JR: This stuff reminds me of time travel....
too many paradoxes possible! Anyway, it is a good story
(Formula
SBF-37)
despite the end of our hero.
I hope this note finds you and yours well and prosperous this holiday season.
Regards,
Dave, 22 Dec 2004
I got so damm hot at the last scene of
Formula SBF-37
...
So, where will you go from here. to bad Chris had to die. I thought
he would come back as a toy salesman and one particular model would ejaculate
the Formula? maybe a story for you down the road. great story and
kept me on the edge, so to speak.. thanks so much and a very Merry
Christmas.
Penny, 21 Dec 2004
I liked the story
(Formula
SBF-37)
but why did the guy have to die in
the end? Far to many stories nowadays with the main character dying
atthe end.
Mr Treize, 19 Dec 2004
First off, Thank you for starting something
so great with
Master PC
.
Your other work is phenomenal too. I am finally finishing family
game night on emcsa and want to throw it open to other writers. I consider
the game to be MPCs evil little brother so I would really appreciate your
thoughts/permission. Thanks DRTY, 19 Dec 2004
JR, "whoever lusts least controls the relationship."
a quote from your
Formula SBF-37
tale. This answers why women run the world. Or would if they
lusted at least enought to take advantage of men's lust.
Homer Vargas, Writer, 18 Dec 2004
Hi, Imagine my delight when browsing through
one of my
favourite sites
,
I came upon one of my own stories! Thanks for posting it and your
kind comments. This has inspired me a full year later to start on
the long intended sequel 'Vampyre Daze'. Keep up the excellent work for
us fans and writers of mind control. Warm regards,
Yotna, author, 9 Dec 04
Hey i've always admired your
Master
PC stories
and I always told myself if I was
going to write a story I would send it to you first and see if you liked
it, see if it was worth writing etc. I want to know if anyone will read
a story like this. Thanks in advance,
Brian
M, 29 Nov 04
Hi JR, I wanted to know if
Jacqueline
Hyde
was released yet and where I could buy
it. Also, is
Ring of Desire
been made yet and has it been released, if so, where can I buy it also.
Thanks,
Duane, 21 Nov 2004
Rinky Dink gave this review of the MC Forum
regarding
Gina's
Interview
. Certainly a good M-Dom story
for those who like that genre. Lots of enslaved hot girls saying
Master and begging for sex. Always a good story framework.
Have to say Gina is an idiot for not being more careful with what she knew
going in but hey, that's how mindless sex slaves are created isn't it?
BornBlitzed gave this review on the MC Forum
regarding
Gina's
Interview
. JRParz is always fun--well,
except here at the MCF, where he sometimes has to play the role of the
Big Bad Admin. I enjoyed this stroke piece about the corruption of
a too-nosy reporter. But the analytical side of me can't help wondering
how long Mr. Darke's string of luck can continue: every time he attracts
notice, it's from someone bigger; and he can't keep hiring them all.
(For one thing, what happens when Scully goes missing, and they send Mulder
instead?) Food for thought.
As a fellow writer I can honestly say
that for every story I've read written by you I have never failed to enjoy
them and the latest story is no exception.
Gina's
Interview
was a fabulous story. Keep up the
good work!"
Vez'Roth, writer, 14 Nov 2004
JR - That was a classic gem you wrote there
(
Gina's Interview
).
Reminded me of Mareno's (sp?) illustruated comic series "Click!"
thanks-
vendatrix, writer, 14 Nov 2004
Hi, JR, I liked this (
Gina's
Interview
). I thought that some opportunities
for good old PIV sex were missed and I cannot understand why, with this
kind of power over women, our villain would not use his power to make babies
in these treats, but the story was way too much fun to complain much <g>
Cheers,
Homer
Vargas, writer, 14 Nov 2004
Regarding
Master
PC
. Absolutely brilliant, love
mind control stories i've only read two of these but i'll be reading a
hell of a lot more :) Thank you,
Jules,
5 Nov 2004
hi, i've been reading your stuff for a while
now and really like it. do you think you could send me "
cravings
"
and "
the curse of the growing boobs
"?
i don't have a membership at bestory, or a way of paying for it for that
matter. so, any help would be much appreciated. thanks,
Jerry,
30 Oct 2004
I just wanted to say that I love your website.
It's one of the best I've seen. Particularly, I love MMMmmm's works.
Anyway, I was wondering if you knew of any way of contacting him.
In one of his stories, he mentions that he would like certain scenes to
be rated, but I couldn't find any email or anything. So, if you could
help me out, I would greatly appreciate it! PS: I also really
liked your stories as well. *giggle* ~
Dawn,
26 Oct 2004
Hello Sir, A few years ago I wrote a story
that is over at http://moonscape.web1000.com/ It is titled Problems
on Maxxis. It is my first real attempt at writing. Cheyenne
helped quite a bit. I would like to know what you think of it.
And any suggestions you may have. The story is a melding of your
universe and Cheyennes. I gave you full credit for your creating
Master
PC
as that is only right. I hope that
you like the story. It is listed under the name Cutter. I do like
the Master PC Universe nice creation. Cutter, 25 Oct 2004
hey, I just discovered your site and I just
wanted to drop you a line and say that I love your stories. I especially
enjoy your
Derek Warlock stories
,
and was wondering if you plan on writing any more.
Chris,
21 Oct 2004
Man I just finished reading your story,
Alien's
Gift
. It's one of the best stories I
have ever read about mind control and aliens. There are people out their
that need to publish works like this and I think you should try to do that.
I wish that the story was longer but i can understand that you have other
things goin on. Please return and write more. You ROCK man.
