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Subject: {ASSM} Just Like Everybody by Katie McN (FF, Rom, RP)
Date: Wed,  8 Aug 2001 18:10:03 -0400
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Just Like Everybody

By Katie McN <katie@katiemcn.com>

This is a flash and was written as part of a
challenge to see what kind of story someone
could write in 500 words or less. This is
what I came up with.

I'd love to hear what you think about me
story. Why don't you drop me a line at
katiemcn@excite.com ?

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"I won't miss my chance tonight."

I always think that, but I knew I'd fail one
more time.

She was no more than 5' 4" and the girl
couldn't weigh a hundred and ten pounds
soaking wet. Her hair was the color of a
raven in flight and cascaded down her back
like a thick mantle of down from some dark
bird of magic and mystery. Her beautiful
skin cried out to be touched and radiated
with a glow from an inner fire that seemed
to burn just for her.

Her flannel shirt was unbuttoned and knotted
together at the bottom. She wore a tank top
that was so thin it was easy to see she
didn't need a bra to hold up those two
perfectly formed breasts. Two breasts that
sneaked out from under her shirt from time
to time to let the world know sexy didn't
always mean big. Her denims weren't tight,
but they gave me a good idea about the cute
shape of her ass and I could see she had
legs that went on for a long time before
they finally reached the floor.

She wore a smile instead of makeup. And what
a smile. A flash of white teeth and little
dimples that added a tiny bit more to her
already perfect features. Her well formed
nose seemed chiseled out of alabaster
by one of the masters of old. Thick lashes
framed her beautiful brown eyes and a long
slender neck supported her head with a look
of regal majesty.

I moved closer until I could hear her voice.

She laughed when the bartender made some
comment about her drink order. A laugh that
said so much about her and a laugh that said
so much to me. A laugh I wanted to hear
again and again.

She was perfect and she was alone.

What could I say? I didn't want her to think
I was a bore and I knew some trite pickup
line wouldn't work with a woman like her
anyway. I never seem to be able to come up
something interesting to say at times
like this and always end up watching as the
woman of my dreams walks away with someone
else. Once again, I stood by frozen with
fear, unable to say a word. Nothing at all.

"Can I ask you a question?"

She was taking to me. I couldn't believe it,
but somehow I was able to answer her without
sounding like a fool.

"Sure, I'd love to talk with you. My name's
Karen by the way."

"Hi, I'm Marsie. I've seen you here a few
times, but we never had a chance to meet.
I'm kind of shy and can't seem to talk to
people I don't know. I guess you don't have
that problem since you're so hot and all."

"Well, I wouldn't say that exactly, but
since we're talking now, maybe we can make
up for lost time."

The End

Let me know what you think of this very
short story:

Katie@katiemcn.Com

You can find more of my work on my personal
web site:

www.asstr-mirror.org\~Katie_McN\

-- 
Pursuant to the Berne Convention, this work is copyright with all rights
reserved by its author unless explicitly indicated.
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