Message-ID: <25856asstr$966471007@assm.asstr-mirror.org> From: maureen_lcn@yahoo.com X-Original-Message-ID: <3.0.6.32.20000816014710.007b5af0@yahoo.com> Mime-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset="iso-8859-1" Content-Transfer-Encoding: 8bit X-MIME-Autoconverted: from quoted-printable to 8bit by sara.asstr-mirror.org id EAA03018 Subject: {ASSM} The Bargain 2/4 {Maureen Lycaon} (MM+/m, nc, violent, caution, humil, anal, oral, magic, goth, slow) Date: Wed, 16 Aug 2000 20:10:07 -0400 Path: assm.asstr-mirror.org!not-for-mail Approved: <assm@asstr-mirror.org> Newsgroups: alt.sex.stories.moderated,alt.sex.stories Followup-To: alt.sex.stories.d X-Archived-At: <URL:http://assm.asstr-mirror.org/Year2000/25856> X-Moderator-Contact: ASSTR ASSM moderation <story-ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Story-Submission: <ckought69@hotmail.com> X-Moderator-ID: english, IceAltar THE BARGAIN @Copyright Maureen Lycaon, August 2000. All rights reserved under the Bourne Convention, but permission granted for this to be distributed on Usenet and archived on the Web, provided that *no* changes are made to it and that *no* money or other consideration is charged for downloading it. WARNINGS: You know the drill -- all rights protected under the Bourne Convention, all resemblance to persons living or dead is solely coincidental and unintentional, nothing here is intended to advocate any of these acts, etc. Another warning before you go diving right in for the naughty bits: This is psychologically a very cruel story, even though the physical brutality described is fairly mild. If you're a survivor of rape, particularly homosexual rape, this might arouse unpleasant feelings or memories, so think twice before you read it. I don't want to upset anyone that way. Really. Also, think twice if you're the type who considers Harry Potter books "Satanic", or if you have an aversion to knives.;-) This story -- it's a story with spooge in it, not a spooge story -- takes quite a while to reach the sex part, so please be patient; the second half *is* mostly spooge. You may also think the human sacrifice scene is gratuitous, but trust me, it *does* belong there. AUTHOR'S BORING NOTES: My thanks once again to Ron, who gave useful critiquing and encouragement, and also to Partran, who gave technical advice on medieval matters. Some of the hints and allusions here may seem mysterious if you haven't read my earlier story about Raven, "The Price". You can find it (along with this story as one whopping big 114K file as well as my other erotic tales) at Maureen Lycaon's Velan Archive of Erotica at: http://velar.ctrl-c.liu.se/vcl/Authors/Maureen/ The Bargain: Part 2 Inwardly, Tirnal sighed in relief as the footsteps dwindled down the hall. The mind-block had remained hidden; Raven had suspected nothing. He would carry his secret to his grave, or whatever passed for one when the minions of the Dark disposed of his corpse. Jahl had lain in her cell for five or six days now, since she had been captured -- she wasn't sure which, because she was becoming uncertain of her count. The shackles and the heavy rune collar around her neck rubbed her raw. A silent guard brought spartan meals of bread and cheese into her cell three times a day. That and the waxing and waning of the light through the barred window were her only measure of time now. The first day, she'd tried calling out, hoping to hear another voice from another cell. But the door beyond the grille muffled her calls, and she heard no answer. Perhaps the rooms from which her voice could be heard were empty. Beginning on the second day, she had heard the sounds of other captives being dragged to their fate: the footsteps of soldiers and prisoners in the corridor outside, the sounds of voices screaming, pleading or weeping as their owners were hauled into the corridor. Once or twice she recognized the voices as those of other students, and their pleas shredded her sanity. Two or three times she had given in to hysteria, screaming, fighting her shackles in panic until her wrists and ankles were bleeding underneath them, kicking the walls and the iron grille as hard as the short length of her leg chain permitted. No one came, even to silence her. When her panic had run its course, she huddled into a ball on her shelf-bed and wept. Occasionally she still tried to calm her mind with the simple exercises Tirnal had taught her, but they never worked for more than a little while. Most of the time she alternately wept or staved off panic by pacing as best she could in her chains. At times, when the terror subsided, she wished deeply, painfully for Tirnal to comfort her, one of the other students to talk to, but she was alone. She wondered if it were possible to die of sheer terror, loneliness and grief, but she doubted it. Her end would probably be less merciful. The idle workings of her mind were her worst enemy, conjuring up a thousand hideous visions of what was to happen to her, and to Tirnal, and to the other students and mages. Like everybody else at the Chantry, she