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Copyright (C) 1999, Mkarl. ALL Rights Reserved
This story may not be reproduced in any form for profit or on another website
without the written permission of the author. The author may be contacted by
writing mrdouble@mrdouble.com or mrdouble@ix.netcom.com.
Original posting date:
Monday PM, August 16, 1999
A Resident Author story from MrDouble's archive,
Filename: system.txt
http://www.mrdouble.com
Going Through The System
An "Erotic Crime Story"
mkarl
People say that the justice system victimizes the victims a second time but
wait to you see what happens to my mom.
JUST THE FACTS MAM:
For the purpose of this story, you need to know that my mother was raped. It
occurred in our house when neither my father nor myself were available to
witness her side of the story. The guys beat the fuck out of her and bred her
but in the adversarial system of prosecution and defense, I would love for mom
to relive her humiliation again and again and again.
AT THE ER:
Nurse Hathaway: Excuse me Mrs. K, but these officers need to talk to you for a
minute about your sexual assault.
Detective Russell: Hello there, Leta, is it? The doctors called and said that
we better come down as they suspected that a crime may have been committed
here.
Leta: Where is my husband?
Detective Kirkendall: He is in the field, but we have his employers trying to
get a hold of him. Leta, it is very important that we talk to you. I understand
that this will be very humiliating for you as you were violated, but I just
want you to understand that this was not your fault. Rape is a crime of
violence and both myself and my partner are sure that you did everything
possible to get away.
Leta: OF COURSE I DID, LOOK AT ME. THEY BEAT ME. THOSE FUCKING ANIMALS RAPED
ME.
Detective Russell: Do you know who did this to you Mrs. K?
Leta: No.
Detective Russell: Could you describe who it was. There was more then one
rapist?
Leta: I can't talk about this. I need my husband. Where is Michael? Where is my
son?
Detective Kirkendall: Your son is being looked at by a doctor for counseling,
it must have been very traumatic for him to discover you. It must have been
absolutely humiliating for you to.
Leta: Yes.
Detective Kirkendall: I can sympathize with you as one lady to another Leta,
but we really need a description on the animals that did this to you so we can
take them off the street before they rape again.
Leta: I never deserved this. I am a good person.
Detective Russell: Please Mrs. K, no one here is blaming you but we need to get
out an APB As soon as possible. Could you start by telling us how many raped
you?
Leta: Maybe 5. Or 6. They all looked the same.
Detective Russell: We will need detailed physical descriptions. As much as you
remember. Ages, heights, weights, hair color, skin color, scars, tattoos,
clothing. Anything that might help. Names they may have called each other,
accents.
Leta: THEY WERE ALL NIGGERS. MY HUSBAND IS GOING TO FUCKING KILL ME IF THEY PUT
A BABY IN ME.
Detective Kirkendall: They were all Africain-Americain? Approximately what
ages?
Leta: I can't. I feel so dirty. So violated. [starts crying]
Detective Kirkendall: I know this is hard Leta, but it is important we get the
facts now while they are still fresh in your mind. Approximately what ages were
your rapists?
Leta: They were just boys. They are all from my son's school. I knew three of
them. How could they rape me?
DUM, DU_DUM DUM
THE TWO SNIDE FEMALE DETECTIVES WALKING AWAY TO THE NEXT SCENE:
Russell: They really did a job on her huh? Must have had themselves one hell of
a party. Makes me almost envious since Bobby's gone.
Kirkendall: Yeah, well our snow queen is refusing the morning after pill so I
am not so sure that even she didn't like it a little more then she's letting
on.
Russell: Now Jill. Just cause you have a thing doesn't give you the right to be
assuming she is actually a Nigger-lover. She may have some personal convictions
against abortion. I think we should just be glad that we aren't the ones
married to that slut if she did breed herself a Black bastard.
OUCH. MAYBE NOT REALISTIC, BUT WAIT TILL THE DA PREPARES HER FOR THE TRIAL.