Brad, 21 Oct 2004
JParz, Love your writing and
your collection of stories. I was searching the web today with Google
and the only stories that came up under
Master
PC
was this site http://www.asstr-mirror.org/files/Authors/Kaia/www/index.htm
. Didn’t see the stories on your site so I thought I would give you
a heads up.
John Bing, 17 Oct 2004
JR: Figured I'd drop you a line and see
if I can get you motivated enough to finish
Bat
Girl Goes Back to School.
.. or maybe get you
to release your rough draft on it. It's the one story I wanted to
see most from you (Besides the Dominoe sequel, but that looks like it got
squashed.) Thanks,
Brian, 12 Oct 2004
uhmmm you write a nice hot story
(Friends)
.
No , a delicious story. Where can I get some of that Heart Shaped
"stuff"? grins. but I feel real good as I read this.. thanks
for sharing your writing talent.
Penny,
6 Oct 2004
bobwhite reviewd
"Friends"
on the MC Forum on 5 Oct 2004: Friends: The main change I noticed
here was that the teacher had someone in class read the note – that ensured
everybody knew what Kristina’s outburst was about. (By the way, JR,
you spelled it “Christina” in at least one spot.) This story is as
hot as I remember. Oh – here’s a funny bit of trivia: search all
of my posts, folks, and look at my very first post. Look at that
thread that I started with my first post... and tell me how cool it is
that the story is back.
After complimenting MagicCarpet on "Donna's
Delight". Hello, JR... Things have been so busy but I just had to
make time to respond to your email. Thank you so much for your kind
comments. I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I've always
enjoyed your stories and selections that your opinion means a lot to me.
I did notice your Hall of Fame page and I thought the same thing -- 2 for
2, but I thought it would be awfully conceited of me to mention it on my
own. Since I'm now 2 for 2, I can say even though I love almost all
of your stories, I especially liked
Barbie
Teen Agent
. I know it was reworked into
the
Agency stories
which I enjoyed, I always hoped you would complete the original Barbie
story. I know it won't happen, but I wanted to let you know how much
I enjoyed it.
MagicCarpet, Writer, 28
Sep 2004
After complimenting Tj on his story, "My Four
Aces." Yeah, read a lot of your work and enjoyed it over the last
few years. Thanks for the compliments and encouragement. Please feel
free to repost the existing chapters on your site and add future chapters
as I get to them. And yes, not that you asked, the title WILL be
explained in a chapter or three. Tj, Writer, 27 Sep 2004
Mr. Man reviewed "
Jennifer's
Transformation and Twins Enslaved - Amber's Tale
"
on the MC Forum 27 Sep 2004: When it was mentioned in a story he
posted earlier, I wanted to read Twins Enslaved. Thanx JR Parz, for postin'
it now! Jennifer's Transformation is also great! I like the scent MC bit,
too.
bobwhite reviewed "
Jennifer's
Transformation
" on the MC Forum on 26 Sep
2004: Jennifer's Transformation wraps up JRParz's contributions this week
and like Twins Enslaved, this one has seemingly been expanded since its
original incarnation. Unlike Twins Enslaved, though, each and every
single one of the extra details thrown in add to the story. It was
nice to see the potential problem of having the pheromones wear off be
addressed. I liked this one a lot, and I'm glad to see it back up
at the EMCSA.
Regarding "
Jennifer's
Transformation
" hi, i like your story,
keep on the good work!! :) looking forward to your new story.
Lung, 26 Sep 2004
bobwhite reviewed
Twins
Enslaved - Amber's Tale
on the MC Forum 25
Sep 2004: Twins Enslaved, by JRParz, is a re-release of a classic.
I haven't checked it agains the copy on my hard drive, but I think this
one contains significant changes, the twins' relationship with each other
before transformation being the biggest change. Also, there seemed
to be a longer description of the story of how they lost their virginities.
Overall, things were tightened up and polished, and it was an enjoyable
read. My only complaint is that now, the twins were sexually experimenting
with each other before transformation. While that makes for a nice
read (especially if you don't mind incest), and was fairly erotic, it made
less of an impact when Derek changed them into what they became.
I think it was stronger when the twins' only real shared sexual experience
was when they tricked Mark into doing them both - I like drastic changes
in a person and having the twins already a little bi- and incest-curious
took away from it a little. Other than that, though, this is a great
story that has quite a bit more than the old one did... at least, more
than I remember the old one having... Good work, Mr. Parz!
Hello! My name is Linda, aka Mind
Mistress from http://adult.hypnoticwishes.com - I'd like to pay a Flash
programmer to make a
Master PC
interface, as fully functional as possible under the circumstances.
I would give credits to you as author, and to him as programmer, and it
would be free to use on my site. I'd link to you, and I'd assume you'd
want to link to it as well. It would bring traffic to both our sites, and
it would just be so much fun! It would include spinning 3d models.
So I'd like your permission and blessing to honor your vision by having
this program made :) We've negotiated the price already, it's a big
project, and he and I are just waiting on your approval to start it.
Hypnotically,
Mind Mistress, 25 Sep 2004
Hello again. After a long hiatus
I have begun work to continue both the Pheromones and Carolyn stories.
You were kind enough to take notice and offer encouragement at the time,
and so I thought to write to you when I returned to the EMCSA site.
First let me thank you for the prominence of your posting my Pheromones
story on your Hall of Fame list. Just two notches below "The Book"
and one notch below the well-written story "A Perfect Subject."
When I started this email, I intended to ask you which stories on EMCSA
you found particularly good over the last 4-6 months, but looking at your
Hall of Fame, I think the MC site generally does not measure up.
All the more reason to thank you for the Hall of Fame list itself.