had heard the stories, the accounts of what had been done to the Priests and Mages of the Light in other cities that had fallen to the Dark Legions. They were enough material for the nightmares of countless lifetimes. If she had been left a knife, she would have killed herself. But she had nothing, no weapon at all. Today, panic was beginning to subside into numb lethargy. She guessed from the strength of the sunlight striking the far wall that it was near midday. Once again, footsteps sounded in the corridor -- four soldiers, she guessed, drawing near. Her numbness gave way to fear as the footsteps halted outside the door. What was worse, to face her fate now, or to wait still longer? There was the rattle of a key in the lock, and then the door opened. She looked up, her heart pounding savagely, as a human gaoler entered the room. And then, two huge forms with oddly misshapen faces followed on his heels, stepping into the little room and making it seem still smaller. It took her a moment to realize that their faces weren't deformed after all; they had muzzles like dogs. Not men at all, but orcs. They stared back at her with ugly black eyes, expressionless as snakes, but they said nothing to her. Instead, each orc stepped to one side of the room and assumed the rigid posture of standing guard, a taloned hand closed around its sword, as if rehearsing a well-known routine. Then a tall, lean blond-haired man in black leather armor entered. She realized who he was, who he had to be, from descriptions she'd heard. Dear Bright Gods, why had he come to her? The Dark Warrior studied her in return. His handsome face was as emotionless as stone, his eyes so dark they looked black. "So you're Tirnal's pupil." Her breath caught in her constricted throat, and for a long few moments she thought she would faint. "Well? Are you not?" he asked sharply. Somehow -- she never knew how afterward -- she found her voice. "Yes, I am." It sounded as small as she felt. "What are you to him? In truth?" Those dark, brooding eyes bored into her. She felt like a mouse cornered by a snake, all thought frozen, unable to move. "An -- an apprentice. His fosterling . . ." she stammered. He did not speak another word, but his eyes seemed to darken even more, and they glazed slightly. Then she felt an indescribable sensation. It was not a physical touch, but a heavy, brutal pressure against her self, and then a fierce pain as something immensely, horrifyingly powerful forced its way in, penetrating her very soul, something that felt as dark and horrifying as a demon. Only a few times before in her life had she experienced a magical probe, and those had been gentle, shallow ones, as Tirnal had shown her what one was like. Even without the rune collar around her neck, she would not have known how to defend herself against one. She screamed as her mind was cruelly forced open. She couldn't see, wasn't conscious of the cell around her, had lost all awareness of everything but that intrusion. The pain grew worse as the darkness that had entered her began probing, spreading out, entering every nook and cranny of her soul, invading, searching, scraping her raw as it ransacked her. Surely that darkness was possessing her, blotting her out. It would leave only an empty shell behind, not even her spirit left for the Bright Gods to accept. She wasn't aware she had fallen and curled up whimpering into a ball on the cell floor, a position that offered no defense against the rape of her soul that was taking place. And then the darkness relented, slowly withdrew. She lay there for several long breaths, then slowly opened her eyes, shivering, her throat raw from that scream. She was still alive. Her soul was her own again. She lifted her head slowly, cautiously, terrified the assault would be renewed. The Dark Warrior was looking down at her through the bars like a judge from the Black Realm. He nodded, as if satisfied at something. His face was as impassive as ever. "Very well," he said. "It appears Tirnal told the truth." He turned and walked out, followed by the orcs and the gaoler, leaving her there on the floor to recover. There was a rattle as the door was locked again. It was late -- near midnight. Only a single candle to mark the turnings still burned in Lord Gurnadey's bedchamber, casting thin, wavering light on the tapestries lining the walls. Dominating the great room was its dead lord's bed, a massive, canopied affair with four sturdy oak posts and a dark green silk coverlet that must have cost a fortune in itself. The rest of the furniture consisted of several chairs against the walls, a wooden dresser beside the bed, and the great cedar chest that used to hold much of his funds. The wool rugs and sheepskins covering the wooden floor had a new addition, a small, plain white rug with a single adornment: a black circle. It was the rug Raven normally used for meditation and sorcery, which was how he was using it now. Weariness weighed like lead on his shoulders. Two mind- probes in one day had further drained his magical reserves, and