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Subject: {ASSM} {REVIEW} Nexuswilson 7
Date: Fri,  1 Dec 2000 10:10:05 -0500
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Hi everybody, I'm in Turkey with a fair bit of time on my
hands this month so I've brought out a few longer stories
on disk from the archives.  Here's the reviews.

Fonda and Cat

from:  	John3365A@aol.com (John A) and
	VBwrites@aol.com (Virago Blue)

http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/JohnA/www/

Mistakes - search  for 'thedog', 'an byproduct' and a
few other spelling mistakes.
As the author warns this story takes ages to get going,
but when it does the action is hot and erotic.  This is more
of a novel, but the sex is well worth waiting for.  You
would not guess that this is a collaboration.  There a few
bits where the plot gets a little dodgy, but nothing to
really grate.  On one or two occasions the writers go a bit
overboard explaining the chacters motives.

Overall a great love story and one of the most consistent sets
of marks ever given.

Marks (out of 10)

Reading enjoyment	8
Style			8
Spelling/Grammar	8
Storyline		8
Originality		7
Wood factor		6


The Freshman
	by Ann Douglas
      ann_douglas@hotmail.com
http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/Ann_Douglas/www/

A very nicely written piece, telling of the gradual attraction
and coming together of 2 lovers of different ages.  The
focus of the story is the development and fruition of their
relationship rather than the sex which, although nicely
written, is fairly bland.  How can a woman be a freshman,
especially in a politically correct place like America?

Overall a nice tale where everything goes perfectly for all
Concerned and no-one is hurt.

Marks (out of 10)

Reading enjoyment	6
Style			8
Spelling/Grammar	9
Storyline		7
Originality		6
Wood factor		4


Honeymoon Hiccup (scat, i/r, hum, MFM)

by  fremensmok@aol.com

Tom laughed, feeling no sting at my accusation- should be Clyde!
man's thick, black-   ...cock presumably, word(s) missing.
Several similar examples, suspect some sort of formatting error.
A white couple are taken and dominated by a huge black man and
his unfeasible sexual prowess!  Somehow written so as to make
the whole thing believable.  Very clever how the situation is
developed without Clyde actually forcing them into anything.

Overall a very horny tale of a mans degradation at the hands of
his spouse and a huge black man.

Marks (out of 10)

Reading enjoyment	8
Style			8
Spelling/Grammar	7
Storyline		8
Originality		8
Wood factor		7


Pandora's New Box

a Story by Kellis
sorry but no links included with this story, but should be
traceable.  As I've lost the link mail me if you really
want it and can't find it and I'll send it to you.  Just
this once.

Very little sex content in this one, but it's a
fabulous story.  The whole thing is terribly plausible
somehow and not what you expect after the first few pages.
I thought the woman was about to become a sex slave but
the actual story was so much more immaginitive.  Great
writing as well.
Would you have the nerve to test out the cheese theory?

Overall a fantastic story that just happens to have some
sex in it.

Marks (out of 10)

Reading enjoyment	10
Style			9
Spelling/Grammar	9
Storyline		9
Originality		9
Wood factor		2

Read my own work at
www.pornoz.com/alterotica

review by Mark
aka
nexuswilson@hotmail.com


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