Best regards,
Moliere,
Writer, 16 Sep 2004
Warlock Shares New Toys
by
JRParz
- it was great to see Mr. Warlock back
in action again, and having his usuall fun. Only one thing puzzles
me - what does he get out of this deal? I'm not sure, but I do like
the situation the ladies find themselves in (well, except for the one who
is in love) - the lust and obedience is present in spades, even though
the feelings toward Cal are, well, less-than-lovely. All that, and
great big boobies. I really enjoyed this one."
bobwhite, author, 16 Sep 04
Regarding
"Warlock
Shares New Toys"
- thanks for another enjoyable
episode in an enjoyable series.
Boris Ludmenkov, 3 Sep 2004
hey, i just read your series on the
master
pc
from the Overflowing Bra website and i
think it was on hell of a great story and u should come up with somemore
of them sometime.
Matt, 25 Aug 2004
That story was great
(A
Warlock's Toys)
- could you tell me 2 things...what
other stories did you write and what is your inspiration?
Brandon,
20 Aug 2004
Aloha JR; I have NOT started to write
stories ( YET ), but I do love to read them from a lot of FREE place!
I am on a very low budget every month but their are TONS of free stories
in the news groups and websites too! When i first started to read
stories the ones that got me the hottest were mind control and incest (family
style) but now I find my self covering all most any kind of sex stories
;-) I just turned 49 but look- feel- and act more like 30+ haha! I spend
a lot of time on the 'net and I suppose I should have more out side relationships
haha!! But then there are great people like you to keep me interested
in things here!
Thanks again; John,
20 Aug 2004
JR, I have enjoyed reading your stuff on occasion,
but am not sure if I ever sat down and took the time to tell you so. (I
think I did, way back in the beginning, but am at present uncertain.)
In any case, I do enjoy your stories, and have been eagerly awaiting three
of them (now four) listed on your Back Burner page, and would like to ask
that one of them, any one, be brought towards a boil sometime. :)
The three, now four to which I am referring, are, the currently shelved
Flux Chamber, the long in the wings Creature of Erotica, the recently noticed
(is it new?) Payback Potion, and the intriguing story of Wicked, Cupid's
sister. :) Mind Print sounds like an interesting story as well, and
I am sorry to hear you lost the start you had on it, I know personally
how frustrating that can be, to have a good start on a story, then lose
it to a HD crash, or even worse, to delete it yourself by accident.
In any case, please continue your progress, on which ever stories your
Muse is pushing at the moment. I shall eagerly await your next release.
Dana,
17 Aug 2004
I read your stories and have seen your website
as well. Very, very good. Many of your stories have, in some
form or another, inspired me to write. But... my writing usually
degrades into pure crap which I read only when I need a good laugh or two.
Keep up the good work!
LyzardKing, 10
Aug 2004
Regarding
"Witchcraft
for Hire"
. Hi ya. I have been waiting
sooo long for an update to this story. I really enjoyed reading it. I figured
maybe if you received some encouragement you would deliver a bit more of
Tabitha to me, pleez...
Jaime, 6 August
2004
"
To Serve
and Pleasure
" could really make a great series
of stories...
clancy, 2 August 2004
Your new story,
"To
Serve and Pleasure"
, is GREAT! Is there
going to be a sequel? Please!
TJ, 2 August
2004
Oh what a Hottie story
(To
Serve and Pleasure)
. always the question..
a sequel in mind? Will Amber open a toy store to keep all her
"horny " harem together and satisfied? maybe a house in the country
with a posh in ground pool. gates by the road. must figure out a
big income to take care of all. thanks for sharing your writing talent.
Kept me wet and made for some nice playtime today.. So with a grin,
I can say you - "mission accomplished" as for keeping your female readers
wet.. Twas a great thought out story.
Thanks.
Penny, 2 August 2004
Posted on the MC Forum on 1 August 2004:
To
Serve and Pleasure
by JR Parz was excellent.
There were a few things I thought might be errors - like the intern and
Jessica having the same last name - but the story was very hot.
Michelle,
1 August 2004
when's the next intallment of
"To
Serve and Pleasure"
due? this was very good.,
ceyears,
1 August 2004
Posted on the MC Forum on 1 August 2004:
"To
Serve and Pleasure
by JRParz is as wonderful
as I remember; it seems slightly changed but for the life of me I can't
pinpoint where. It has been a long while since I read it, though.
This one was always one of my favorites; one I missed when it was taken
from the EMCSA."
bob white, 1 August 2004
Great Story
(To
Serve and Pleasure)
!!! I have a couple on
the site as Paull52, although they are not in the same genre. Keep writing
!!!
Paul, 31 July 2004
wow. the twins story (
A
Warlock's Toys
) was great!! any chance you
could write one about twins but have the brother the one in control? taking
them and his mother. being very nasty with them :)
phill,
19 July 2004
I just read "
Lovers
Desire
". Quite amusing. I enjoyed
how for once the person who became the secret lesbians ideal lover didn't
become her slave, but instead became the boss and took complete control
over the situation. And I liked how you had him/her go back to the
shop for a few extra goodies...
Morpheus,
writer, 18 July 2004
hey man - that
"Horny
Little Valentine"
story was great - usually
i like stories with long scenes the best, but i love how yours flips from
scene to scene & juggles all those different storylines... i
have a request, though (i'm sure that you get these alot) - can you flesh
out the tammy/tommy storyline - add more scenes to it so that it is another
major storyline? i love it- so fucking hot. it works great
like it is of course - i love how it jumps form them finding the valentine
to them just getting it on - and i guess that you might loose that cool
jump if you added more scenes - but i want to see how it got started lol,
how Tammy came after him... anyway just a request, im sure that u get these
all the time lol - good work, hot story!!!!
david,
13 July 2004
hi, my names lisa i in the middle of reading
your story (
Alien's Gift
)
am just about to start on chapter 6 am hoping the next writer will be as
good as you i have to say ive never read any thing like this before its
somthing new and exciting thank you for letting me and all the other read
such i fantastic story. love,
wildpusscat,
9 July 2004
Hi, I just wanted to let you know that
I'm a big fan of your work. Anyway, I had a quick question for you.
