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Date: Tue, 22 Apr 2003 02:10:03 -0400
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The Annex Reviews, 4/20/03
by Lady Cyrrh (ladycyrrh@aol.com)
Website: http://members.aol.com/ladycyrrh 



The Stories:

Creampied and Broken (Creampie Eater): M/F, BDSM, shave, 
    pierce, oral

A Drop of Inque (Hungry Guy): F/M femdom, ws, oral, 
    anal, too, comic

Doppleganger XI (Geek Writer): M/F, cons, transform

Slave Raiders, Parts 1 - 8 (David): M/F, BDSM, slave, 
    fantasy

The Saga of Cammi Longclit, Chapter Two: Rebbat-stub 
    (Shadowloup): M/F, F/F, anal, oral, historical, magic



Creampied and Broken [A] 
Where found: Creampie Eater
URL: http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/creampie/wwweater
Author: Creampie Eater
Author address: CreampieEater@excite.com
Type: M/F, BDSM, shave, pierce, oral 

Creampie is a writer whose stories span many genres, but 
have one subject in common: the ingestion of the yummy 
delights found between a fully aroused woman's legs. 
This story was a BDSM one, and the author had this to 
say of it: "Be aware that this story is NOT my normal 
style.  OK, it is my style but a very different topic." 
That's as may be, but it sure was a sweet read.

As the narrator tells it, he is having problems in his 
main D/s relationship in that his submissive partner, 
being independent in real life, prefers to be a "bottom 
that tops" within the relationship. Her limits are 
tested when the narrator, as her dom, requests that she 
chop off her long, flowing locks and donate them to 
charity. She balks at this, but later they reach a 
typical D/s agreement: she will be pierced, then 
whipped, then shaved clean as a whistle all over 
including a full-body waxing, the whole to be videotaped 
for posterity. Being a sub these days sure is a tough 
job, ain't it?

This could have been just another story where a dom puts 
an uppity sub in her place, but it was surprisingly well 
written, dwelling on the trust issues involved and the 
personalities of the couple, as well as being very hot. 
Recommended, as is a visit to the author's website.




A Drop of Inque [B+] 
Where posted: ASSM 
When posted: 3/18/03 
Author: Hungry Guy
Author address: hungryguy@literotica.org
Type: F/M femdom, ws, oral, anal, too, comic

The cartoon Batman on the WB was clearly the inspiration 
for this story. I don't usually review toonfic, but 
since I do watch Batman occasionally, and had in fact 
seen the same episode the author has -- and pondered the 
same sexual possibilities -- I thought I'd read it and 
see what the author did with it.

The setting is presented as the near future and the tone 
matter of fact ("New York is also the home for all sorts 
of crazies.  They range from self-appointed mercenary 
groups to would-be superheroes.  A day doesn't go by 
that the news doesn't report the daring deeds of the 
Guardian Angels, Hells Angels, Superman, Spiderman, 
Batman, Dare Devil, Wonder Woman, Captain America, the 
Flash, the Green Hornet, the Green Lantern, the 
Incredible Hulk, the Six Million Dollar Man, the X-men, 
The Tomorrow People, the Mighty Morphin' Power Rangers, 
the Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles, and way too many 
others to mention.") The hero of the story has missed 
reading the day's headlines however, and is unaware that 
the exhausted woman in a black vinyl catsuit he aids is 
really the supervillainess Inque, a pliable being able 
to morph herself into liquid form. He nurses her back to 
health, and she "rewards" him by flowing around his body 
like a second skin. For the rest of the story she keeps 
him trapped inside her as she makes tracks for 
Anchorage, a superhero-less city where she can expect to 
find refuge. When he balks, she stimulates him sexually 
from the her interior to keep him enthralled.

The story was a good evocation of what it would feel 
like for a man to be trapped inside a villainous, 
animated catsuit. There were touches of humor in places, 
like the protagonist somehow never having the guts to 
escape from the predicament she periodically puts him 
in: leaving him naked in a lady's room stall as she 
commits her crimes. As an adventure story, though, it 
didn't quite come together. Interesting, though.




Doppleganger XI [A-] 
Where posted: ASSM 
When posted: 3/18/03 
Author: Geek Writer 
Author address: geek_writer@yahoo.com 
Type: M/F, cons, transform

This story was part of a longer series about the 
Doppelganger, a being with a supernatural power to 
change sex and form as well as control the minds (and 
libidos) of others. It's the type of theme common in 
some forms of mind control fiction: I call it Total 
Power, because the protagonist can, literally, do, fuck, 
or be anyone; the fun for the reader comes from what 
they choose to do with their abilities and the 
havoc/happiness they create.

The protagonist of this story, once a human man, takes on 
female form in this story to test her (its?) attractiveness 
in a bar setting, because "There was something in me now that 
made me want to help people realize things about themselves.  
I was a bit self-centered before, but now that my experiences 
had expanded my thoughts, I found my morals had changed as 
well." She then seduces a nondescript fellow for the hell of 
it and gives him the most extreme night of sex in his life, 
complete with magic words ("Nice big fat juicy cock, Mmmm, I 
like em big.  Come for me baby so I can get you hard again.  
I want you to last a long time in my ass. Fuck me in my tight 
asshole with this huge pole...")