Helen Gamble: If you think that my questions are hard Leta, wait until you are
on the stand. The boys have hired themselves first class representation. You
will be ripped apart by both Johnny Cocheren Jr and Ally McBeal. I don't know
how much Monday Television you watch, but defense lawyers always make us
prosecutors look like idiots unless you are lucky enough to get on Law and
Order, and you weren't so You have to be prepared to be torn apart on that
witness stand. If you can't face my accusations then you will never save an
ounce of dignity in that packed courtroom. Court TV Is beaming everything live
and there is no telling what an idiot like Judge Judy might allow so once
again, ADMIT THAT YOU LIKE IT SLUT.
Leta: I didn't.
Helen Gamble: Are you saying that six young teenage boys with huge cocks raped
you for over six hours and you did not cum even once?
Leta: That is irrelevant.
Helen Gamble: Not to a romantic bitch like Ally McBeal. To her love conquers
all. If they can force you to confess that you came on one of those big cocks,
especially if it coincided with that said Black baby-maker planting your
fertile, unprotected cunt full of potent Nigger seed, then you are going to be
faced with those boys back on the street making good on their alleged threats
to make you a widow. Johnny Cocheran will have a restraining order so fast
against Sipowitz and Sorenson and then there will be no hero's to stop the boys
from capping your old man right in front of you after they force him to watch
round two of your own indoctrination to lifelong slavery.
Leta: I am going to be sick.
Helen Gamble: I am sorry Mrs. K, but that could easily happen. I failed to put
away a nun killer and my best friend got knifed. Although maybe he didn't
actually have anything to do with it. I am really intense now and want to
convict these little Niggers but the truth is that I have not had a conviction
in almost a whole season.
Leta: But they bragged about everything.
Helen Gamble: Boys like to brag, and they will be taunting you in court too. I
tried to offer them a plea bargain to jaywalking when they ran laughing from
your house but they just refused and said they have big plans for you in the
court room. I can only shudder in my own panties and be glad that it will not
be me getting humiliated in this court case.
COMMERCIAL BREAKS:
THEN THE TRIAL AND TRIBULATION OF MY MOM:
Judge Judy: Your witness to cross.
Ally: mmm. Mrs. K, may I call you Leta. Is that your husband Dwayne sitting
their in the front row?
Leta: Yes.
Ally: He seams like a sweet and caring man but just between us girls, how big
is his cock?
Gamble: Objection!
Ally: Goes to witness's state of mind.
Judge Judy: I'll allow it.
Leta: [looking at her son and husband in the front row] I'm sorry Dwayne. 4
inches.
Court Room: [laughter]
Judge Judy: Order in the court.
Ally: 4 tiny inches. 4 tiny white inches. Are you aware Leta, that I have
recently been dating a Black doctor on my show, and on an episode not aired
yet, I had the excellent fortune to find out why we never go back once we've
been Black.
Gamble: Objection. Relevance.
Judge Judy: Sustained.
Ally: Does you wimp, small dicked husband ever make you cum your fucking
eyeballs out Leta?
Gamble: YOUR HONOR!
Judge Judy: I'll allow it. I was getting killed in the rating by Springer but
lets see him top this.
Leta: I plead the fifth.
Johnny Cocheren: I objectify that evasion of the simple principalities of the
honest emancipation and total edification of the white brides inherent needs
for the satisfactions derived wholly and in due part by the proper attentions
that can only be administered by the good loving of brothers such as these fine
examples of African superiority sitting along side my very personage.
Gamble: ???
Judge Judy: ???
Leta: ???
Entire audience of court TV: ???????????????????????????????????????????????
Ally: I will do most of the talking for our side your honor.
Judge Judy: Thanks, but something that Nigger just said made even me get a
little wet.
Ally: I know what you mean. My panties are just soaked. How about yours Leta.
Are you wet yet? I know your husband and sweet young son are both front row
center but it is time to launch our surprise stunt on you.
Gamble: Oh-Oh.
Ally: Your Honor, I would like to enter into evidence exhibit A. A complete
reenactment of the entire series of alleged events that occurred between my six
witnesses and Mrs. K on who's only word we are relying that she did not give
consent.
Leta: NOOOOOOO!!!
Gamble: Your honor.
Judge Judy: Consuls. Approach the bench. What game are you playing Ms McBeal?