One of your stories was the very first MCstory that I ever read.
It was about this girl who had a guy and another girl over. She hypnotized
the girl while the guy watched and then hypnotized him. It was an
amazingly hot story and I've been trying to find it, but have had no luck.
If you have time, could you please either send me a copy or link me to
it? Thank you very much, and I hope to read more of your stories
soon.
Aharon, 30 June 2004
Hello, I was wondering when will you be writing
another fan fic story - I love those. I also wanted to know if you
knew where I could find the "Star Trek" fan fics that Trent Wolf had written.
I looked everywhere I could for them. Of course if you don't mind,
and thanks for taking the time to read my letter.
Lynxx,
22 June 2004
"Kukos from a big
Master
PC
fan. I'm a huge fan of the story
concept but I notice there hasn't been any updates and I was wondering
if you were planning to add new stories to the site. Thanks for launching
a great concept. I enjoy it very much. Regards.
Matt,
7 June 2004
I am very amateur in writing right now.
In fact, for the past year the stories are about me and a man I am madly
in love with. Ours is more than a bit of forbidden relationship, which
reflects back in a lot of the stories I write about us. In a strange way
it has brought us closer together and resulted in us "being together" so
to speak. I don't really know how it all started but he is the only
man I have ever written about. My grammar is very bad I'm afraid, but I
write what I'm feeling at the time. Is it at all possible to become a professional
erotica writer? I would like to arouse him even more but don't know
really how to do it? I would like to know what pleases a man and
what he likes to read about in a case like this? Robert has told
me that I'm a good writer when I asked him. I would like to find
out what words arouse a reader even more if this is possible. I sometimes
feel I used the same words over and over too much, but don't know what
else to do? When it comes to describing about oral sex, I seem to
form a mind block! Any tips you can give me would be greatly appreciated.
Linda,
28 May 2004
First of let me just come right out and
say you have an awesome site and i greatly appreciate the diversity of
it and commend u for tipping your pen to other writers and giving readers
like me a chance to read the best erotic fiction on the net today.
I find stories of secret organizations using sexual pleasure as mind control
to be some of the most exciting. Like your tale
"The
Agency"
, and Farleven's story, "Who wants
to rule the world", and MMMM's story, "Lust", do you know where I
could find more stories in this genre? Also, i find the transformation
genre also intriguing, but i find that most lack true passion. If
you have any suggestions on where i could find hot stories in this genre
i would love it. Second, i just wanna say your stories are really
well crafted and i have greatly enjoyed your writing style. i have
dreams of becoming a writer myself but lack the courage to publish my writings
online or anywhere else, yet if you can give me any tips on how you
arrange a story and give it the true depth that you do it would really
help me get a push in the right direction. i realize you are
a very busy man and the chances of you reading this are pretty slim and
the chances of you writing back are even slimmer, but if you could find
the time answer any or all of my questions i would love it. Also,
I would like to bounce some of my story ideas off you. Your site
has inspired me greatly. if you can't find the time its OK.
thanks again for making this sight and making wonderful stories.
Just
a Fan, 2 May 2004
Hi... i really liked your
"Charmed
Ones Trilogy"
and was wondering if you had
made one of the three sisters and leo?
unaminous,
22 April 2004
Cravings
is
a story about a "genius" high school student who creates a pill that transforms
women into beautiful and sexy... sex slaves, who wind up craving the cum
of whoever they touch first. As you can guess, the theme of this story
is mind control, which is a theme common in many of JR Parz' stories. This
story is a little different however, in that it isn't your typical MC story.
I don't want to spoil the surprise for all of the readers, but I will just
tell them not to look at the summary of this story and go into it with
a preconceived notion of what it's going to be about and what's going to
happen.
I don't usually say this about BE stories,
but I feel Cravings' strongest aspect is it's pacing. At first it's a little
hard to follow because the story is made up of so many short scenes, which
switch back and forth between the characters. But after I started reading
back over the story, I felt that it was a very interesting way to pace
the story and keep the reader interested. JR Parz juggles a lot of characters
back and forth, and you really get a sense of urgency at certain points
as the scene shifts to a different character. Maybe it's just me, but I
thought that was pretty cool and original. It's kind of like a play, sort
of.
There are a lot of good breast expansion
scenes in this story, but most of them happen early in the story and then
there is not so much later. It was a little misleading and disappointing
to me. As a breast expansion fan, I was very very excited when the story
first began, because the BE scenes were so exciting and descriptive. We
are treated to a a real "show" with the female character as she is discovering
her body changes and her situation. Then as the story progressed, the emphasis
of the plot shifted and I became a little impatient and started skimming
through the story looking to see if there was more of the stuff like in
the beginning - there's a little, but the later scenes aren't nearly as
great as the first one. I know a lot of readers may fall into the same
trap as me when they read this, so I'm just warning them ahead of time.
I know there are more than a few people
out there who do not like JR Parz' stories, because so many of them contain
mind control themes. When I read this story, I can see where those people
are coming from. It does have a heavy mind control theme, and in the end
that tends to overshadow the breast expansion and body transformation elements.
I want to stress the point that I feel Parz is very different from most
other MC writers, and the reason for this is that he actually deals with
the issue of morality within his stories. This story in particular is a
prime example of how atypical of MC story JR Parz can write. Without giving
too big of a spoiler away, there is one good scene in which the characters
discuss whether or not a sex slave can actually be made to love one another.
