Message-ID: <33146asstr$1004335803@assm.asstr-mirror.org> Return-Path: <bob.staines@lineone.net> From: "Bob Staines" <bob.staines@lineone.net> X-Original-Message-ID: <LKEOIIAFKFGOGICCJAOAEEHDCAAA.bob.staines@lineone.net> MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-Priority: 3 (Normal) X-MSMail-Priority: Normal Importance: Normal X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V5.50.4133.2400 X-ASSTR-Arrival-Date: Sun, 28 Oct 2001 22:44:00 -0000 Subject: {ASSM} {The Paganist} New Story: Diary of a day (embarrass, light MC) Date: Mon, 29 Oct 2001 01:10:03 -0500 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2001/33146> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: hecate, gill-bates {The Paganist} Diary of a day (embarrass, light MC) This story is fiction. Agatha Christie didn't commit a chain of grisly murders and I don't do these things. If you can't tell the difference between fantasy and the real world then you shouldn't read this. If you aren't old enough, bold enough or strong enough to be in this group, then DON'T READ THIS! Go away. Visit another group. Leave us alone. If you do read this and find yourself getting uncomfortable, that's your problem. I would appreciate any feedback on this story, even flaming (at least you've taken the trouble to download the story and read it). The Paganist (thepaganist@hotmail.com) **************** * Authors Note * **************** This is the first bit of writing I've ever attempted and I would be grateful for any feedback - even flaming because it means that at least you've taken the trouble to look at it. This was originally a chapter in a story, I'm writing. After a lot of alteration I decided to scratch it because it interrupted the flow of the story. However I noticed that this bit was really a short story in its own right. The main story is set one year after this day. I hope that you enjoy it as much as I enjoyed writing it (especially the rest of the story). Diary of a Day By The Paganist Mike's Version (Age 18, a virgin, lives on his own in the sticks) Something strange happened yesterday. I know it was IMPORTANT, but I don't know WHAT it was, that was important about it. Soon after breakfast my neighbour Susie came in for coffee. She said the girls had been playing up because they were bored and had nothing to do. About this time the girls came in and I offered to take them to the beach. A funny look flitted across Susie's face. I think she thought I was some sort of pervert trying to take her girls to the beach so that I could feel them up while pretending to dry them or something. I'm not sure what hurt most - the thought that she would suspect me of that or the thought that I knew I would enjoy doing it - Elaine's getting to be a very pretty girl even if she is only eleven. Luckily before she could go ballistic I amended the suggestion to "why don't we all go to the beach." She suddenly said "good idea. I'll fix a picnic." I saw Elaine was looking at me strangely - she'd been doing that a lot lately - but this was different somehow. Every time I looked at her she turned bright red and looked as if she was going to cry. All the time at the beach she kept it up. She seemed really unhappy but every time I tried to help it only seemed to make things worse. I gave up trying. Girls definitely aren't my strong point. Later we all went shopping (I think Susie was trying to cheer Elaine up). After a while they followed a man carrying a tiny girl (about four I think). They went into a gift shop and spent ages looking at something then the man told the little girl she could only have one (toy ring I think) they paid and they walked out. I went to leave when I noticed that the others were huddled together. Susie was saying something about fingering. Collette kept saying "BUT HOW." Elaine kept looking at me nervously when I realised that they were discussing GIRL THINGS (I thought they covered that in sex ed. classes these days). I tried not to get aroused but the thought of Elaine doing that, or even Collette, really turned me on. I tried to hide the bulge in my shorts but in those places the things are hanging up. Great if you're trying to hide your face but no good for my problem. To make it worse Elaine had noticed and was staring straight at it. She went beetroot red - I think I must have scarred her stiff. I hope SHE doesn't think I'm a pervert too. After that we all went home. Even Collette seemed to be wary of me now so when we went in I gave her a little hug to reassure her. Elaine went bright red again. I think she thought I was feeling Collette up. I hope I don't have any more days like that. Elaine's Version (Age eleven) Yesterday was the worst day of my life. Mum had her 'sight' working. She caught me 'mooning' over uncle Mike again. She said we needed a proper girl talk, which was the last thing I needed. What she said about me in the toilet this morning... I thought I would die of shame. I tried to get out of it but she just said "FIVE MINUTES - BE THERE." There's no arguing with that voice. When I got downstairs She was there at the table with Collette. The idea of talking about THAT with HER there made my skin crawl. I knew it would be all over the school. Everybody would know even uncle Mike. I was going to run out of the room but mum just said, "SIT" pointing to the other chair. After a bit Col' said something about mooning and I knew she'd ALREADY told her. I tried to get out of it but eventually she just said "I'LL TEACH YOU AN IMPORTANT LESSON" She told us she was going to see uncle Mike. Then she turned to me and said "I WANT YOU BOTH OVER THERE IN TEN MINUTES - CLEAN YOURSELF UP AND SMILE." She wouldn't go until I'd agreed (agreements are sacred with mum). So eventually I nodded. SHE WAS GOING TO TELL UNCLE MIKE! I couldn't believe that she would do that. While I was getting cleaned up I remembered the money in my purse upstairs and started to think about running away but I knew that with her 'sight' she'd just bring me back. I felt so embarrassed, that I even thought of suicide but I knew she wouldn't even let me do that. When I got over there I knew she'd told him. He looked straight at my Chest and said "I'd like to take THEM to the beach." He's never said anything nasty to me before. Then he kept looking at me. He must've thought I was dirt. He took us all to the beach but he kept looking at me and gloating over what she'd told him. We went shopping and mum was talking to 'her little favourite' she said it was important but how could I concentrate with HIM there. After a while I looked at where his shorts were bulging y'know his 