Message-ID: <37809asstr$1029013804@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: <nntp-bounce@supernews.net> X-Original-Path: news.supernews.com!not-for-mail From: Peaches and Cream <peachescreamreviews@yahoo.com> X-Original-Message-ID: <jhjalusq90em8h63rbteec05e5ji6631aa@4ax.com> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit X-ASSTR-Original-Date: Sat, 10 Aug 2002 13:47:03 -0400 Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} Peaches and Cream # 10 Date: Sat, 10 Aug 2002 17:10:04 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail X-Is-Review: yes Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories,alt.sex.stories.d Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/37809> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: gill-bates, kelly Hi! We're Peaches & Cream. We're just two ordinary Joes who like reading and romance. Recently, there was a Summer Solstice Romance Festival on ASSM, and it caught our attention. We started discussing the stories and our reviews were born. Our format is simple: one of us starts the review, the other chimes in, and then the starter finishes it off. Because this is all about romance, we'll be scoring with 0-5 kisses. We'll be posting a review a day until we finish the stories that were submitted, beginning with the Flash stories. There is a website devoted to the festival where you can find all the stories we will review. http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/Rui_Favorites/www/RomFest Peaches & Cream Reviews # 10 A wise woman never yields by appointment. It should always be an unforeseen happiness. --Stendhal (1783-1842), French author. *** Summer Storm by Mat Twassel http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/36991 *** Peaches: A husband and wife find something to do during a blackout. A special candle, a useless flashlight and romance. Maybe I'm an old softie for romance between married couples, but I like this. The storm, the rain, the lack of lights don't take over the story. They're only props that give a great flavor to the scene. My only complaint would be the two passages so close together both using, "soon." >Jo-Jo stood patiently. Soon the buttons were undone. >"I'm curious how you'll manage the sleeves >with me holding the candle." >Ignoring the sleeves, Joe worked on the shorts, the >panties. Soon Jo-Jo stood naked--just her unbuttoned >blouse. I give it 4.5 kisses *** Cream: I like the way this sudden storm turns this middle-aged married couple into kids again, bringing some fresh spark into their lives. Okay, not quite kids, but the role reversal is kind of fun. These people in their passion are efficient and playful, caring and lucky. I'll go along with 4.5 kisses. *** Peaches: I remember nearly being caught by my parents when I was a teen, and my guess is many parents find themselves in that role reversal. They aren't always told later so wonderfully as this story has been told, though. What a shame. (Parents write your stories, we want to hear them, especially if they're romantic.) *** Peaches: 4.5 kisses Cream: 4.5 kisses -- Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated. +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ | alt.sex.stories.moderated ----- send stories to: <ckought69@hotmail.com> | | FAQ: <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/faq.html> Moderator: <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+ |Discuss this story and others in alt.sex.stories.d, look for subject {ASSD}| |Archive at <http://assm.asstr-mirror.org> Hosted by <http://www.asstr-mirror.org> | +---------------------------------------------------------------------------+