Good stuff.
As you can understand, all of this makes
Cravings a very difficult story to review, because I know at the end of
the day there are still going to be people who get past the primary BE/transformation
scenes and feel the story is boring. I guess you just can't please all
of the readers, all of the time, but to help this matter I also think JR
Parz is a very good erotic fiction writer - a point that I've argued frequently
with people in the past. There are just a lot of great sex scenes in here
too, so even if people aren't crazy about the theme or feel there isn't
enough BE in the story, maybe they can still find something to like about
it anyway. As for me, I am pleased to have this story and I feel it adds
some much-needed diversity to our collection.
Score: 3.75/5
Reviewed by Leviathan on 21 May 2004 BE Story Club Editor
JR, you may have read it on the messageboard,
but I wanted to note my appreciation of
Hootersville
.
It was exactly what I visit the EMCSA for - a light-hearted, sexy, and
easily digestible romp. I want more! What other stories have you written
in the same fun vein?
Polecat, 23 March
2004
Posted on the MC Forum on 11 Apr 2004
.
"I haven't read
Hootersville
,
but I have read most of JR's work. He was just about one of the first MC
authors I had ever read. He is an incredibly arousing author. I'm waiting
for him to submit
The Agency: The Early Years
to the EMCSA so I can include it in my Reader's Picks."
Bankington
Posted on the MC Forum on 11 Apr 2004
.
"Has anyone else read this (
Origin of Hootersville,
USA
) and found it incredibly erotic?
I mean it was great! JR is my favorite MC author and this clearly
demonstrates why!
Cheers, Black Shadow
This was a decent story (
The
Origin of Hootersville, USA
), not really my
favorite but you are a good writer, which keeps my attention in the end.
As always, keep up the good work.
bw,
4 Apr 2004
Just wanted to let you know that as usual,
your story (
The Origin of Hootersville, USA
)
rocked. I'm glad to see that you are slowly putting your new, revised
stories back home. Please continue to keep up the great work. I'm
sure you realize you are one of the best writers on mcstories.com.
Quick question for you. That movie you've mentioned, PRETTY COOL,
is there anyway currently, that I can see it? I mean, anywhere you
can buy the video yet? I'd really like to see it. Thanks for
your time and please keep up the great work.
Most
Sincerely, Dan, 24 Mar 2004
Hi JR, I’m very flattered that you think so
highly of my story (A Perfect Subject). It was actually going to
your website and reading some stories there that made me decide to sit
down and write a MC story. Been thinking about writing a story about
one of the other men in the group and a new girl at some point as well.
Of course you can post it on your site. Thanks again for your nice
words.
Jake, 23 Mar 2004
Hey JR, in your story
Hootersville
USA
the time traveller used a device to cause
the transformations. What if another of these devices fell into the
hands of a horny guy from our times? Just another story idea.
Or would I be able to write it? Want to ask permission first.
Cam,
22 Mar 2004
Hi JR, my name is Jamie. A story with
me in it is on your website called "Sweet Home Alabama" by Andrew Mellon.
He wrote this story for me. I just wanted to let you know how much
I enjoy your work as well. You surely are one of the most talented men
on the web or anywhere. Just wanted to say "hi" and keep writing.
Kisses,
Jamie, 21 Mar 2004
"To the Famous JR Parz. I'm a fan of
your work, if it were not for your efforts, my girlfriend and I would not
have had as much fun at different times. I am writing quick and need to
be brief, but I need your advice and/or help. I am writing to you
because I would like you to be the judge...Thanks,
L,
17 Mar 2004
.
Incidentally,
I tried responding to this fan, but he had a hidden e-mail whereas I couldn't.
If he ever wants to correct this oversight on his part - then I'll respond.
Dear Sir: We are from Adulthoodwonderful.com,
a website providing valuable personal advice. We enjoying reading your
stories and think that our readers will get a lot of enjoyment out of them.
We would like to put your stories "
Awakening
New Desires" and "Beach Babes
" on our website
with an introduction about you. We hope you will give us your permission
to publish your stories on our website. It is our pleasure to read your
stories and hope others could have the opportunity as well. We are
looking forward to your reply. Thanks and regards,
Julia
Yuan Wei, 3 Mar 2004
Story subject:
SRU
Wizard VS Master PC program
. Mabye you
could write that story, i'm not all that good at writing and I find yours
to be some of the best on the net.
jesse,
24 Feb 2004
god damn!!!! u are awsome at these
stories! can u send me a link to some more of your stories?
thanks!!! by the way u really should have some kind of book written
peace!!
lb, 20 Feb 2004
Hello, Thank you for a very enjoyable web site.
I have passed many hours reading and discussing the stories and themes
with friends. The debates that followed have been fast, fractious
and very enjoyable. I look forward to your continued additions to this
bounty of erotic material..."
Delvfar, 19 Feb 2004
JR, I noticed you are looking to obtain the
La Blue Girl DVD collection and Liquid Dreams. I will be more than
happy to send them to you. That's pretty much it. Oh yeah,
keep up the writing and let me know when the
Ring
of Desire
movie gets out. I'd love to
see it. Keep up the good work and good luck in your endeavors.
JM,
4 Feb 2004
After complimenting the author of "Journal
of Jurney"...
"Thanks for the compliment.
Coming from a well established contributor such as yourself, the compliment
is even more appreciated. No doubt about it, "Mare" is having quite
a time of it.... By the way, I have enjoyed much of your writing
as well so let me return the compliment.
Abby,
27 Jan 2004
Sir, I remember reading your
"Alien
Gift"
at some point in time, but cannot seem
to find chapters 1-5 at the "Erotic Mind-Control Story Archive" site.
Can you tell me where I might find this as I am a fan of your stories.