he needed sleep to even begin recovering. Right now, he should be savoring the comfort of that magnificent bed. Instead, he sat cross-legged on the rug, gazing out into the darkness of the room as he considered Tirnal's offer. The wisest course of action, he knew, would have been to slay the girl out of hand -- preferably with his darksword. To take no chances whatsoever. So why did he not do it? *I have never seen one of the Light like him*, he thought, and knew it for a part of the truth. He was forced to admit it now: he was dealing with a man who was his equal. The other part of the truth was the love he'd glimpsed in Tirnal's soul. Raven remembered all too well when he had last felt that emotion, so many years ago. The memory seemed from another life, as if it belonged to someone else. He had never felt it since. Not for a woman, not for another man. He knew now, as he stared into the darkness of the room, that he would never do so again. The place in his soul that might have felt it was only ashes. He closed his eyes, but he did not weep. After a time, he returned his thoughts to Tirnal's offer. *Maybe it really is as it looks,* he told himself. *He had no way to deceive me, after all.* It would be better to consider this again in the morning, after he had slept. Even as he thought this, he knew the unwisdom of the choice he was making, but he knew also that he would not unmake it. Tirnal looked up as the messenger entered, flanked by the gaoler. "A message from Commander Raven," the youth stated, his face expressionless. He walked up to the bars and offered a sealed and rolled-up piece of paper. Tirnal rose and walked over to meet him, chains jangling, and accepted the scroll in one shackled hand. The messenger turned away, and they departed without waiting to see if he opened it. When the door had closed and the footsteps were dwindling down the corridor, he broke the seal, and unrolled and read it. *I accept your bargain. So sworn by the Black River. Be ready tomorrow,* it read, in elegant, flowing script. That was all, except for an ornate "R" sigil underneath. The page quivered; he became aware that his hand was shaking. He carefully lowered it to the wooden shelf, feeling his stomach churning with mingled relief and fear. He closed his eyes and prayed to the Bright Gods for strength, feeling hot tears begin to run down his cheeks. The next morning, a pair of guards brought him a bucket of warm water and other supplies for bathing, and the gaoler unshackled him. Evidently Raven preferred his victims cleaned up before using them. Tirnal forced himself to ignore the guards' stone-faced gaze as he stripped naked and bathed. There was no sense wasting time on being ashamed now. They watched him in silence. When he had dried himself off, one man held his wrists pinioned painfully behind his back while the other removed the bucket. He was not shackled again; the gaoler took the chains with him as they departed, locking the grille and the door behind them, without bothering to see if he dressed. He looked distastefully at his soiled clothes but eventually put them on again. He only picked at the breakfast they brought him a little while later. "It is time, Tirnal." Raven stood in the open doorway of the room. He was once again dressed in his leather armor, wearing his darksword and dagger. His handsome face showed no emotion as he gazed at Tirnal. With him was the gaoler -- and two other men, also in leather armor, though theirs was studded. One of them was a crude-looking, well-muscled man with a shock of red hair, who he recognized from descriptions as Raven's chief cavalry commander, Algarn. The other was a taller one -- almost as tall as Raven, but raw-boned and graceless -- with black hair barely to his shoulders and a nose that appeared to have been broken and reset at least twice; Tirnal guessed he was Zhourn, who commanded a division of foot soldiers. The Archmage rose, his guts knotting, as the gaoler unlocked the grille. He concentrated on controlling himself -- not allowing himself to tremble, keeping his breathing steady -- as they entered his cell. Raven stepped in front of him, looking directly into his eyes as he spoke. "Before we begin, Archmage, let me be clear. If you try to escape, even by suicide, or if you lift a hand against us, I will consider the bargain to be at an end, and your pupil's life is forfeit. If by some chance you *do* escape, she will suffer in your place. Do you understand?" "Yes," Tirnal replied, managing to keep his voice even. "Good." Algarn and Zhourn smirked openly as they eyed him, but Raven's handsome face was still an impassive mask, his dark eyes revealing nothing. Tirnal could not tell if this were giving him pleasure or pain, or neither. "Take off your clothes," the mage-warrior ordered. "You will not need them again in this life, rest assured." Dear Bright Gods, they were going to march him naked through the city streets . . . And there was nothing he could do but endure it. He obeyed, eyes lowered, feeling their gaze on his exposed