'thing' and he caught me staring at it. He must've thought I'm some sort of pervert. When we got home he gave Collette a big hug and completely ignored me. We got indoors and mum said "I HOPE YOU LEARNED THAT LESSON" and sent us both to bed. I've never known mum like that before. In bed Collette kept talking to me. The last person I wanted to talk to was HER. I tried to get her off my back by asking what her and mum were talking about in the shop but she just said some silly stuff about magic rings, fingers and breathing and stuff. Then just as if there's nothing wrong she tried to get me to waggle my ears. She's so insensitive at times. Then just to rub it in she stated telling me what she'd like to do with uncle Mike. Yes MY uncle Mike! I just kept returning it with one better each time. Eventually she fell asleep thank God! I Hope I NEVER have another day like that as long as I live. I suppose Tomorrow I'll have to get mum to explain what all that stuff in the shop was about I know she'll hit the roof again Collette's Version (Age nine) Mum let us in on the 'plan' yesterday and wow it was out of this world. I'd've thought 'laine would've been OVER THE MOON about it but when I asked her she just snapped at me. She was REAL grouchy. First mum said she had to teach us an important lesson. She made uncle Mike take us to the beach and we had a nice picnic. 'laine was still strange though. She kept sulking off and crying. She was like it all day. I don't know why. She wouldn't tell me. Anyway mum took us to look round the shops and told us to watch a big man and a little girl (I think it was her father). They went into a shop where they sold all kinds of glittery things and the girl wanted to buy a ring. She looked at a lot of them and, after a long time picked out two rings one was for her toe and one was for her finger. She kept looking at them for about ten minutes. Her dad said she could only have one because that's all the money she had. After a bit she picked out the ring for her finger and her dad paid for it and they left. I told mum I didn't see what she meant. Lots of people buy a ring. She said keep watching, so I did. After a bit the man came in again and bought the ring for her toe. I thought I understood so I said to mum "so she got both rings." Mum just smiled and said "keep watching." A minute or two later the man came back again and bought another ring the same as the last. I was confused! Mum explained. If the little girl had picked the toe ring that's all she'd have got because that's all the money she had. But by picking the finger ring she made her father buy the other two because she's got two feet but only one ring finger. I asked "how she MADE him do it?" and she said she just did it. I said "but how?" She said "how do you breathe?" I said " I just do and mum said "exactly if you concentrate you can do it. The more you do it the better you get. It's practice." I was a bit puzzled and she laughed and said "It's like when you waggle your ears." Then I understood. When I asked if I could do it to anyone she said no - it only works on men and only on the ones that are close to you - like dads and uncles and boyfriends. I 'made' uncle Mike give me a hug (he hasn't done that for ages) and it worked! When we got home mum said she hoped we'd learned the lesson and it was time for bed. In our room I tried to get 'laine to tell me what was wrong but she wouldn't. After a bit she started testing me on the lesson but I must have got things wrong somewhere because she said I was silly. She can be a bit grouchy at sometimes. I tried to cheer her up by telling her what I'd like to do to uncle Mike. This was her favourite game (mine too). She joined in after a bit but I could tell she wasn't enjoying it. I hope that she's better tomorrow 'cause she can come up with some really GREAT things for the game and that's important now. Susie's Version (age 26) Elaine was in a world of her own yesterday. I don't know what I'm going to do with her. First she was in the bathroom for over half an hour and I had to tell her to get her finger out because she wasn't the only one in the house. She flew past me. Ten minutes later she was mooning over Mike again. I could see that there were some things that she needed to know. When girls grow up without a father they don't get a chance to practice their natural skills and she needed to know about what I had planned. I told her we needed to have a talk but all she wanted to do was moon. I knew that Collette too was going to need this, so I told Elaine it'd take me five minutes and not to forget (Trying to keep Collette in one place longer than that is almost impossible). Needless to say she was late again. I had to start telling Collette what it was all about or she would have been off again. Collette was ecstatic. I knew she would be. They both loved Mike. As soon as she arrived Elaine went into a sulk because we'd started without her. She wouldn't listen to a word I said. She just kept snapping at Collette. I told them to join me over at Mike's place in ten minutes. I hoped that Collette might talk to her and calm her down. At Mikes I got a cup of coffee and the promise of a day out at the beach. I was worrying so much about Elaine that I slipped up and at first he only offered to take the girls. It only took me a second to 'fix' it though (god he's cute). When they arrived Elaine kept losing control of herself (she had it BAD). We went to the beach and I used the chance to show them how to 'bend'. Collette seemed to pick it up straight away but Elaine wasn't even listening. On the way home I saw Collette was using it on Mike. Fast learner that one - I've got no worries about her. We got home late so I sent them up to bed. Later as I passed their bedroom I heard them talking. Well at least they were doing that again. I stopped to listen and was amazed at what I heard. Young Collette's imagination... She's going to kill someone one day... She'll enjoy doing it though. So will he! I was so excited that it reminded me of that day when Mike was 16 - when he tried to proposition me - he was so cute even then- God many's the day I've regretted that. If I had my time again I'd give Elaine a run for her money. Maybe Collette will... Maybe that's what Elaine needs... I just hope I can get her to wake up before it's too late. Pity him if they both try... ************************************************************** *** Copyright (c) 2001 by The Paganist Duplication without *** *** changes or omissions is permitted for personal, *** *** non-profit use. 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