Sam,
25 Jan 2004
"I have been writing a story line for the last
year, called, "A Little Influence, it is now 10 chapters, and it is being
posted at Simon's Erotic Mind Control Site. I was wondering if you had
read it, and if you have what you thought of it. If you wish I can
E mail the Story to you. I have been reading your stories for years
and have enjoyed the creative story lines as well as the good stuff. Hope
you read it, hope you like it".
John Sulivan Ringo, 18 Jan 2004
JR- I’ve been a fan of your stories for some
time now and just finally got around to checking out your
list
of novels with MC themes
or elements.
I have read one which probably qualifies for the list, and wanted to share
it with you so that you can check it out and see whether or not it’s worthy
of inclusion on your page. The novel is called Wizard’s First Rule
by Terry Goodkind, and is actually the first of an eight-part fantasy series.
The whole series is good, but the first installment is clearly superior
in my mind, both for the inclusion of some heavy MC elements but also due
to the generally excellent writing style and clever plot twists.
The part of the novel that makes me point it out to you is a race of leather-clad
dominatrix bitches called Mord-Sith. These women are able to steal
magic from creatures and then use it to torture them into submission.
The hero of the novel is an inexperienced warrior mage who unwittingly
gives that control to a Mord-Sith named Denna, who proceeds (over the course
of a few chapters) to dominate him quite thoroughly. By the time
his will is broken, he is a willing and dedicated slave. I won’t
spoil the rest of the plot for you in case you decide to read it, but the
section including Mord-Sith training is among the best written MC fiction
I’ve ever read in mainstream publication. Good luck finding the book
(it’s widely available in paperback at chain-store booksellers), and hopefully
you’ll enjoy it as much as I did! Please keep up the great work with
your stories and your website!
Thanks,
Iceman, Jan 18th, 2004
I was reading your novel list
and doing some research on Ray Gordon, and I discovered that he has a website
of his own.
"http://www.raygordonbooks.co.uk/"
I don't know if he sells copies of his books online (but I'm still checking).
Thought you'd be interested and incidentally, I've been using your listings
as a basis for some of my own website updates.
Terry
O'Brien, Jan 7th 2004
Hello JR, I am writing to you because I
was very intrigued by one of your stories –
Veronica
Doll Part Two.
It was exciting and somehow
funny to read it. Funny because a girl wrote you an e-mail that inspired
you to this story. And this story contains a few details that could have
been taken right from my life. I used to live as a slave with a master
for some time and while not everything was as written in your story – definitely
not the VR part ; ) – or how this girl wrote to you there are quite some
things that reminded me of the time. Now I want to spare you with
details in case you don’t want to know about it. But if you are interested
I would happily tell you about my experience. I would love to share the
memories and maybe inspire you to a new story. But only if you like to.
I hope you will write back. Best wishes,
Maya,
5 Jan 2004
Is there any way to get the
Pleasure
Dome, Barbie Secret Agent, and Suzy Spice stories?
I heard they're good tales of SW. Thanks!
X-Point,
Jan 1st, 2004
Suzy, the new female reader e-mailed me one
more time to tell me what had happened as a result of my stories...
Well J.R. a very interesting turn.
Lisa (my Secretary) came in today and said
she wanted to see me. I had her come into my office where she sat
down and said that she wanted to clear the air between us. I told
her that I did not know what "air" she was talking about. She said
that she has been thinking about me sexually since she came to work here
and
after reading almost all of your stories
she decided that if I was not offended and/or thinks she was committing
sexual harassment that she would like to be my lover with no strings attached.
Further stated that all I had to do was to ask and she would be very happy
to do "WHATEVER" I wanted of her!!
Now isn't that a turn!! Me the dominant
one. I thought that you said I would make a good sub!? I told her to let
me think about this for a while and I would let her know my decision. I
also said that if it that type relationship was not to my liking and/or
it interfered with the business I would terminate her. I can do this as
I own the business. It was making it difficult to work
because
I was so horny after the weekend of reading your stories, masturbating,
reading more, masturbating that I decided to give it a try.
I asked her to come into my office. She sat very demurely on the
chair. She asked if I was going to fire her!! I told her "no"!
I had decided to let her take the role of sub. She smiled and said I would
not be disappointed.
I had her sign a contract stating
that our sexual relationship was mutual and that she was working here with
the understanding that OUR sexual relationship was consensual! She
was elated and asked me if I was a lesbian. I told her that I really did
not know how much attraction for the same sex was fantasy or a lifestyle
for me. I know that a mans cock is a delicious wonder for me but that men
almost always treated me badly so a change might be nice. She said she
was completely lesbian and needed a dominant woman. Lisa said that she
had a large black strap-on that she would do anything I asked.
Being horny and wet {ALWAYS] I had her lock
the door to my office. I told her to take off all of her clothes. She did
so almost quicker then possible. Now she said to make her fantasy come
true, she wanted to see my body. I took my clothes off. She stared to come
towards me but I stopped her. Partly because I was not too sure what to
do to her myself. If you are going to be my sub then I want you to make
love to my pussy, NOW! I sat in my chair, she came over and pushed my legs
apart and started to rub my thighs. She said I was already dripping juices.
She then commenced to lick me to 3 orgasms. I had to stuff my hand into
my mouth so I would not be heard in the Lab. Afterwards she tried to fist
me!!! It hurt too much and I was satiated already. I told her to go clean
up and get back to work!! She said that she was going to love being my
[our first use of the words “SLAVE”]. I got dressed, straightened myself
and went out to lunch to think! More to cum, I HOPE!
Suzy, 15 Dec 2003
Suzy, a new female reader responded to some
of my questions after responding to her fanmail...
