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Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} Tainted Lime Reviews #41
Date: Wed, 15 May 2002 17:10:05 -0400
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Tainted Lime Reviews Issue #41
May 15, 2002


Reviews are archived at http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/TaintedLime/www/.

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Stories reviewed in this issue:

Running in the Rain, by Dancing Sprite (* * *)
Like What You See?, by Leithyl (* *)
Pine Trees, by Dryad (* * *)
Our New Neighbors, by Biff Jones (* * *)
The Elevatrix, by QSliver (* * *)


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{ASSM} Running in the Rain (MMF, cons)
By Dancing Sprite <dancing.sprite@gmx.net>
http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/36454

Denise is out for a run when the clouds suddenly open up,
drenching her with cold rain. Fortunately she happens to be
jogging past a barn, and she ducks inside to wait out the storm.

She quickly strips out of her wet things and wraps herself in a
convenient blanket. In no time at all, she is thinking about sex,
and her fingers wiggle their way to the place where fingers are
wont to wiggle. Just as she reaches the key moment, three male
joggers show up at the barn door. Denise is good at taking
advantage of lucky situations, and the men are soon experiencing
the best jog they've ever had.

Technically, there are only a few stupid spelling mistakes, which
makes this story better than most stroke stories you see in ASSM.
But it is still a typical ridiculous stroke story plot, and the
characterizations are almost non-existent. If you're reading just
for the sex, this isn't a bad story to delve into. If you want
more than sex, you probably want to find something else.


Rating: * * *

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{ASSM} {ASS} Like What You See? {Leithyl} (F-solo /voy/ F-solo)
By Leithyl <wildflowers@cis.net>
http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/36455

A woman gets a phone call. "Have you ever masturbated in front of
your lover before?" she hears. She hasn't but that doesn't mean
she never will!

This story does not use traditional paragraphs. In some sense,
it's arranged like a long poem, but for me, it didn't read like a
poem. The formatting is simply used as a way to break up normal
prose sentences. The odd formatting became more distracting as I
read along.

The story also uses one of those annoying second person `you'
characters. Sometimes second person stories work when you can
read it as a love letter, but this story doesn't work as a love
letter, either.

On the positive side, the thrill of performing for a lover comes
across nicely, and it is a very sexy situation being described.
But with the other flaws, it's hard to give this story a strong
recommendation.


Rating: * *

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{ASSM} "Pine Trees" by Dryad (MF,oral, cheat)
By Dryad <gbbjg@yahoo.com>
http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/36460

A woman needs to have a few pine trees in her yard taken out, and
she has a crew of four men come in to do the work. The foreman,
Mike, catches her attention, and when the other men quit for
lunch, she asks Mike to take her up in the cherry picker.

When they get up high enough, we discover that her husband
doesn't like her blowjobs all that much, and damn it, she misses
giving them. The foreman, fortunately, is a lot more appreciative
than her husband!

The plot and characters are not too substantial, but this is
still a cute little story, and the cherry picker is a nice twist
on the usual sex story fare. It's a nice little diversion, sexy
in its way.


Rating: * * *

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{ASSM} Story: Our New Neighbors (fict, MFMF, DP, creampie, Kelly)
By Biff Jones <shapeshifter37@hotmail.com>
http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/36479

The nice young couple who just moved in next door quickly become
friends with Kelly and the narrator, and the four of them are
soon spending a lot of time together. When the new neighbors
finally get the hot tub up and running, they make plans for a
little party.

They polish off four bottles of wine, and Kelly and Jen start
acting frisky. They model the new bikinis they bought together,
pass out new Speedos for the boys, and dip into the hot tub.

It doesn't take long before they are talking about sex, talking
about fantasies, and making dares. With four bottles of wine in
them, you can bet there aren't many inhibitions holding them
back.

This is a very good stroke story. Like most stroke stories, the
plot and characters are shallow, and I learned more than I cared
to learn about the women's bra sizes. But the sex is hot and
vividly told, and I liked the way the excitement builds as the
story moves along.


Rating: * * *

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{ASSM} The Elevatrix (MF, cons, voy)
By QSliver <qsliver68@hotmail.com>
http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2002/36483

You'd be amazed at the things they can do with computers these
days. Even the elevators have been programmed to maximize their
efficiency and, with the aid of state-of-the-art flat panel
displays, provide the elevator's occupants with trip status and
appropriate advertisements.

But maybe some of these elevators are getting a little bit too
smart for their own good. Two strangers, Tracy and Justin, are
speeding their way to work when the elevator suddenly screeches
to a halt between floors. The helpful elevator automatically
calls the maintenance department and helps the stranded couple
notify their appointments. With forty-five minutes to wait, Tracy
and Justin begin to get to know one another. And with appropriate
music playing in the background, they get to know each other very
well indeed!

This is a cute story. I think I would have liked it even more if
it had been a little bit longer, as it rushes too much in a
couple places. But it's still a very clever idea.


Rating: * * *

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