flesh as he removed his shirt and breeches and dropped his boots on the floor. He ignored the sudden heat he could feel rising in his face. When he had finished, Raven took a step closer to him, looking not at his bare flesh but directly into his eyes. There was the feeling of magic being worked, of pressure on his soul -- not a probe, but some other spell being worked upon him. With the rune collar around his neck, he could do nothing to stop it. Then Raven stepped back. If the spell had cost him any effort, he didn't show it. "Do you know what I have done to you?" "I can guess," he answered. "Some sort of spell to make sure I cannot fight you." Raven nodded, a brief hint of a smile teasing his mouth before fading. "If you try *anything* -- to strike out against me or my companions, seize a weapon, anything at all -- you will experience more pain than you have ever known before in your life. And I will know what you tried to do." He took another step backward, then: "Go ahead, test it, Archmage. Think of harming me." Tirnal realized Raven wouldn't be satisfied until he complied, and so he obeyed. The dagger at the mage- warrior's right hip -- if he could seize that and strike -- There was no time to carry out the thought, even if he had really intended to. Before his arm muscles could contract, the agony struck, starting at his groin but spreading instantly through his entire body, and his soul was similarly wracked by an unbearable feeling he couldn't describe. He wasn't even aware he'd screamed and fallen to his knees until the pain eased and he opened his eyes to see the stone of the floor, feeling the rawness in his throat. Now Raven really did smile. "Good enough. I trust that will discourage any thought of desperate action on your part. Now, get up and put your hands behind your neck. Keep them there until you are told otherwise." Tirnal got to his feet with some difficulty, his body still remembering that horrible pain and not wanting to move. He clasped his hands on the back of his neck, feeling the cold metal of the collar under his fingers. He felt more naked than naked, knowing what was to happen. Every inch of his body that mattered was exposed to their view, and that awareness sent a chill feeling over his skin. He didn't even have the mercy of being chained, of being unable to disobey by trying to cover himself with his hands. He drew a shaky breath. The gaoler appeared embarrassed, averting his gaze from Tirnal's nakedness. The two other men were still smirking, but Raven only eyed him briefly and turned away. "Let us go," he said. Red-haired Algarn walked beside him, while Raven and Zhourn paced behind. They didn't hurry him, but they didn't let him slow down. Algarn's hard hand was on his left arm now and then, guiding him in the way he should go. The little group of soldiers outside snapped to attention as they saw the Dark Warrior and the two commanders emerge. Tirnal saw their curious quick glances at him, and it cut him to the bone, but they were too well-disciplined to waste time staring. While Raven looked on, Zhourn spoke to them. "I require six of you to accompany us to the Lord Commander's quarters." Tirnal permitted himself an inward sigh of relief -- his rape, at least, would not be a public spectacle. His torture and death later would be. The soldiers arranged themselves, four of them behind Raven and Zhourn, two walking ahead, as they stepped out into the street. The sky had turned overcast, but with no promise of rain, and underneath that brooding cloud cover the city of Dorgeyzhim lay silent. The smell of smoke still hung over everything, but he couldn't see where it was coming from. He wondered how widespread the destruction was. No one moved on the streets; the townspeople were all still in hiding. A small mercy for himself, he thought. But he wouldn't turn to look; he kept his head up, his back straight, refusing to show what he felt. The cobblestones were cold and bruising-hard under his bare feet. A cool breeze caressed his skin, raising goosebumps on his arms. *Jahl will escape*, he reminded himself, but he didn't dare dwell on the fact. He wasn't sure what Raven could pick up on. No one spoke to him. Their only sounds were their boots on the cobblestones and the rustle and creak of their leather armor. They passed two more groups of soldiers en route: one small group walking briskly down the street in the opposite direction; the other, a detachment of orcish guards in front of the low, squat brick fa ade of a guild headquarters across the street. Both times, Tirnal braced himself for laughter and catcalls, but the sight of their commander seemed to deter them; they stiffened, saluted Raven and remained silent. Even so, they stared; he could feel their eyes burning into his back and buttocks after he passed. He felt what he knew was ill-founded relief as they approached the stone wall around the fortress-like hold where Lord Gurnadey had lived. Address comments and criticism to: maureen_lcn@yahoo.com . 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