JR Parz: Well, I guess its safe to
say that you enjoyed my story then, huh? <g>
Suzy: VERY MUCH SO!
JR Parz: Incidentally, the 2nd part
of that story, which was written by me... involved some female-female seduction.
Be honest, dear... did any of those parts elicit a 'wet' response from
you as well? :-)
Suzy: GOD YES...I WAS TOUCHING MY
PUSSY AND IT WAS VERY, VERY WET!
JR Parz: I've been told by several
heterosexual females that I'm able to get them 'wet' from reading those
scenes, and I'm wondering if you are among them.
Suzy: I HAVE ALWAYS HAD A FANTASY
ABOUT BEING WITH A WOMAN. I HAVE A SECRETARY WORKING FOR ME THAT
IS MAKING HOT TALK TO ME. SHE IS An "OUT" LESBIAN. SHE IS ALSO VERY
BEAUTIFUL WITH A TO DIE FOR BODY! MAYBE......??
JR Parz: I can't take credit for
the 1st part of "I Can Handle It", which I thought was very HOT - but I
do carry that author's work on my website as well. He goes by the
name of Mmmm... Anyway, I wrote the 2nd part as a tribute to his
incredible work.
Suzy: YOU WRITE WITH AN EDUCATED
USE OF THE WORDS! HOW IS IT THAT YOU WANT TO TURN WOMEN ON
WITH THEM. DO YOU HAVE A SIG. OTHER?
JR Parz: As you can tell (noted on
the main page of my website)... that my objective is to arouse my readers
so I'm happy to see by your comments that I have succeeded. :-)
Suzy: IN EVERY WAY.........IF I DID
NOT HAVE TO GET TO THE OFFICE I WOULD BE SLIDING UP & DOWN ON THAT
WONDERFUL DILDO..LOL
JR Parz: Anyway, go ahead and read
the rest of my stories... (On my JR Parz Stories page) and I'll garuntee
that you will have many more nights of PLEASURE... it's just too bad that
you won't have a lovely girl or a guy around to help you REAP the benefits.
<g>
Suzy: OH BUT I DO HAVE SOMEONE TO
SATISFY WHEN THE NEED IS TOO GREAT!! HOPE YOU ARE NOT A PRUDE, BUT IT IS
MY DOG "ALLEY". A VERY LARGE GERMAN SHEPARD. WHEN I GET OVER THE LINE IN
NEED, ALL I HAVE TO DO IS GET NAKED, LIE FACE DOWN ON THE OTTOMAN AND HE
WILL DO THE REST!! IF THAT DOEN'T SHOCK YOU, YOUR PROSE IS ENTICING
ME TO LET "LISA" MY SECRETARY GET TO KNOW ME BETTER.....!! I AM SO HOT
RIGHT NOW AND DON'T HAVE TIME FOR EITHER THE DILDO OR ALLEY. I NEED TO
GET TO THE OFFICE SO I WILL SIGN OFF FOR NOW, BUT THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR
HELPING ME SEE THAT THERE ARE OTHERS WHOM I CAN BE ATTRACTED TO! WET KISSES...SUZY,
12 Dec 2003
P.S. CAN YOU DIRECT MY READING TO SPECIFIC
STORIES THAT, AS YOU, KNOWING MY SEXUAL PROCIVITIES WOULD LIKE?
Mr. Parz, After great appreciation of your
Master
PC stories and others
, I've taken an attempt
at fashioning one myself -- hopefully different enough to make it worthwhile.
Thanks for your time, and your wonderful stories".
Abe
Froman, 12 Dec 2003
My friend sent me the 1st part of
"I
Can Handle This" and I looked up your sequel
.
You asked how I enjoyed it, well lets see...my panties are very wet just
from thinking about what I did while I read both parts. I got sooo
horney that I started to rub my cunt the night before last while reading
the first part that I got out this huge dildo that my ex husband bought
for me a long time ago. I had to dust it off - LOL. I was sitting
on my little bullet vibrator while reading. I got so wet I needed
to remove my panties and put some plastic on the computer chair so it would
not get soaked!! The dildo has a suction cup. I licked the
base and stuck it to the chair. I am only 5'3", 105 lbs. so this
dildo looked as if it would split me in half. But I needed to be
fucked. I got out the astro glide and coated it completely. All the
while trying to continue reading. I slipped around on it a bit and
the started to sit more heavily on it. By the time I was through
with the first part I had most of that dildo up my cunt and happily sliding
up & down it. I must have cum 5 times. I was exhausted
and fell into bed! When I got home from work last night I knew what
I was going to be sitting on all evening!! Fired up the computer
and started to read the sequel. Yup, you knew it, I spent 2 hours
fucking that dildo and could hardly sit at work today. PLEASE, PLEASE
send me more stories or where I can read more? Thank you sincerely
JRPARZ.....
Suzy, 11 Dec 2003
I am interested in finding out what happened
to Russ Martin, the person who wrote "Rhea", "The Desecration of Susan
Browning", "The Devil and Lisa Black", "The Possession of Jessica Young"...
I have read some of your stories and I find them very interesting... very
interesting indeed. The writings in general has me captivated.
I have found myself reading thru all of them. Do all men really hold
this fascination for women to do each other? I have no problem
with occasionally being submissive to the man, but all the girl on girl,
not into it Are any of the stories just guy on girl?"
Barbara,
2 December 2003
"
Master PC
is a masterpiece! I'm glad you published the second part. I've had
the first part for some time and had been looking for the second part everywhere.
I truly enjoyed every word".
Ed, 30
November 2003
Hi: In going through my collection of
stories, I came across this: "
Wish Craft,
Part One
" I only seem to have part one
and I don't see it on your site. I have a vague memory of once reading
all of it. Your work is very good. And is in English.