Ally: No games. We will do an authentic recreation of the rape in full color
and detail and I can guarantee that the jury will be so turned on to watch this
little white pregnant bride get gang-raped on national television that they
will unanimously vote to set the boys loose to continue the lifelong
enslavement of the sexy bitch.
Gamble: I always loose your honor:
Judge Judy: Fuck. This has no legal merit but then these TV court cases are
fucked anyhow. I can't imagine Court TV balking at this even if it will give
the censors an overload trying to sanitize all the hot action with their little
black dots. Step back please.
DU_DU DU_DU DU_DU_DU_DU
Announcer: Judge Judy will be right back with her decision but first we look at
the poll on the street:
Idiot on the street 1: I think that bitch should get raped and that Ally McBeal
too. She has a great ass. If I was on her show then I would rape her and all
those other sexy bitches.
Idiot on the street 2: Maybe the husband and the boy want to get raped too. I
bet they will love when the Niggers rape that bitch again.
Announcer on the street: There you have it. Everyone loves a good gang-rape.
COURT TRANSCRIPTS FROM SESSION 081599. Judge Judy Presiding.
Leta. "Owww" as defendant Tyrone backhands her across the face. Mustafa catches
her and hits her again sending the half-naked white woman stumbling onto the
defense desk right in front of the astonished eyes of her family.
Tyrone. "Watch your woman, honky's." Panties are torn off as the Court TV zooms
in for any telltale wetness on Leta's part.
Tyrone. "Suck me bitch." Leta screams as Tyrone takes her by the hair and yanks
her head onto his 11 inch Nigger cock. Mustafa and Jerome grab her husband and
son and force them to their knees like proper sluts.
Tyrone. "Ahhhhhh!" Pulls shooting cock out of Leta's mouth and soaks her in
his sticky load.
Deon and Jamal mount the bitch. Deon positioning underneath the white slut and
Jamal slamming it up her ass as she faces the TV camera and salty tears of
humiliation begin to water her crybaby eyes.
Mustafa finishes pissing on the husband and goes over where sexy Ally McBeal is
waiting in just panties. Her small tits looking so yummy with their erect
little nipples. Leroy has grabbed Helen Gamble and is busy breeding the bitch
for prosecuting them.
DAMN. THE ACTION IS TOO HOT TOO KEEP UP. YOU MUST GET JUDGE JUDY: TOO HOT FOR
TV, or watch THE SWEEPS WEEK AFTER HOURS SPECIAL ADDITION OF COURT TV FOR THE
FINER DETAILS OF THIS COURT ROOM ORGY.
THE VERDICT:
Judge Judy: [wiping the last remnants of cum off her honorable face] Members of
the jury, have you reached a verdict.
Jury foreman: We have your honor. In the case of the people verse the six
accused Niggers, we find that we liked it. We further absolve them in whatever
future actions they may take against Mrs. K, Helen Gamble, Ally McBeal, or
those two arresting bitch detectives. Furthermore we will find justifiable
homicide if either Mr. K or the boy try to refuse the new arrangement for their
family. We also think Mrs. K should be locked up in several maximum security
jails for several nights to teach her the seriousness of these charges she
wrongfully brought against boys who gave her the best two fucks of her life.
Leta: NOOOOOO!
THE AUTHOR:
Hope you like Going Through The System. As anyone familiar with my work knows,
I am a bit of a fan of sequels. I like releasing my stuff raw with just one
draft to capture a primal quality of the raw lust I write from. Sequels offer
me an opportunity to refine my vision and expand on key elements. Just looking
at the above material, I would like to beef up Leta's forced confessions. I
might also like to make more fun of Johnny Cocheran so don't be surprised to
see a revised edition of this basic story. In the meantime or in-between time,
I intend to play around with other television properties in my new Erotic Crime
Story line.
For those keeping score, Any story with a Dark Desires label will be racially
suggestive and/or extremely violent. My Vanilla Series is where I do my main
stream works. I write stories about underage girls as The Depraved Canuck and I
currently have a series of dialogue based works under the Child's Nightmares
banner.
I love any and all feedback you may figure my stories warrant. You can direct
your praise or scorn to write: mkarl@hotmail.com
I am mkarl
[the depraved Canuck]
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