shorts down and then Tim slides her
panties down following her shorts.

GIRL:  "Do we have any heat in here?  I am getting cold."

It's a barn.

GUY:  "I'll give you some heat in a few minutes."

GIRL: "Couldn't you have gotten me a guy who knew how to speak normal
English?"

Tim takes the horse blanket off of him.

GUY: "Oh, yes!" he said excitedly.  He pulls it off and shows that he
is naked also.  He has a erect dick.

So Tim tells Tonya to kneel before him.

GIRL:  Gets down on knees before Tim.

Wait until Tim tells you to kneel

GIRL:  "I have to do it anyway, don't I?  Why can't I just do it now?"

Fine, fine.  I don't feel like arguing with you this moment.  I'll
add Tim's line later on the revision.

GIRL:  "Revision?  You mean I might have to do whatever we are about
to do more than once?"

GUY:  "Yes!"

So Tonya begins to give Tim a blowjob.

GIRL:  "This is so not right.  This is so messed up."  She lowers her
mouth to his dick.

GUY:  "Hey!  What gives?  Why is she just blowing on my dick?"

GIRL:  "He said I was a 'naive' farm girl."

GUY:  "Uh...hello?  Can't you make her a little more experienced than
this.  Wait, I have a better idea.  Make her so she's a natural 
cocksucker.  The very first time she gives head, she naturally knows 
just what to do and gives a super blowjob."

GIRL:  "Now wait just a minute!"  She stood up.  "Now you're *both*
trying to control my life."

GUY:  "I just want to make it the best for both of us, okay?"

GIRL:  "Hey, you!  Author!"

What?

GIRL:  "What about what I want?  My desires?  My dreams?  My goals?
Maybe I want to be a nun?  Maybe I want to go to college?  Maybe I
*do* want to have sex with my Daddy?"

I created you.  You do what I say.

GIRL:  "And I have no say on anything?"

Sometimes as a character progresses and develops, the character can
drive to a certain obvious thing it should do.  It depends, however.

GIRL:  "I want a diary and a pen."

Right now?

GIRL:  "Yes."

What would you do with it?  I want you to have sex with Tim.

GUY:  "Sex!  What a great idea!"  He was annoyed at the delay.

GIRL:  "I jsut decided that I am a girl that likes to journal about
my life.  The new things in life.  The new sensations.

GUY:  "Sex."

GIRL:  "Sure.  Sex.  I am the type of girl who would want to journal
about what giving her first blowjob was like."

GUY:  "You could put some cum on the page."  He tried to be helpful.

Okay, you can have it for now, but I think it will slow the story
down, so I might take it away later.

GIRL:  "Thank you."  She now held a diary book with a pink cover in
her hand.  She opened it and took out the pen.

You can write later.  You need to give Tim a blowjob, now.

GUY:  Sits a little more erect.  His dick stands a little more erect.

GIRL:  "Just a minute.  I need to write something first."

Now, Tonya.  You're first entry can be about the sensation of Tim's
hard dick in your mouth and later Tim shoots his cum in your mouth
and you taste it as you swallow it down.  The little bit of cum on
the page is a nice touch.

GUY:  "Thank you."

GIRL:  "Let me write this first.  Hold your horses.  Get it?  Horses
and we're in a barn."

Yes, I get it.  What are you writing?

GUY:  "You don't know what she is writing?"

Sometimes a character does something and I need to fill in details
later.

GIRL:  "How do you spell 'bondage'?

B-O-N-D-A-G-E.  It's not that type of story.  Tim isn't going to
tie you up.

GIRL:  "Oh, nevermind.  I'll just use 'tied'.  There."  She closed
her diary.  "We can continue now."

Good.  Now get back on your knees and suck Tim's dick.

What?  I looked at my hand and then myself.  I was getting blurry.
Something was happening to me.  I was dissolving!

GIRL:  "Hello," she said looking at my face.

GUY:  "Who's he?"

GIRL:  "The author."

GUY:  "The author?"

I was tied securely to a chair in the barn.  In the barn!  I was in 
my story.

GIRL:  She had her diary open and read, "Tonya is a virgin but she 
only pretends to be naive.  She hoped that her boyfriend, the author,
would finally want to have sex with her, but he never asks.  The 
tractor salesman is her opportunity to fulfill her lustful loins.
Her boyfriend, the author, tries to rescue Tonya from the salesman,
but Tonya doesn't want rescuing.  Together they tie the author up to
a chair and make him watch them have sex."  

GIRL:  "And don't tell me you're not a voyeur!  You were about to 
watch *us* have sex.   And by the way, shouldn't you have put a 
'reluctant  code' on the subject line of this story.  I was about to 
do something I did not want to do.  Of course, you don't need it, now
that I am sexually willing."  She lays back on the hay.  "Come on over
here, Tim."

GUY:  "Oh, yeah, baby."  He kneels between her legs.  "Can you make
my dick even bigger?"  He hands her the diary.

GIRL:  She recites as she writes.  "Tonya has firm, good sized 38D
tits."  Her tits shrank to that size.

GUY:  "Good choice.  How about ten inches for me?"

GIRL:  "Tim has a ten inch long dick."

GUY:  "Oh, yeahhhh!"  He admires his organ.

This can't be!  I made you!  I created you.  You are a part of *my*
mind.  I am in control.  Tim poises over Tonya ready to enter her.
I would have a clear view of his cock pistoning in her pussy.

GIRL:  "There's one more thing that I wrote in my diary.  My boyfriend,
the author, loves me so much that it devastates him to watch her freely
give herself to the salesman."

GUY:  "Now?"

GIRL:  Nods.

I saw Tim push his long, hard dick into Tonya's virginal pussy and
my life was gone.

GIRL:  "Oh, that feels good.  Fuck me hard."

"Noooooooooo!  Please, Tonya," I sob.  "I love you so much.  Don't
do this to me.  Please don't do this."  Tears stream down my face.  
How could Tonya, my girlfriend, do this to me.  See was acting like a
wanton hussy and making me watch her.  "Please, Tonya.  I can't stand
to see you like this.  I love you!"  My heart aches so awfully.  Tim's
dick and Tonya's pussy move in perfect unison.   To see my Tonya like 
this hurt so bad.  It felt as if it was killing me.

THE END.

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