I sometimes find I have to edit some of the stories I find before I can
stand to read them, but not yours. Can you tell me where to find it?"Thanks,
Ira,
14 Nov 2003
JR, A very well written (in my humble opinion)
Part
2 of LOIS & CLARK: AMITION
. You
did an outstanding job of showing the girl's side of the story - how their
emotions are changed and how they feel about it. I was a bit disappointed
that he didn't enslave the blond, but then I remembered that you set it
up that he preferred redheads and brunettes. I was also VERY pleased
that you explained how AMBITION worked (chemically). I also thoroughly
enjoyed your re-write of The Sex Genie. I thought that you had done
an outstanding job the first time, but the re-write was much hotter!
Thanks for the great job. Looking forward to reading more of my favorite
author in the near future.
jdw, my former proofreader, 27 October
2003
"I enjoyed
part
two of LOIS & CLARK: AMBITION
very much,
and highly anticipate part three. I like the idea of Jack binding Barbara
permanently, but not having her retire as Batgirl. Tara could become
her playmate. Keep up the good work,
Fast
Frank, 24 October 2003
Hi JR, Hey, this was a nice surprise.
Just giving
LOIS & CLARK: AMBITION, Part
2
a first read through and WOW! What
an erotic piece of work. You picked right up where I left off with
a very smooth transition. Man, I love the way you write your mc scenes.
I really liked the scene with Tara, showing up expecting a job in return
for sex and then having to bend over for Jack. I liked when she resisted
at first, insisting that he knew she didn't like to give head and then
two seconds later she's on her knees! Great scenes with Lois and
her trying to get over Jack, waking up horny, and how she goes out to get
laid and finds out she isn't horny for anyone but Jack. All the scenes
are well done! The only thing I was disappointed in was no sign of Barbara
Gordon. By all means, please continue!!! I really love the direction
you took the story in. I could never have come up with these sexy
concepts. I'm just aching to see what you have in mind for Barbara.
JR, thanks again... you don't know how much of a thrill it is to read this!
Thanks for the hot, hot story!"
Trent
Wolf, writer, 23 October 2003
JR, Great to see you're still writing fiction
for the masses while honing your skills as a professional. I think
I've told you on more than one occasion that I've found your works to be
among the best available free or for pay. I've been busy running
gynomorph.com running over the past months and finally had time to see
what was new on your page. Imagine my surprise to find out information
on the Hazing along with two new rewrites including one of my favorite
JRParz stories
(Sex Genie)
.
I can't wait to see what you changed, but that is for another email at
a later date. I was wondering if you had any additional information
about "The Hazing". The Hazing sounds like a film that hits all of
my buttons as a horror fan. Too bad I live in Texas or I would most
certainly be there on Oct 30th for the screening. I was curious if Rolfe
Kanefsky's films are mainly straight to video productions and if this film
will see the light of day past the screening? I REALLY want to see
this film, ever since I fist saw Evil Dead I've been hooked on this genre.
The synopsis and little scene information posted on your what's new page
sent me into a frenzy. This sounds like a great project.
JM,
18 October 2003
Hey there, I just read your revised
Beach
Babes
story on the EMCSA. Nice work.
Regards, Aaron,
12 October 2003
I just finished Chapter 3 of
"Witchcraft
for hire"
. As usual you have written
a very hot tale. Hope chapter 4 is not far down the road. Good
Luck in all endeavors."
M.E. Smyth, 12 October
2003
I loved
"Horny
Little Valentine!"
I was rather the
geek boy when I was young; and the anti-social unforgiving one now.
Liked that Darleen was happy. Great story. Are there additional
chapters? Give me a link if so, please... Thanks for sharing
your composition."
Spiro, 11 October 2003
Hello JR. I write at the emcsa under
the name of, "Explicit" and it is funny that you posted the story of,
"Beach
Babes"
this week. I was trying to remember
Monday what story had two beach bunnys being turned by a card. I
remembered Boris's, "May I Show You Something" but I couldn't remember
who did the beach story. I tried and tried to find it through the
search engine that you made but of course I could not because you removed
your stories from the archive. If only I had checked your stories!*S*
So, I emailed Boris and then I realized who wrote it. So I reread
the story this week and now I realize that on Saturday you have rewritten
the story. Heck of a coincidence isn't it? I was hoping that
you could email me the original because I was curious about what you changed
in the story? Is that possible? What made you so unhappy about
your stories that you removed your stories from the EMSCA? I remember
that you said you didn't like your writing style but what specicifally?
I have always enjoyed your stories and it seems that you have indeed changed
your style of writing lately but I am not so sure that it was for the good.
I read, "The Book" and then I stumbled onto your site and then I found
the EMCSA through you and I have been reading ever since. Thanks
for doing what you do for the community and if there is ever anything that
I can do for you please let me know. Sincerely,
Explicit!,
writer, 11 October 2003
Dear JR. . .. grrrreetings! First, let
me say that I am REALLY glad to see you writing still - I was worried (purely
selfishly) when I read you were working on your script (and I do hope that
works for you - way cool. Told you it was selfish). Anyway...
again, thanks for writing. I do enjoy your stuff a great deal. warm
furries."
Tigger, Writer, 6 October 2003
I checked out
"Cassandra
- Vampiress"
after seeing your post on message
board. It was great. Really erotic and well done. I sat
there for three hours and read the whole thing in one sitting. I
saw you were setting up a sequel with Theresa. Would actually like
to also see story about the following year with Britney being Mandy's sex
partner, that sounds really fun. Anyhow, excellent story. p.s.
Do you think you could allow Beach Babes at least to be reposted on EMCSA?
It was one of the best stories on the site."
Rinky
Dink, Writer, 4 October 2003
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