Like the preceding story, this one was pretty interesting, 
but short on the adventure, and the sex, for all its dirty 
talk, perfunctory. I'd think a doppelganger could be a little 
more creative with verbal teasing. The plot didn't let loose 
quite as outrageously as I thought it would, either, 
certainly not in the nutty way that "A Drop of Inque" did. 
Still, I enjoyed the read, and would read others in the 
series as well.




Slave Raiders, Parts 1 - 8 [A-/B+] 
Where posted: ASSM 
When posted: 3/17/03, 3/18/03 
Author: David 
Posted by: Lisa
Author address: davidslisa1@yahoo.com 
Type: M/F, BDSM, slave, fantasy

I've written elsewhere in these postings about the 
barbaric, BDSM-oriented world of Gor, a creation of 
science fiction author John Norman. Though written in 
the 1960s, the series of slave girl and he-man novels 
are still popular, and apparently back in print, online 
at least. They've also inspired private fantasy 
playgrounds for D/s players in real life, as I suspect 
the "David" and "Lisa" (the writer of this series, and 
its poster) are.

Here they've been transposed to "Dalvid" a seasoned 
slave-raider, and "Li'sar" the sprightly nymph he 
captures. The raiding party is from the land of Valua 
where females are enslaved and whipped as a matter of 
course: 

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
Valuan males punish females that they like far more 
vigorously than those they don't. As the saying goes, 
"unloved slaves are punished often, but well-loved 
slaves are punished even more." 
 
Li'sar was made to kneel across the block. "And I 
thought he might have liked me!" she thought to herself, 
as she braced for the very first lash. 
 
Durip whipped her hard. She couldn't recall ever having 
felt such great pain. She struggled to stay on the 
block, but she had told herself already that she didn't 
want the additional punishment she had seen Adele 
receive. 
 
Dalvid smiled down at her, as each lash was 
administered. How lucious her bottom was; how nice to 
see it punished! He loved having her in such a servile 
position before him. 
 
She somehow endured all twelve, though she was in agony 
by the end. She danced around in pain, clutching her 
bottom, crying, begging. After giving her time to 
recover, he ordered her to be put with the others.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

(The author later tells us, "Valuans deal (what they 
feel is) honorably with slaves, always assuring that 
they are well-fed, sheltered, and not overworked, nor 
punished anywhere other than on the posterior - Valuans 
believing that female posteriors have extra fat on them 
especially for that purpose. (Some Valuans even believe 
that the females who require punishment the most are 
endowed with the chubbiest posteriors).")

Unfortunately the scenario ends when the local militia 
comes chasing after the raiders demanding their 
womenfolk back; but Dalvid, having become infatuated 
with Li'sar (and she with him) carries her off, only to 
lose her to bandits, who fob her off to another group of 
slave raiders making for the cit, where she is to be 
sold. Dalvid, meanwhile, rushes about frantically trying 
to recover her. 

The story was a nicely done one in the Gor-esque vein, 
with a sweetly romantic tone in the two main characters' 
relationship. It was perhaps a bit boringly written, and 
tamer than the usual fare (the slave girls have their 
bottoms whipped, not asses or buttocks) but I did get 
involved enough to keep reading each additional chapter, 
and felt pleasantly entertained by it.




The Saga of Cammi Longclit, Chapter Two: Rebbat-stub [A+] 
Where posted: ASSM 
When posted: 3/16/03 
Author: Shadowloup 
Author address: shadowloup@aol.comAntispam 
Type: M/F, F/F, anal, oral, historical, magic

Here's another barbarian story, this one set in an 
aproximation of Bronze Age England. It's second in a 
series of others, but stood very well on its own.

Cammi Longclit is a sexually charged, none-too-bright 
female warrior with the oversized organ of her name; 
Jestina is a priestess and her companion in adventure. 
The two set off to rid a village beset by The Beast, a 
shadow creature which has been buggering every available 
arsehole in the area and causing much distress. The tone 
is parodic but not nasty as the two decide what to do 
about it, eventually settling on a course of action:

>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
"We shall make Cammi half-shadow herself so she will be able 
to battle the beast," she said.

So as the late afternoon dwindled, and after partaking of 
several hares roasted over a fire, Jestina and Cammi and a 
soldier made their way to Kilcunny's hut.  There Cammi's body 
was painted and anointed with oils and herbs.  Her left tit 
was painted blue, her right red.  Her face was also decorated 
in swirls. Jestina then  painted eyes on Cammi's rump cheeks 
and titties so the beast would not be certain which way the 
warrioress faced.

"I will grease up your sphincter so if you are taken unawares 
you will not be overly discomforted," Jestina said.

"That sounds like fun," Cammi replied.
>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

The Beast is eventually brought low, in an abrupt and frankly 
squicky way that seems out of character with the first part. 
Still, I thought the story was a funny spoof of those old 
English tales, the kind that are inextricably entwined with 
certain places: the village of Sugnillinuc, indeed.

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